Saccha afsaana ...................MKV

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Hataao jaala nafrat ka najar pyaar aayega
Tujhe manane ko, aashiq ye baar baar aayega

Subah se bhookha hai tera beta khila de jaakar
Kaisi beraham maa hai too, kab dulaar aayega

Vo jaa chukaa hai pardesh kamaane ki khaatir
Swadesh milne ko sabse kabhee kabhaar aayega

Ki gareeb ki jindgee ka saccha afsaana hai ye
Namak se khaani rotiyan naheeN  achaar aayega

Tadap tadap ke maut ka intjaar kar tu ab
‘mukesh” dil ko tere ab na karaar aayega  
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2012, 05:46:31 AM »
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 Applause Applause    bahut hee qaabile taareef peshkash hai is par dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2012, 06:30:48 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2012, 07:27:13 AM »
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Bahut hi khoooooooooooob Mukesh jee, lajawab peshkash. Dheron daad meri taraf se.
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2012, 07:47:22 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 08, 2012, 05:40:46 AM
Hataao jaala nafrat ka najar pyaar aayega
Tujhe manane ko, aashiq ye baar baar aayega

Subah se bhookha hai tera beta khila de jaakar
Kaisi beraham maa hai too, kab dulaar aayega

Vo jaa chukaa hai pardesh kamaane ki khaatir
Swadesh milne ko sabse kabhee kabhaar aayega

Ik gareeb ki jindgee ka saccha afsaana hai ye
Rotiyan namak se khaanee, nahee  achaar aayega

Tadap tadap ke maut ka intjaar kar tu ab
‘mukesh” dil ko tere ab na karaar aayega 




Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!

Mukesh Ji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash..Bahut Bahut Khoob

Khaas Taur par yeh As'haar Dil Ko Chuuta Hua..

"Ik Gareeb Ki Zindagi Ka Sacha Afsaana Hai yeh
 Rotiyan Namak Se Khaanee Nahee Achaar Aayega"

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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2012, 07:52:06 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB MKV JEE.
BAHUT SARI DAAD AUR RAU
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2012, 07:56:40 AM »
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boht umda mukesh g.... QATILANA SHAYRI

kya bakhubi har ek chez ko ek he mala mai piroya hai aapne


DHEROON DAAD OR EK RAU....
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2012, 11:17:44 AM »
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Bahut  khubsurat  peshkash  hai . MKV ji , dili mubarakbaad pesh hai.
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2012, 11:27:38 AM »
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baht khoob Mkv sahab--bahot achi kalaam kahi aapne

meri kamakli dekhie ki mujhe
pehla aur aakhri sher baaki ke aasaaron se juda se lagte hain--

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2012, 01:45:05 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2012, 02:09:51 PM »
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  Applause
 BEAUTIFUL
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 08, 2012, 05:46:31 AM
Applause Applause    bahut hee qaabile taareef peshkash hai is par dheron daad
Thanks sir
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2012, 05:42:47 PM »
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very good mkv jee
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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2012, 07:34:10 PM »
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mukesh ji bahut umda rachna likhee hai aapne.maja aaya padne mein
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2012, 03:46:53 AM »
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Quote from: BhupinderDHILLON on June 08, 2012, 06:30:48 AM
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Hausla afjai ke sliye shukriya bhupinder jee
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