Tazurbe -Panna 2:Shairi - E

drpandey

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«Reply #15 on: February 01, 2010, 02:56:30 AM »

Thank you Malli Ji aapko aik Kundali (Coil)Pasand aai. Awdhi ke poet Girdhar Ji isme
siddhhast the magar ab yeh parampara labhag samapt hoti jaa rahi hai..maine isiper ek prayog kiya tha parampara ke srijan ke liye.Isme dusari line ka aadha bhag tisari line me emphasis dene ke liye ghuma diya jaata hai aur kundali ban jaati hai. Ye teachings hua karti thi.
Thanks again


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drpandey

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #16 on: February 01, 2010, 03:23:38 AM »

Quote from: riyaz106 on January 31, 2010, 01:45:32 PM

Jahan tak main samajhta hun Pandey sahab ki ye rachna Hindi-Awadhi mein hai. Jo meri samajh puri tarah nahin aai kyonke main awadhi nahi jaanta. Agar langual problem ki wajah se meri samajh mein koi poem nahi aati to iska matlab ye nahi ke main use bekaar keh dun. Awadhi bhi hamare desh ki ek bhasha hai aur uska samman karna chahiye.

Amit ji ne Pandey Sahab ki rachna ko boring kaha lekin unhone ye bataane ki takleef nahi uthai ke unhe ye boring kyon lagi aur is rachna ko padhka unki samajh mein kya aaya.

Riyaj Sahab Namaskar,
Avdhi hamari rashtrabhasha Hindi ki TADBHAV parampara hai jo Avadh Prant (around Lucknow) mein ab bhi boli jaati hai. Is bhasha mein bade kavi hue hain Ramcharitmanas jaisa mahakavya isi bhasha me likha gaya hai.Tadbhav hone ke nate ise folk-language ki shreni me rakkha jata hai. Bahut se shabd hindi urdu ke hain. Maine is rachna ke madhyam se purani parampara (tradition)ko jeevit rakhne ka ek prayas kiya hai.

Thanks


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cara

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #17 on: February 01, 2010, 05:04:22 AM »

kya baat hai drpandey ji....

AAPNE ACHHA HI LIKHA HOGA,THODA SAMAJH KE BAHAR HAI AUR KUCH NAHIN.....

EK HI MANCH MAIN RAHEKAR KIS CHEEZ KI YE LADAI HAI
DONO KA KAAM EK HAI,DONO TOH BHAI HAI
LADAI JAGDE MAIN KISNE KYA PAAYA HAI
"TAZURBE" TOH YE HAI
LADAI MAIN SABNE KUCH NA KUCH GAWAYA HAI..

KYUN EK DOOSRE SE LARDKAR AAPAS MAIN NAFRAT PAIDA KARTE HO
KYUN NA KABHI KISI VISHAY PE MILJULKAR, LIKHNE KI HASRAT KARTE HO...


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madhuwesh

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #18 on: February 01, 2010, 05:10:19 AM »

Pandey ji aap jo bhi likha hai acha likha hoga.keep writting.Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft


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drpandey

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #19 on: February 01, 2010, 02:12:13 PM »

Quote from: cara on February 01, 2010, 05:04:22 AM

Cara Ji aapne bahut achchhe tarah se kaha maine to kabhi kuchh aisa likha nahin reply padha hi hoga. Mujhe jhagda pasand hi nahin hai..kuchh dost kabhi kabhi berukhi akhtyar kar lete hain....khair
ek sher arz karta hun..aapki khid mat mein..

Berukhi yaar ki chhu gai dilko!
Kis jurm ki saja mil gai mujhko!

Thanks a lot


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drpandey

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #20 on: February 01, 2010, 02:15:12 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on February 01, 2010, 05:10:19 AM

Pandey ji aap jo bhi likha hai acha likha hoga.keep writting.Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft

Thank you Madhu Ji


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drpandey

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #21 on: February 01, 2010, 12:28:15 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on February 01, 2010, 02:27:35 PM

its indeed a very good thrd
awesome lines
i agree with u dr.pandey ji n Awadhi me isi tarah likhne se aur aayegi
well i dn too much abt it,if possible share the relevant informations abt it.
i like this pattern n language

Thank you @kaas Ji
I will certainly try such experiments in literature and poetry too.Your heart felt appreciations are warmly welcome.
Thank you once again


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #22 on: February 02, 2010, 07:55:36 AM »

Bahut Khub Dr. Pandey Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Rachana Padhane Ko Mili Thnx A Lot


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drpandey

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Re: Tazurbe

«Reply #23 on: February 02, 2010, 08:56:21 AM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 02, 2010, 07:55:36 AM

Bahut Khub Dr. Pandey Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Rachana Padhane Ko Mili Thnx A Lot

Welcome Rishi Bhai,
Aap jaise rachna ke upasakoN ke liye hi to lekhni chalane ka prayas karta hun. Ek purani parampara ke nirvahan mein aapka sahyog mila hriday agadh sneh se aapke prati vinamr ho gaya.

Hardik sneh avam dhanybaad.


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