taqdeer

by ragini on January 07, 2005, 12:51:08 PM

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ragini

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duniya ka har ek shauk pala nahin jata,
sheshe ke khilono ko uchala nahin jata,
mehnat ki duaon se aasaan hoti hain rahe,
har kaam ko taqdeer pe tala nahin jata.


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nikki

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taqdeer

«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2005, 01:12:34 PM »

good one..ragini


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: taqdeer

«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2005, 02:05:31 PM »

Quote from: "ragini"

duniya ka har ek shauk pala nahin jata,
sheshe ke khilono ko uchala nahin jata,
mehnat ki duaon se aasaan hoti hain rahe,
har kaam ko taqdeer pe tala nahin jata.

Beautiful work RaginiJi,

teri her ada mein pyar Kyun hota hai pyar...
kisi ki khushi hai pyar to kisi ka gum hai pyar..


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Meena

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Re: taqdeer

«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2005, 04:30:43 PM »

Quote from: "ragini"

duniya ka har ek shauk pala nahin jata,
sheshe ke khilono ko uchala nahin jata,
mehnat ki duaon se aasaan hoti hain rahe,
har kaam ko taqdeer pe tala nahin jata.

wah wah! bohot ache!

:D


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SADIQA JAWED

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taqdeer

«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2005, 11:05:21 AM »

good yar.. too good ragini.....

"logoo nai apna hunar dikhaya bhi bhat hai
jaja kai ussai main nai manaya bhi bhat hai

kuch aisai guzrain hain yai mosam yai maah-o saal
roya hoo bhat us ko rullaya bhi bhat hai

sach poocho to piyara bhi bhat lagta hai dil ko
woh shaks k jis nai dil dukhaya bhi bhat hai

guzrai hoon faqat hijar main din aisa bhi nahi
khoya hai bhat us ko to paya bhi bhat hai

hota hi nahi aankh sai ojhal kisi lamhai
hum nai to us ko bhullaya bhi bhat hai


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ragini

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taqdeer

«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2005, 12:56:34 PM »

shukriya nikki, meena, my heart..., sadiqa
ek aur lo

gatisheel karo kadmo ko, manzil paas nahin hai,
kalchakra gatiman, kisi ka daas nahin hain,
jeewan ki har ek saans ko kar itna sarthak,
saason par palbhar ka bhi vishwaas nahin hain


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waheed_rose2004

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taqdeer

«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2005, 08:34:40 AM »

Quote from: "ragini"

wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sabhi logon ne accha likha hai........ bahot khoob

Kaun Jeetaa Hai Ki Jo Waqt Badaltaa Dekhe
Raat Khaa Jaati Hai Taaron Ko Sahar Hone Tak...............


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smile_deep1

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taqdeer

«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2005, 08:39:04 AM »

nice waheed...........

tutker sahar se pehlay hum,
tutta tara ban jayegey.
na jeet payegy raat humsay,
aur kisi ki muraad bhi kehlayengy.


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waheed_rose2004

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taqdeer

«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2005, 08:52:42 AM »

Quote from: "smile_deep1"

nice waheed...........

tutker sahar se pehlay hum,
tutta tara ban jayegey.
na jeet payegy raat humsay,
aur kisi ki muraad bhi kehlayengy.

ur welcome deep................ execellent............. nice wordings

Chahat Jin Ki Sachi Ho Woh Kab Faryad Kerte Hain
Zaban Se Kuch Nahi Kehte Diloon Main Yaad Kerte Hain.......................


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smile_deep1

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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2005, 08:58:07 AM »

thanks waheed.................

dil main woh hain,
khwabo main bhi.
ankhon main bhi,
aur hawao main bhi,
khuda ko yaad bhi karna chaye,
to woh yaad atey hain.
aur chahey bhi to faryaad karna,
hum kar nahin patey hain.


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waheed_rose2004

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taqdeer

«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2005, 09:55:06 AM »

ur welcome........... deep

very nice...............

Muqaddar se lad saku yeh meri aukaat nahi
Main who shaks hun, Khuda jiske saath nahi
Mujse dil lagane ki baat na karo
Muhobbat mere bas ki baat nahi,,,,,,...............


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smile_deep1

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taqdeer

«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2005, 10:05:15 AM »

tahnku waheed ............. and a nice words..... yaar aap bahut accha likhtey ho....

ek baar mohabbat kar ke dekho,
dilmain kisi ke utar ke dekho.
khuda bhi jhuk jayega,
ek baar muqaddar se lad ke dekho...


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waheed_rose2004

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taqdeer

«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2005, 10:12:10 AM »

Quote from: "smile_deep1"

ur welcome deep..............jabardast aap ne bhi to likha.........

suna hai haathon ki lekiron mein takdeer hua karti hai
ek roj main kisi ka naam likha bahot der tak.............


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smile_deep1

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taqdeer

«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2005, 10:19:01 AM »

shukriya waheed............... not as good as urs .....

kalam utha kar naam likhnay se,
kisi ki kabhi takdeer nahin badli.
ek baar mohabbat kar ke dekho,
lakeerey bhi badalti hain...


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waheed_rose2004

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taqdeer

«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2005, 10:59:47 AM »

ur welcome deep.....aisa nahin hai ki meri jyada acchi hai... yeh words per depend karta hai kaun sa words dil ko touch kar jaaye... :lol:

uth gaya mera aitbar mohabbat se
ab na kaho mohabbat karne ke liye
dard kuch badh jaayega us be-wafa ke yad aane se
ab na hum kabhi mohabbat ke deep jalayenge....