sharaab.............A.B

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                         teri   lagaai   aag  ki  khabar   nahin  aati...,
                         jalaa    deti   hai   per  nazar  nahin  aati...,

                         hai   shanasaai   apni   gul.on    se   lekin...,
                         jaane    kyon   bahaar   idhar  nahin    aati...,

                         rahe    saabit   qadam   sadaaqat   pe   apne...,
                         kuch to khata hogi,  muflisi  ghar nahin aati...,

                         hain  kushaada khidkiyaa.n  ashiyaane mein apne...,
                         rahe khoob roshni, chaandni  magar  nahin  aati...,

                         kare   parhez  ' bechain ' khud  se   sharaab itna...,
                         hai   aashna   mujhse  per  idhar  nahin  aati...,
                        

                        

                        

                        

                        
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2013, 04:48:38 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2013, 04:55:06 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah kyaa kehne Adil ji... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2013, 05:47:18 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2013, 06:16:45 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!



kia baat hai janab bade dinoN baad aapki kalam se koi kalaam
aayi achcha lagaa... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar kafi khoob rahe... achchi gehrai sameti hai aapne
is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Quote from: adil bechain on March 10, 2013, 04:26:08 PM




                         rahe    saabit   qadam   sadaaqat   pe   apne...,
                         kuch to khata hogi,  muflisi  ghar nahin aati...,
                         

                         
Janab yeH sher hum par khulaa nahi aap kuch wazahat kar deN
toH meharbaani hoNgi... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
                         

                         

                         
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2013, 06:18:38 PM »
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bahut badiya Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2013, 06:25:57 PM »
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nice, khubsurat ghazal.
bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2013, 11:34:42 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 10, 2013, 04:26:08 PM



                         teri   lagaai   aag  ki  khabar   nahin  aati...,
                         jalaa    deti   hai   per  nazar  nahin  aati...,

                         hai   shanasaai   apni   gul.on    se   lekin...,
                         jaane    kyon   bahaar   idhar  nahin    aati...,

                         rahe    saabit   qadam   sadaaqat   pe   apne...,
                         kuch to khata hogi,  muflisi  ghar nahin aati...,

                         hain  kushaada khidkiyaa.n  ashiyaane mein apne...,
                         rahe khoob roshni, chaandni  magar  nahin  aati...,

                         kare   parhez  ' bechain ' khud  se   sharaab itna...,
                         hai   aashna   mujhse  per  idhar  nahin  aati...,
                         

                         

                         

                         

                         

Waah waaaaah
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2013, 05:39:17 PM »
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बहोत खूब
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2013, 09:06:01 PM »
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waah kya bat hai
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2013, 05:14:32 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 10, 2013, 04:48:38 PM
JUST EXCELLENT


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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah kyaa kehne Adil ji... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2013, 06:34:50 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 10, 2013, 06:16:45 PM
Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!



kia baat hai janab bade dinoN baad aapki kalam se koi kalaam
aayi achcha lagaa... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar kafi khoob rahe... achchi gehrai sameti hai aapne
is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   




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«Reply #14 on: April 26, 2013, 03:05:34 PM »
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very nice
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