taqdeer ki kalam ne............

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 21, 2012, 08:29:28 AM
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Taqdeer ki kalam ne
likh diya jo tarana hai.
Dhun par ikhtiyar hai tumko,
magar ganaa wahi tarana hai..............

Kanton se na chudao daaman
agar gul-e-zindagi bachana hai.
Hawaon se na bach ke chalo,
Khushboo se sabko mehkana hai.
Dhun par ikhtiyar hai tumko
magar gaana wahi tarana hai..........................

Bahaarein nahin aati sau baar,
apne dil ko samjhana hai.
Jab mil jaaye apne jaisa koi
 safar samjho suhana hai.
Dhun par ikhtiyar hai tumko
magar gana wahi tarana hai....................

Dil mein jo uthati rehti hain tarangen
,ye khuda ka khajana hai.
Hoga asar zaroor duaon mein bhi
wahan haal-e-dil pahunchana hai.
Dhun par ikhtiyar hai tumko
Magar gana wahi taranaa hai ..................
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2012, 08:57:52 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2012, 08:59:32 AM »
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pankaj ji hausla afzahi aur pasand farmaane ka bahut 2 shukriya.
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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2012, 09:02:31 AM »
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bhut khub likha h
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2012, 09:28:08 AM »
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bahut sunder aur lubhaawnee peshkash suresh ji khush raho
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2012, 09:29:18 AM »
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bahut Bahut Khoooooob Sureshji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nagma hai...

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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2012, 09:35:21 AM »
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wah wah suresh ji... kya baat hai bahut hi achhi ghazal... Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2012, 01:58:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Suresh ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2012, 05:05:57 PM »
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waah waah Sangwaan sahab--
bahot khuburat aur pyara geet likha hai aapne jo saari haqeekaten kahta hai--

apne kalaamo ke shabd hume behad masoom se lagte hain--
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2012, 03:47:26 AM »
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bahut khub sureshji
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2012, 04:05:28 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2012, 08:31:47 AM »
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shukriya vinita ji.
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bhut khub likha h
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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2012, 08:32:38 AM »
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sksaini ji bahut bahut shukriya.
apna waqt dene ke liye aur hausla afzahi ke liye.
Quote from: sksaini4 on February 21, 2012, 09:28:08 AM
bahut sunder aur lubhaawnee peshkash suresh ji khush raho
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2012, 08:39:13 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya mann ji.
pasand farmaane aur waqt dene ka.
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bahut khub sureshji
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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2012, 08:40:47 AM »
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khwaish ji aapka bahut 2 shukriya.
aapki rai aur waqt dono humare liye bahut mahatvapurn hain.
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Quote from: khwaish on February 21, 2012, 09:29:18 AM
bahut Bahut Khoooooob Sureshji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nagma hai...

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