Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai.. -Panna 2:Shairi - E

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: May 23, 2009, 03:16:58 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 23, 2009, 07:30:06 AM

Pooja ji kya likha hai aapne, jazbaaton ka jaise samundar umad pada ho,kitna involve hoke sachhe man se likha hai,lafz nahi kuch kahne ke lie coz ye jo bhi hai i think sirf khamosh rahke mahsus karna chahiye.aisa laga jaise ye aapne likha nahi uparvalse se,rab se hi baat kari hai.


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #16 on: May 23, 2009, 03:17:52 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 23, 2009, 07:51:34 AM

bahut bahut khoob pooja ji.excellent , Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria Madhuwesh ji!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #17 on: May 23, 2009, 03:27:15 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 23, 2009, 08:30:18 AM

Gussa apnepan ki nishaani hai vo jatate rahna
apna koi raah bhoole jo to use raasta dikhate rahna

aapse bhi to mehfil ki roshni kitne ujle aur naye rang paati hai
na sochna bhi kabhi,kabhi na mehfil se apne nagmaat jane dena

aapko haq hai sab par,aapne sabko hi hamesha apna mana "Pooja"
sab sunenge apne dil ki baat aap apne dil ki yun hi kahte rahna

insaan aur insaaniyat par hume bus itna kahna hai'
apni aakhon me har soorat me hume apna aks hai dikhai dete rahna

aakhir hum sab hi to insaan hain koi Khuda nahi jo galti na karen
dua hai yehi ki hey bhagwaan tu hamesha hume sachhi raah dete rahna

Bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne Kaash ji... ek ek shabd pyar bhari sikh deta hua aor sehanshilta sikhata hua... Last ke do line behad pasand aai....bahoot suchi...

Apki kavita parr kar jo man mai aa raha hai wo he likhne ja rahi hu...

Sabko samjh apna, apni socho main ulajh jaati hu
kaise na samjhe mere apne mujhe, soch kar tadap jaati hu

apno main bhi kuch hote hai bahoot apne khas
samjhe na jab wo to zajbaato main sisak jaati hu

hu main ek insaan aor bas sab ko insaan ke roop main dekhna chahu
yah dharam, jaat-paat ka naam sun kar dehal jaati hu

yah sab bane hai insaan ko, insaaniyat per chalane ke liye
maane jo yah dil such, bas wo he kalam se Likh jaati hu!!!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #18 on: May 23, 2009, 03:31:35 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 23, 2009, 03:14:49 PM

ek ek shabd bahoot sahi likha hai... bahoot achi kavita ki rachna ki hai Divya... Good work!!!

ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne,.. magar yah lines bahoot achi lagi...

Mana Sab ko mili Daram Ki seek alag alag hai
Fir bhi Insaaniyat ko bhulne ki Insaan ki lath hai

Ab tho sayad Khuda ko hi aana padega sabko Samjaane
Ab Insaan ko samjana Insaan k bas mea nahi hai!!

Kuch likhne ki koshish karne ja rahi hu....

her ek main khud khuda basta hai
apne apne sochne ka bas ek rasta hai

koi soche khud ke dil-deemag se
koi aoro ke piche band ankh se chalta hai

dhoondo jo khud main, to sab khud samjh jaoge
warna ajj ki dunia main kon kis ke sung chalta hai

her ek dharam sikhaye, jayadatar ek se he baatein
Phir kyun choti choti baat per, Insaan itna ladta hai

hua hai dukh bahoot to bol padi kalam yah Pooja ki
warna ajj ki dunia main, apna bhi kaha apno ko samjhta hai!!!

Thank you so so Much Pooja Di..

Bas Dil mea Jo baat thi
aaj Woh Kalam ban Utar aai

Khete rahe sab ki Hum tumare saath hai
Hone lagi sunwai ,tho kisi ne na di gawai

Waah Di kya khoob likha hai... ak ak alfaaz bahoot Umda Likha hai aapne ... bahoot khoob Pooja Di

Khuda ne tho sirf Di ak Duniyaan hame
Hum logo ne Uske alag alag desh mea baat liya

Khuda ne Sikaya nahi hame koi daram yahan
Par humne Insaan ko hi Darmo mea baat liya

Khuda ne Di Seek hame Sachai k raah mea chalne ka
Par yahan tho apna bhi apno k khilaf ho liya

Khuda ne hum neki k raah pe chalna sikaaya
par yahan tho Insaan bhi Insaan ka Dusman ho liya

Ab Khuda bhi kis kis ki sunega iss Darti pe
Jab Insaan ne Apne man marzi se Chalne ka man bana liya

Divya


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #19 on: May 23, 2009, 03:44:08 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 23, 2009, 02:00:52 PM

Thanks A Lot kaash Ji.. Sukriyaa

Clapping Smiley

Bahoot bahoot Khoob Likha hai Kaash Ji...

Subah ka Bhula bhi saam ko laut aata hai
Daram k path chalne wala kabhi samaj nahi pata hai

Beh Jaati kabhi kabhi Khoob ki daar apno ki
Sath hass Bolne wala bhi ak pal k liye Paraya ho jata hai

Kyun Dete dusro ko hum Insaaniyaat ki seek hai
Jabki khud Insaan Uss Insaaniyat ki bhasa Samaj nahi pata hai

Dil Dukta hai Mera , Kalega Paseej Utatha hai
Jab Insaan Daram k Naam par Insaan ko Tukdo mea Baat jata hai

Divya

wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Divya... bahoot achi kavita likhi hai apne,... last ki do line parr kar such main dil paseej gaya...

dhram ek patwaar hai, Insaan ko Insaan banane ke liye
is patwaar ko talwaar na banaye to acha hai

dharm banaya hai Insaan ko insaaniyat nibhwaane ke liye
is naam se dehshat na failaaye to acha hai

Insaan ne banaya dharm aor de diya bhagwaan ko hazaro he naam
in naamo ke naam per, Insaan aor Insaaniyat ko na mitaaye to acha hai...

kis kis shabd se likhe yah kalam Pooja ki jo wo log samjh jaaye
ek choti se baat per, Insaan ka dil na dukhaye to acha hai...


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deepika_divya

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #20 on: May 23, 2009, 03:58:56 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 23, 2009, 03:44:08 PM

Thanks a lot Di Thank u so Much...

Wah kya gehri baat kahi hai aapne... Kaash sab samaj paate.. sahi kya hai galt kya hai....

Darti hun Khuch kehne se mere Log bura na maan jaaye
Par kya kare "POOJA DI" aaj roke se bhi kalam mera nahi rukta hai

Bas Yehin Dua hai meri Uss Upar wale se
Sab Daram karam ka jhoot katam ho jaaye

Sirf ak hi Daram base Dilo mea hum sab k
Aur Dil mea basi har kadwahat mit jaaye

Na ho kabhi ho koi Ladai Khuda k naam par
Sab sang hase aur ak dujhe ka saath dete jaaye

Na ho behr na ho uch neech Daram k naam par
Sab Milkar ak dujhe k Dilo mea pyar basa jaaye

Ameen!


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #21 on: May 23, 2009, 04:03:03 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 23, 2009, 03:31:35 PM

bahoot khoob Divya!! bahoot acha likha likha hai apne....


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #22 on: May 23, 2009, 04:04:33 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 23, 2009, 03:58:56 PM

Ameen!!!

Dil khush kar diya Divya!!!

Bahoot khoob....


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deepika_divya

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #23 on: May 23, 2009, 04:12:07 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 23, 2009, 04:04:33 PM

Ameen!!!

Dil khush kar diya Divya!!!

Bahoot khoob....

Thank U Di... Usual Smile

Smile Now..

For U..

Na karna Udas Apna Dil meri pyari Di
Ho jayega sab teek ak Din Yahan

Yea Kalyug hai , yahan tho aisa hi hoga
Jab tak khuda Na aa jaaye yahan

Par Karna wahi Jo Sahi hai Har Dum
Chahe ho jaaye sab Tumare khilaf yahan

Ak Din Sab Samaj hi jaayege Insaaniyat
Fir se Aajayegi Khusiyon ki bahar yahan

Cheer UP Pooja Di.. Usual Smile

App Haste hue jyada ache lagte ho.....

thoda aur smile Usual Smile

Yea hui na baat!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #24 on: May 23, 2009, 05:45:00 PM »

Thank u SO SO SO MUCH Kaash Ji

Bas Khuda se Yahin Darkwasth hai.. KI Sab samaj jaaye ki Insaan se bada koi Daram koi Jaat paath nahi....

Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #25 on: May 24, 2009, 05:10:23 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 23, 2009, 07:28:05 PM

Ur welcome Sophi ji, thanks to you and Pooja ji also for apprctng my poem, n i agree wid u Sophi ji.kuch koshish nazr hai Zindagi me hum kya leke aaye kisne jana hai,han par jane par akhlakiyat hi ban sabki pehchaan jana hai, Zindagi bahot chhoti hai isme khud se bhi doori kya rakhna,paani ka bulbula to kabhi bhi phoot jana hai, Insaan banke sab aaye insaan banke hi sab rahe,insaan banke hi insaniyat ko hume yaad aana hai

Bulkul Sahi kaha aapne Kaash Ji.. Excellent!


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #26 on: May 24, 2009, 05:20:35 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 23, 2009, 04:12:07 PM

Thank U Di... Usual Smile

App Haste hue jyada ache lagte ho.....

thoda aur smile Usual Smile

Yea hui na baat!

Thank you so much Sopamesha khush raho!!hi... H


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Pooja

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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #27 on: May 24, 2009, 05:21:28 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on May 23, 2009, 05:37:24 PM

Pooja ji aur Sophi ji behad acha likha hai aapne,har poem lajawaab,behad paak aur ibadati,aisa laga hi nahi aap ne likhne ke lie likha balki aisa laga jaise aap logo ne usi rab usi khuda se baat ki jise sab kahte hain SABKA MALIK EK,i hope everyone will realise it coz ye Yoindia hi nahi sabhi k lie ek msg hai,this thrd is become a awesome n memorable n i m taking ur poems in my buk of collection wid ur names,well tahedil se mubarakbaad aur daad qubool karen

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Kaash ji!!!


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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #28 on: May 28, 2009, 06:17:55 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 22, 2009, 05:33:08 PM

Dil main bahoot dukh, dard aor gussa hai... Koshish kar rahi hu shabdo main nikal jaaye to acha hai...

Bahoot Tej ajj insaan ki raftaar hai
Shabd AJJ shabd nahi, talwaar hai

Apni baat manwane ko dekho ajj yeh insaan
Inaasinyat ke naam per kar raha kaise kaise waar hai

Beete palo ko humne ajj tak kyun sajo kar rakha
Apne ban kar, kar raha wo dil ko taar taar hai

Seene mein vishwaas uske kaise rah jaata hai
Kalam se jab kar raha, dosto per atyachaar hai

Halaat se ladte rahna hai, Zid meri hamesha se
Magar milane wali thokaro ne bhi maani kab haar hai

Na jaane kis kis khabar ko chupwaya tha usne akhbaar main
Yaha to Rooh tadap kar sisak gai, kiya wo vayvhaar hai

Yeh pahla imtehaan nahi, ankhein dekh chuki tufaan bahoot
Deemag samjh chukka, dil ke samjhne ka bas intzaar hai

Bacho ka kheil nahi hai, her baar aye tufaan ko jhail jaana
“baaki sab thik hai”kaise kah du, dil mai ajj yahi takraar hai..

Bahoot Tej ajj insaan ki raftaar hai
Shabd Ajj shabd nahi, talwaar hai………

Aapka Dard Lafzon Me Saaf Nazar aa raha Hai Pooja Ji.. Aur Yahan aapne ek ek Lafz Such Likha Hai.. Dil Ki Baat ko aur apne Dard ko Lafzon Ki Zubaan de kar Aapne Jo Succhaai Hum Sab ke saamne la Kar rakhi hai.. Waqai Kaabil-e-Tareef Hai.. Is Thread Par likhi aapki Har Rachna Apne Aap Me ek Dard aur Sandesh Liye Hue hai.. Bahut Khooooooooooooooooooooooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Shabd Ajj Shabd Nahi, Talwaar Hai..

«Reply #29 on: May 28, 2009, 06:22:00 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on May 23, 2009, 06:51:58 AM

BAHOOT KHOOB Pooja di.. Ak ak sabd ak ak baat sahi taur pe byan hui hai....

Too good..
Bas kehte hai na .....

kabhi kabhi Hum apne ANteraatma par kabu nahi pa paate...
jab apne hi apne ki baat samaj nahi paate...

Kya kahe ab. vakt raftaar se bad raha hai
Jo na chaha tha.. woh sab ho raha hai

kaise sab hasne bolne wale badal rahe hai
Daram Jaat paat k naam par vaar kar rahe hai

Kisne di hame yea seek daram k paath ki hai
Insaan Ka khud ki banai reet pe kabu nahi hai

Mana Sab ko mili Daram Ki seek alag alag hai
Fir bhi Insaaniyat ko bhulne ki Insaan ki lath hai

Ab tho sayad Khuda ko hi aana padega sabko Samjaane
Ab Insaan ko samjana Insaan k bas mea nahi hai

Divya

Divya Dear... Bahut Accha Sath diya Hai aapne Pooja ji Ka.. Lafzon Me Succhaai Ko Bakhoobi Bayan kiya Hai Dear.. Aapka Likha Har Jumla Yahan Dil Ke Dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayaan kar raha hai.. Apne Dard Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai..Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob........... Applause

Aur is Thread par Sabhi Ne Bahut Khoooooooob Likha hai.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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