Sukun ki Talash -V/V

by veenavarsha on May 31, 2010, 07:06:24 AM
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Sukun ki Talash

chain karaar pane insaan kitni jung ladta hai
apno ko rijhane din raat wo mehnat karta hai
chahat ki chah me wo dard per dard sahta hai
dil ki pukar ko kabhi kahta to kabhi chipata rahta hai
ho jaye man ki murade puri to kismatwala hai
fir ek nai chah meki talash mai matwala hota  hai


dund payega sukun wo kabhi
pane ki chah  me jo mara mara firta hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2010, 07:33:15 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    VEENAVARSHA JI......

EK TAMANNA PURI HOTI NAHIN KI DOOSRI KI CHAH LAG JAATI HAI
INSAAN KO KABHI CHAIN MILTA HI NAHIN
ISILEYE ZINDAGI BAR "SUKAN KI TALASH" MEIN BATAKTA RAHETA HAI..
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2010, 07:43:13 AM »
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Wah wah Veena ji bahut sachai aut khoobsurti se likhi aapne,great lines by Cara ji.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2010, 05:31:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji... sach me insaan ek khwaish ke poore hote hi dusre ki talaash me lag jata hai.... sukoon kabhi mil hi nahi paata... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

saare ghumo ka kaaran chahat hi to hai,
chahke bhi milti nahi raahat hi to hai,
ek ke poore hote hi dusre ki talash shuru,
jo nahi milti wo muskuraahat hi to hai..
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 06:38:59 AM »
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Bahot khoob Veena ji,bahot sundar likha hai. Sukoon-e-dil bahot badi daulat hai. Baghair iske zindagi bemazaa hai.

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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 09:20:00 AM »
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bahut sahi farmaya cara ji aapne


chain ke liye junge ladi jati
per hath to kaha shanti aati
khayaal jo sukun ke ho to
jalti aag bhi sheetal pani ka jarna ban jati


Quote from: cara on May 31, 2010, 07:33:15 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI    VEENAVARSHA JI......

EK TAMANNA PURI HOTI NAHIN KI DOOSRI KI CHAH LAG JAATI HAI
INSAAN KO KABHI CHAIN MILTA HI NAHIN
ISILEYE ZINDAGI BAR "SUKAN KI TALASH" MEIN BATAKTA RAHETA HAI..
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2010, 09:22:39 AM »
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wah wahi aapki ne to sukun de dala
 aur man machal uta wah wahi le jana
aur dhanywaad aapko de jana


Quote from: madhuwesh on May 31, 2010, 07:43:13 AM
Wah wah Veena ji bahut sachai aut khoobsurti se likhi aapne,great lines by Cara ji.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2010, 09:29:59 AM »
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Wah ji wah
is muskurhaat ke kya kahen
lagte nahi daam fir bhi hai sabse mahange
khubsurati badaye pakka
per viswaas log to lipa poti mai kare




Quote from: klaskar on May 31, 2010, 05:31:30 PM
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji... sach me insaan ek khwaish ke poore hote hi dusre ki talaash me lag jata hai.... sukoon kabhi mil hi nahi paata... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

saare ghumo ka kaaran chahat hi to hai,
chahke bhi milti nahi raahat hi to hai,
ek ke poore hote hi dusre ki talash shuru,
jo nahi milti wo muskuraahat hi to hai..
Quote from: klaskar on May 31, 2010, 05:31:30 PM
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji... sach me insaan ek khwaish ke poore hote hi dusre ki talaash me lag jata hai.... sukoon kabhi mil hi nahi paata... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

saare ghumo ka kaaran chahat hi to hai,
chahke bhi milti nahi raahat hi to hai,
ek ke poore hote hi dusre ki talash shuru,
jo nahi milti wo muskuraahat hi to hai..
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2010, 09:41:36 AM »
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tarife khobsurat hoti hai
warna liki to kahi chipi hoti hai
sukriya riyazji

Quote from: riyaz106 on June 01, 2010, 06:38:59 AM
Bahot khoob Veena ji,bahot sundar likha hai. Sukoon-e-dil bahot badi daulat hai. Baghair iske zindagi bemazaa hai.


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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2010, 05:20:09 PM »
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shukriya Veena ji... aapne bhi khoob likha hai...!!! Applause Applause Applause

muskaan kabhi bazaaron me nahi hai bikti,
ye har kisi ke chehre pe nahi hai dikhti,
jisne arth samjha jeewan ka wahi samjhega,
ye lambe samay tak hothon pe nahi hai tikti...

Quote from: veenavarsha on June 01, 2010, 09:29:59 AM
Wah ji wah
is muskurhaat ke kya kahen
lagte nahi daam fir bhi hai sabse mahange
khubsurati badaye pakka
per viswaas log to lipa poti mai kare
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2010, 01:57:34 AM »
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bazaro me bikti to her koi kharid leta
uski jagir jamin wo kahlati
fir kaha se begano ko wo apna bna pati
mol milne per uski ho jati

marte waqt bhi muskura de
dekh muskurahat mout bhi aasaan kar de
anmol ye aur dilchasp iski kahani
iske bina jag  bejaan ho jaye bhari

likne ki kal aapme hai nyari
hum to tod jod shabdo ka karte hai bas itni si hai karstani

Quote from: klaskar on June 01, 2010, 05:20:09 PM
shukriya Veena ji... aapne bhi khoob likha hai...!!! Applause Applause Applause

muskaan kabhi bazaaron me nahi hai bikti,
ye har kisi ke chehre pe nahi hai dikhti,
jisne arth samjha jeewan ka wahi samjhega,
ye lambe samay tak hothon pe nahi hai tikti...
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2010, 09:06:22 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji... bahut hi sundar... kuch ban nahi raha mujhse kuch dino se tabhi aapke post ka reply nahi kar paaya... ab bhi shabd nahi mil rahe hain to yunhi post kar diya.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji...!!!

Quote from: veenavarsha on June 03, 2010, 01:57:34 AM
bazaro me bikti to her koi kharid leta
uski jagir jamin wo kahlati
fir kaha se begano ko wo apna bna pati
mol milne per uski ho jati

marte waqt bhi muskura de
dekh muskurahat mout bhi aasaan kar de
anmol ye aur dilchasp iski kahani
iske bina jag  bejaan ho jaye bhari

likne ki kal aapme hai nyari
hum to tod jod shabdo ka karte hai bas itni si hai karstani
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2010, 12:33:42 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 20, 2010, 09:06:22 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji... bahut hi sundar... kuch ban nahi raha mujhse kuch dino se tabhi aapke post ka reply nahi kar paaya... ab bhi shabd nahi mil rahe hain to yunhi post kar diya.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Veena ji...!!!

bante bigdate to shabdo ke khel hai
man ki awaaj in sab zamelo me fail hai
 tarif hoti bahut hi anmol hai
likhne wala to rahta hamesha kamzor hai
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2010, 12:59:29 PM »
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ACHHI RACHNA HAI AAPKI V/V-JI.....BAHUT HE BHAAV PRADHAN...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sukun ki talaash hota hai makshad har kisi insaan ka
Pane k tarah tarah k jugaad karta hai wo chain kho ke

Phir in jugado ki daud mai bhul jaata hai wo asli goal
Kohlu k bail ki tarah wo chakravyu mai ulajh nahi pata kuchh boal


Quote from: veenavarsha on May 31, 2010, 07:06:24 AM
Sukun ki Talash

chain karaar pane insaan kitni jung ladta hai
apno ko rijhane din raat wo mehnat karta hai
chahat ki chah me wo dard per dard sahta hai
dil ki pukar ko kabhi kahta to kabhi chipata rahta hai
ho jaye man ki murade puri to kismatwala hai
fir ek nai chah meki talash mai matwala hota  hai


dund payega sukun wo kabhi
pane ki chah  me jo mara mara firta hai
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