shayd sach me mohbbt krne lge the hm....

by prateekagarwal on April 25, 2013, 03:51:57 PM
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Jane kese anjani si raaho pr chlne lge the hm
jane kyu khud ko unke liye badlne lge the hm
Duniya kehti thi tera kasoor nhi h
shayd kisi ko pyar krne lgethe hm
Vese to kbi koi yad aata nhi tha
pr unhe hr pl yad krne lge the hm
Khud becheni Li unhe hr khushi dekr
shayd un pr mrne lge the hm
Yaro sb achhalgta tha tb
pr hme kya pta tha apne hi hatho se aansuo ki taqdir likhne lge the hm
Ehsas to tb hua jb dil tut gya
shayd sach me mohbbt krne lge the hm.... love9
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2013, 04:59:53 PM »
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Achha likha hai prateek..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2013, 05:29:17 PM »
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acha likha hai janab likhte raha karo
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2013, 06:38:07 PM »
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yaar very nice
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thanks friends
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2013, 08:56:20 PM »
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very good Prateek keep it up
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2013, 09:51:32 PM »
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Nice.
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2013, 12:40:10 AM »
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Very Nice compostion.
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