***Takdeer***

by kritika sharma on November 29, 2010, 05:14:28 AM
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Takdeer mujhe nahi main hi takdeer se humesha ladhti rahi,
wo deti rahi aanshun mujhe ..aur main uski isi gham dene ki fitrat pe hansti rahi,
Dard nahi hota wo mujhse har baar puchti rahi ...aur
Dil nahi hai seene main...jo dard ka ahsaas ho main har baar hi ye alfaaz usse  kehti rahi bas ye hi sun ke meri takdeer humesha mujhse khafa hoti rahi ..aur main ...takdeer ki isi khafaa hone ki ada pe.....har pal hansti rahi muskurati rahi happy3 love9
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2010, 07:57:47 AM »
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nice attitude kritika ji....
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2010, 08:35:07 AM »
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kriti ji-----
kya baat hai waah:)
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takdeer ke bharose hum chalte nhi
     hamare zidd ke aage uski bisaat hi kya hai!!!!
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bhot khub likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2010, 11:16:43 AM »
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thanks killbill ji nd manzil-e-ishq ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2010, 11:38:46 AM »
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Takdeer se ladna tou koi aapse seekhe Kritika-di..... Thumbs UP icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Takdeer se apni tu Jhansi-ki-rani ban ladti rahi
Dukhon ki sunaami me bhi hasti aur muskuraati rahi


Quote from: kritika sharma on November 29, 2010, 05:14:28 AM
Takdeer mujhe nahi main hi
takdeer se humesha ladhti rahi,
wo deti rahi aanshun mujhe ..
aur main uski isi gham dene
ki fitrat pe hansti rahi,
Dard nahi hota wo mujhse har baar puchti rahi ...
aur
Dil nahi hai seene main...jo dard ka ahsaas ho
main har baar hi ye alfaaz usse  kehti rahi
bas ye hi sun ke meri takdeer
humesha mujhse khafa hoti rahi ..
aur main ...
takdeer ki isi khafaa hone ki ada pe.....
har pal hansti rahi muskurati rahi happy3 love9
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2010, 12:29:51 PM »
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Aap mujhe di kyon kehti h koyal ji main aapse badhi hun ya choti ye to nahi pata but aapne mujhe sakhi ya fr kaha h to phir di ki kehne ki jaroort nahi h thanks calling me jhansi ki rani mere frs or family bhi yahi kehti hai ...!!
Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 29, 2010, 11:38:46 AM
Takdeer se ladna tou koi aapse seekhe Kritika-di..... Thumbs UP icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Takdeer se apni tu Jhansi-ki-rani ban ladti rahi
Dukhon ki sunaami me bhi hasti aur muskuraati rahi
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2010, 12:45:21 PM »
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Haan yaar ye galti tou hui hai mujhse.... icon_scratch
mein badi hu tujhse ek saal.... icon_flower
Dekha J ki R...THEEK Pehchaana hai naa..... Winking
mera pyaar Ritu aur Chinki ko..... love4 love9


Quote from: kritika sharma on November 29, 2010, 12:29:51 PM
Aap mujhe di kyon kehti h koyal ji main aapse badhi hun ya choti ye to nahi pata but aapne mujhe sakhi ya fr kaha h to phir di ki kehne ki jaroort nahi h thanks calling me jhansi ki rani mere frs or family bhi yahi kehti hai ...!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2010, 01:15:29 PM »
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ek pyara sa rista mil gaya
kriti apka naam koyal ka Di ban gaya
        lelo ye respect hai kisi ka dil se
        milti hai aisi respect badi muskil se!!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2010, 03:39:22 PM »
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 aap mujhse badhi h hmmmmmm to main aapko di kehna shuru kar dun kya..........nywy thanks for j ki r banane ke liye
Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 29, 2010, 12:45:21 PM
Haan yaar ye galti tou hui hai mujhse.... icon_scratch
mein badi hu tujhse ek saal.... icon_flower
Dekha J ki R...THEEK Pehchaana hai naa..... Winking
mera pyaar Ritu aur Chinki ko..... love4 love9
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2010, 03:41:18 PM »
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haan sahi kaha ........ek pyari si fr mil gayi mujhe koyal ji ke roop main ...humne to le v li unki respect av to deni baki h bas !
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ek pyara sa rista mil gaya
kriti apka naam koyal ka Di ban gaya
        lelo ye respect hai kisi ka dil se
        milti hai aisi respect badi muskil se!!!
*****Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile*****
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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2010, 04:23:53 PM »
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Quote from: kritika sharma on November 29, 2010, 05:14:28 AM
Takdeer mujhe nahi main hi takdeer se humesha ladhti rahi,
wo deti rahi aanshun mujhe ..aur main uski isi gham dene ki fitrat pe hansti rahi,
Dard nahi hota wo mujhse har baar puchti rahi ...aur
Dil nahi hai seene main...jo dard ka ahsaas ho main har baar hi ye alfaaz usse  kehti rahi bas ye hi sun ke meri takdeer humesha mujhse khafa hoti rahi ..aur main ...takdeer ki isi khafaa hone ki ada pe.....har pal hansti rahi muskurati rahi happy3 love9


Bahut khoob likha hai kritika ji..
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2010, 04:24:33 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

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THANX!
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«Reply #12 on: November 30, 2010, 03:41:45 AM »
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 thank u for move it in right topic .geet ji yaa its shairi e zindgi..!!.
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«Reply #13 on: November 30, 2010, 04:25:51 AM »
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