Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel :Shairi - E

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Smrutiyon ka prabhaav pyaas sa badhta chalaa gayaa
Aur main beete palon ko niglata chala gayaa

Kitno ke pat jhat bund phir kiye
kuch ka tar udhdaa to udhadtaa chalaa gayaa

Kab tak padi rahogi mere paaon mein
Sawaal apni bediyon se main karta chala gayaa

Na shastra na kavach kisi kaam aaye
Is rann mein ajay vahi jo gira aur girtaa chala gayaa

Saath hain to kyun na hum sukhi rahein
Prashn na thaa to chinh kyun lagtaa chalaa gayaa

Phoolon ki sej mein hi thha mere hriday ka shool
Layt'te hi mere wo ghar chalaa gayaa


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2012, 08:46:21 AM »

ati sunder hindi men ye rachnaa bahut saraahneey pryaas hai qaateel bhaai aur ham logo ke liye bahut prernaadaayak hai hardik shubhkaamnaayen aur saadhuwaad aapko


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2012, 09:14:15 AM »

Quateel Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab achche khayaal haiN aur khoob bayaani... acchhi
kavitaa kahne ka khoob prayaas raha aapka ....

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
YeH khayaal hume behad khoob laga ... is par hazaaroN
daad hazir hai ...

Na shastra na kavach kisi kaam aaye
Is rann mein ajay vahi jo gira aur girtaa chala gayaa

Achchi kalaam rahi... aakhri ashaar par thoda
gaour kar lijiyeNga... kuch adhuraa sa lag raha hai...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez....


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2012, 09:25:41 AM »

Dhanyawaad Saini bhai! Avashya prayaas aur bhi karte rahenge!!!


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2012, 09:32:16 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 19, 2012, 09:14:15 AM

Janab Parwaaz sahab,

Bahot Bahot Shukriya aapka Hausla afzayee ki aapne. Aur Islaah bhi. Agli baar se khayal rakhunga.

vaise keh yeh raha hoon ki ..'let'te hi mere wo dil mein chubh gaya'. ya wo apni manzil ko pahunch gaya.

Ek baar phir aapka shukriya ada kate hue,

Khuda Hafiz

Quateel


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2012, 10:18:36 AM »

bahut hi khoobsurat....ahmadji.....reaal deep meaning....bahut khoob...


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2012, 11:15:38 AM »

Ati uttam Kavita Ki Prastuti Shreemaan. Main Hriday Se Aapki Prashansa Karti Hoon.
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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 11:17:55 AM »

Quote from: dolly on April 19, 2012, 10:18:36 AM

bahut hi khoobsurat....ahmadji.....reaal deep meaning....bahut khoob...

Dhanyawaad Dollyji!!!


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2012, 11:19:23 AM »

Quote from: Anahita on April 19, 2012, 11:15:38 AM

Ati uttam Kavita Ki Prastuti Shreemaan. Main Hriday Se Aapki Prashansa Karti Hoon.
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Dhanyawaad Anahitaji!


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2012, 05:58:24 PM »

waahhh waaah
kya baat hai janaab
kuch aashaar itne ache h ki bas
kamaal h
bht seekh bhari aapki kavita behad pasand aai
daad daad daaad


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Re: Smrutiyon ka prabhaav.......................................................Quateel

«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2012, 07:53:03 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on April 19, 2012, 05:58:24 PM

waahhh waaah
kya baat hai janaab
kuch aashaar itne ache h ki bas
kamaal h
bht seekh bhari aapki kavita behad pasand aai
daad daad daaad

Aapka shukrguzaar hoon Sarfiraji.


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