saansen

by gulzargul on February 04, 2009, 06:36:07 AM
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ji raha tha main chohti chohti saanson main
ik zara jo lambi saans li to toot gayi
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2009, 08:57:10 AM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on February 04, 2009, 06:36:07 AM
ji raha tha main chohti chohti saanson main
ik zara jo lambi saans li to toot gayi

Waah Waah, Kya Ashaar Hain, Gulzar Ji.
Bohat Achche, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2009, 09:21:14 AM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on February 04, 2009, 06:36:07 AM
ji raha tha main chohti chohti saanson main
ik zara jo lambi saans li to toot gayi
Bahoot achi shuruat gulzar ji...Mai or padna chahti thi!!!!!


Sanso ki dore tut hi gayi thi,
Tere chod jane se,
Lambi sanse bhar kar bhi mai,
Jod na payi unko,

Bikhre sare lamho ko,
Pyar se sametna ka,
Fariyade mai karti thi,
Ek tere laut ane ka!
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2009, 09:58:57 AM »
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bahoot khoob..Gujzaar ji & salma ji.
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2009, 10:47:11 AM »
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Good lines Gulzar Ji,

Jab tak na ki mohabbat ke badle mohabbat ki chah
Har rishta bandha raha mujhse,
Ek khwish jo batayi dil ki sabko sabne mooh mod
liya mujhse...

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2009, 11:12:07 AM »
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Nice One Salam Ji,.
And Shally Sis,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2009, 11:36:07 AM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on February 04, 2009, 06:36:07 AM
ji raha tha main chohti chohti saanson main
ik zara jo lambi saans li to toot gayi

Bahoth acha sher hai gulzar sahab !! Waqi-a-me maza agaya bhai !!
allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2009, 11:36:35 AM »
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bahoth ache shally aur salma !!

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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2009, 11:37:32 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 04, 2009, 11:12:07 AM
Nice One Salam Ji,.
And Shally Sis,.

Shukriya Azeem,

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2009, 11:38:07 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 11:36:35 AM
bahoth ache shally aur salma !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2009, 11:41:45 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 04, 2009, 10:47:11 AM
Good lines Gulzar Ji,

Jab tak na ki mohabbat ke badle mohabbat ki chah
Har rishta bandha raha mujhse,
Ek khwish jo batayi dil ki sabko sabne mooh mod
liya mujhse...

Shally.

Subhan allah bahoth umda baath kahi hai ashar me shally ji !! Bahoth dard paida ho raha shayari me apki !! Allah apko khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2009, 12:01:48 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 04, 2009, 11:41:45 AM
Subhan allah bahoth umda baath kahi hai ashar me shally ji !! Bahoth dard paida ho raha shayari me apki !! Allah apko khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer Ji,

Aap u hi blessings dete rahiye,

Thanx a lotttttttt

Shally.
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«Reply #12 on: February 09, 2009, 08:37:59 AM »
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Thanks sophi ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 09, 2009, 08:40:27 AM »
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Thanks janasheen ji
Thanks Qadeer Toopchi ji!
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«Reply #14 on: February 09, 2009, 09:29:04 AM »
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nice line gulzar ji and salma ji bahut khoob

na aayi tu wapas mere bulaane par
ho gaya akela phir "tanha" tere naa aane par
na rahi tamanna ki jiyun main
tut gayi saanse bas tere jaane par.
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