shayar..........

by akela on November 06, 2004, 08:18:14 PM
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jindagi ne kya se kya bana diya dosto...........

na mai shayar hu..dosto....na shayri karta hu.........
ha tanhai mai, yu hi kagaj par kalam ghissa karta hu.
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2004, 09:32:06 PM »
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Wow! That is so nice akela ji. Arz hei -

ghhisthey raho kalam
dil behlaao duniya ka
salaamath rahey vo kalaam
jissey chhalkey roop muhabbeth ka
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akela
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2004, 09:44:28 PM »
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shukariya aapka beena ji aaur kya khoob likha hai aapne.

humne kaha khuda se,
phool khusiyo ke mere aangan mai bhi khilne chahiye,
par phir kaha khuda ne humse bhi
ki thu shayar hai tujhe gam hi milne chahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2004, 10:25:55 PM »
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wah!!!! bahoot khoob akela ji!!!!

Khuda se kahna Pooja ne yah kahalwaya hai
Shayar ki kalam mai har rang ka rang kayun nahi ayya hai
Shayari sirf Gumo ki hi to kitaab nahi
har rang ka noor, shayar ko kayun nahi bhijwaya hai!!!!!!!!
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akela
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2004, 11:04:12 PM »
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maan gaya aapko pooja ji

 Usual Smile kahoonga khuda se ke pooja ji ne kahlwaya hai
har rang ka noor shayar ko kyu nahi bhijwaya hai
maan ja khuda ab tho  mere ye darkhwast
ke unke ye paigaam se tho mera dil bhar aaya hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2004, 10:48:03 PM »
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wah!!! Good one Akela ji!!!

Khuda ne to har rang, sabhi ke liye banaya hai
yah hum khud hi apne rang ko chorana nahi chahty
dety hai khud ko dhokha, aor naam khuda ka lagaty hai
baraty nahi khud hi aggy, aor ek saja ki tarah jiye jaty hai!!!!
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2004, 05:27:24 AM »
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akela ji, aapkey tho kehhney kya, bahut sahi shaayari karthey ho aap. You don't just hit the nail on the head but you find a way to do it in style as well! Very nice shaayari!
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akela
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2004, 02:24:25 PM »
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shukariya aapka ,ab mai kaha kahu beena ji mai koi shayar nahi bas yu hi jo jii mi aaya kah deta hu.

auur sahi kaha pooja ji

taqdeer badal jayegi ek din
yahi sochkar jiye jaate hai,
bekhudi khud ki hai akela,
par naam khuda ka liye jaate hai.
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: November 18, 2004, 05:02:20 PM »
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Shukariyan Akela ji!!!!!

jo hua hai, use jayada kaya hoga
yahi soch kar jiye jaaty hai
isse jayada bhi koi dukh hoga
yahi soch kar her dukh ko piye jaty hai!!!!!
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2004, 02:54:09 AM »
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Pooja ji, aapka vo issey oopar vaala sher bada achchha hei. Very beautiful!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2004, 05:53:58 PM »
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Shukariya Beena ji!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: November 21, 2004, 01:08:48 PM »
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well doneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pooja...and akhele ji!!!!!! bohot ache!
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akela
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«Reply #12 on: November 22, 2004, 03:52:07 PM »
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shukariya dosto,

yu tho sabko khushiyo ki chah hoti hai,
badkismati ko yaha kaun pahchanta hai,
khusuya ho ya na ho dosto par
duniya ka har ek gam shayar jaanta hai.
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: November 22, 2004, 06:34:10 PM »
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Thanks Meena sis and Nice one Akela ji!!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #14 on: November 23, 2004, 12:42:53 AM »
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bahut khoob ji
main kya bolu
well... i'm missing you all a lot...
wish i get an hour or so to get enough time to sit n think of some cool stuff n frame..
u need some peace to do the best thing you need to do... hai na?
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