SAAL SOOKHAA BARHAA HAI..... "MohanN"

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Friends I am resubmitting this poem as I have considerably changed it  to make it better, I have also written an another poem which I will be next posting. Both these poems are concerning dangers of the changing environment.  

SAAL SOOKHAA BARHHAA HAI

Yeh saal sookhhaa sookhhaa barhhaa hai…
             Kisan kaa rang urhhaa urhhaa parhhaa hai!

Mendak bechhaare tar.traa rahein hain…
      Unh se khuda kaa koi jhagrhhaa jhagrhhaa hai!

Galee ke sab hee nal, sookhey parhhey hain…  
                  Har nal pe jamghat jamghat barhhaa hai!

Bashar tu.tu main.main kyun kartey hain…
        Gharhaa line mein chup.chup saa garhhaa hai!

Gar sab mil.kar aansoo hee bahaa dein…
                    Boond boond mil.kar talaab bharaa hai!

Lo paani bhi boond boond hee hai tapkaa,
              Nal ke taley, matkey pe matkaa dharaa hai!

Kyaa khuda ne nizaam badlaa hai MohanN,
 Wohii jaaney koi thaa jo abb bigrhhaa bigrhhaa hai!!                                                                                                                                            

Surindar. N                       "MohanN"

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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2015, 05:37:53 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2015, 01:28:53 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2015, 01:34:18 PM »
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Friends I am resubmitting this poem as I have considerably changed it  to make it better, I have also written an another poem which I will be next posting. Both these poems are concerning dangers of the changing environment. 

SAAL SOOKHAA BARHHAA HAI

Yeh saal sookhhaa sookhhaa barhhaa hai…
             Kisan kaa rang urhhaa urhhaa parhhaa hai!

Mendak bechhaare tar.traa rahein hain…
      Unh se khuda kaa koi jhagrhhaa jhagrhhaa hai!

Galee ke sab hee nal, sookhey parhhey hain… 
                  Har nal pe jamghat jamghat barhhaa hai!

Bashar tu.tu main.main kyun kartey hain…
        Gharhaa line mein chup.chup saa garhhaa hai!

Gar sab mil.kar aansoo hee bahaa dein…
                    Boond boond mil.kar talaab bharaa hai!

Lo paani bhi boond boond hee hai tapkaa,
              Nal ke taley, matkey pe matkaa dharaa hai!

Kyaa khuda ne nizaam badlaa hai MohanN,
   Wohee jaaney ke abb kyaa bigrhhaa bigrhhaa hai!!

Surindar. N                       "MohanN"

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Friends I am resubmitting this poem as I have considerably changed it  to make it better, I have also written an another poem which I will be next posting. Both these poems are concerning dangers of the changing environment. 

SAAL SOOKHAA BARHHAA HAI

Yeh saal sookhhaa sookhhaa barhhaa hai…
             Kisan kaa rang urhhaa urhhaa parhhaa hai!

Mendak bechhaare tar.traa rahein hain…
      Unh se khuda kaa koi jhagrhhaa jhagrhhaa hai!

Galee ke sab hee nal, sookhey parhhey hain… 
                  Har nal pe jamghat jamghat barhhaa hai!

Bashar tu.tu main.main kyun kartey hain…
        Gharhaa line mein chup.chup saa garhhaa hai!

Gar sab mil.kar aansoo hee bahaa dein…
                    Boond boond mil.kar talaab bharaa hai!

Lo paani bhi boond boond hee hai tapkaa,
              Nal ke taley, matkey pe matkaa dharaa hai!

Kyaa khuda ne nizaam badlaa hai MohanN,
 Wohii jaaney koi thaa jo abb bigrhhaa bigrhhaa hai!!                                                                                                                                             

Surindar. N                       "MohanN"

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