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myheart_ursonly

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"StOrY oF a GiRl" - amit, verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com

I am telling you the story of a girl.
Beautiful, five feet three, her hairs had a curl.
She loved a guy, rest she left to fate.
She loved him a lot, and often asked for a date.

She loved him with all his heart.
She had a strong belief, no one can do them part.
She gave him her helping hand,
and asked him to hold it till the end.

She thought of the boy everyday, but
dont know why she thought he will get away.
She used to cry all alone,
through the times when no one was home.

She used to stare on his own past life,
was it really worth her strife?
She used to say i would die for you,
and he always replied i'll die for you too.

They promised each other, they would never cry.
And if one does, other will wipe them dry.
She said no matter what happens, i'd be on your side.
But promise me, LOVE, nothing u'll hide.

He said our love is so strong, that no one will dare to do us part.
And if anyone dares, i promise, i'll tear them apart!
One day she realized the distance between them made a serious effect.
And soon, like the start, nothing was perfect.

Sometimes she thought how much he speaks is true.
She wanted him to prove when he said "I LOVE YOU".
She often complaint, you dont value what you say.
He only said "I LOVE YOU", why do you feel that way?

With questions of doubt, each and everyday.
Their love was breaking. The love, which never meant to decay.
Everything will change, he promised her each coming day.
Staring at him in tears, she asked, WHY NOT TODAY?

Time went on slowly, and nothing was fine.
Doubts in her mind, kept showing their shine.
The guy was really hurt, and one day he commited suicide.
And the news next day read, a guy, 20, yesterday died.

she went into tears n said, darling i never meant this way.
And it was true, hers doubts took her most precious thing away.
Early next morning, when no one was near.
She also commited suicide, coz his death she was unable to bear.

It was not supposed to end this way with a weep.
Now they are both frozen, forever in a sleep.
She always wanted to stay with him all his life.
She was waiting for the day to be called as his wife.

But the doubts for sure, can cause a relation, death.
So dont let doubts take away your precious last breath.
The lesson i want you to learn is what they all say.
If you love sumone, just dont let them go away.

i'd like to see your comments and please do not forget to vote on my first ever story based poem. thanks.

Usual Smile


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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2005, 09:27:48 AM »

well heart
i have no words to express how good poem it is.................. it just made me cry.................... its awesome.......... wonderful creation from a wonderful chap


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2005, 09:49:57 AM »

awesome Chimpu! gr8 effort!! KEEP IT UP


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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2005, 03:35:46 PM »

wow..........heart.....its so good that it has made me to cry. :cry:

Keep writing,its really very nice.


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yogi

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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2005, 03:57:09 PM »

ro to hum dete magar dupaata nahin hai
meere paas
jabh hi pad lete alfaaz tumare aashro ludk hi jate hai


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2005, 04:25:09 PM »

hehehe.... ye to bata do very poor kisne rate kiya hai Usual Smile

bolo bolo...... nidhi ki bachchi! tere hi kaam lagte hain mujhe!

tujhe rula diya to very poor laga diya :cry: :cry: :cry:


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Arifa

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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2005, 06:38:34 PM »

it s amazing heart ji bueatiful such a nice poem

kuch daer kay liye tou mujhe esa laga kay meinkoi real story padh rahi hoon too good


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Pooja

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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2005, 07:29:59 PM »

Very Nice Poem!!!!!!!


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bobby.soni

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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2005, 08:35:00 PM »

HI Myheart

this is really nice , its nice to read the poem , ye poem padh ke mujhe kuch bitte hue dinno ki yaad aa gayi

this cant be expressed in words. so i cant give the rating to this poem , but if i hav to give fr the above options it must be excellent


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2005, 05:33:58 AM »

Quote from: "smile_deep1"

well heart
i have no words to express how good poem it is.................. it just made me cry.................... its awesome.......... wonderful creation from a wonderful chap

thnx deep! you are the first to comment!

rote nahi hai yaar :cry: :cry: :cry: waise main bhi rone lag gaya tha glasses2


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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2005, 02:13:30 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

awesome Chimpu! gr8 effort!! KEEP IT UP

thnx mansi! tu bhi likh koi story based poem..... par time bahot lag gaya tha yaar :sad: 1 ghanta lag gaya likhne mein...... rhyme lagaane mein...... aur maine ek baar bhi rhymer ya rhymezone use nai ki...... :wink:

apne dimag se glasses2


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2005, 04:48:46 PM »

cool....yaar aajkal time ni hai...college start ho gya sad5

kitna kaam 1 din mein mil gya 2 weeks ka.u keep writin ,i'll jus comment time 2 time.


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2005, 04:58:40 PM »

lol mansi..... kya baat.... school days again :lol: :lol:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2005, 10:17:40 AM »

thanks nidhi, bolly.soni, pooja, n yogi


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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2005, 08:46:32 AM »

salutes................


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