tera intajaar hai "neel"____"Raahi"

by Rahi2001 on August 30, 2010, 11:33:47 AM
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ye kavita maine dedicated ki hai neel ji ko jo aaj hamare sath yahan nahi hai wo kahin aur kho gaii hai kisi ki galtiyon ke karan jinka yahan hona ham sab ko behad pasand hai aur mai unhen wapas bulana chahta hu agar wo wapas aa gai to mai apni mehnat ko safal maan longaaaaaaaa


aao mil jao aise ke dur ho na payen
bhale ho jayen milon ke fasle dur ho na payen

na kar gila-shikwa tu jindagi se
mai dunga itna prem tujhe ki har dard dab jayengy

mai chhin longa tanhayon ko teri
dil me chupa dunga tujhe aise,wo dhundh nahi payengy

har ghadi tujhe dunga ek ehsas naya
tere dil ki dhadakan ko ham giton me gungunayengy

nahi hai bhut najuk ye rishton ki door hamari
mil jaye ye jahan sara to bhi ise tod nahi payengy

ke lout ke aaja yahan tera intajaar hai "neel"
har "Raahi" teri raah pe phool barsayengy
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 12:50:59 PM »
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bahut khoob dost... bahut bahut khoob.... bahut achcha likha hai aapne... aur aapke ye pyaar chhoo gaya hamaare dil ko... thank you dear...!!!

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/chit-chat-general-discussion/someone-is-hurt-t56389.0.html;msg1038362#msg1038362

ye koshish humne bhi ki thi ki wo wapas aa jaayen....!!! par aayi nahi wo... shayad aapka pyar dekh k aa jayen...!!!

Thanks a lot dear...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 01:04:09 PM »
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bahut khoob dost... bahut bahut khoob.... bahut achcha likha hai aapne... aur aapke ye pyaar chhoo gaya hamaare dil ko... thank you dear...!!!

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/chit-chat-general-discussion/someone-is-hurt-t56389.0.html;msg1038362#msg1038362

ye koshish humne bhi ki thi ki wo wapas aa jaayen....!!! par aayi nahi wo... shayad aapka pyar dekh k aa jayen...!!!

Thanks a lot dear...!!!

kapil ji
ye jagah ek pariwar hai aur pariwar me aisa pyaar to hona hi chahiye

usme aap ko thanx kahne ki koi jarurat nahi hai han jab wo aajaye to unhe jaror boliyega thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx

wapas aane ke liye

aap ka
"Raahi"
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2010, 01:17:17 AM »
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ye kavita maine dedicated ki hai neel ji ko jo aaj hamare sath yahan nahi hai wo kahin aur kho gaii hai kisi ki galtiyon ke karan jinka yahan hona ham sab ko behad pasand hai aur mai unhen wapas bulana chahta hu agar wo wapas aa gai to mai apni mehnat ko safal maan longaaaaaaaa


aao mil jao aise ke dur ho na payen
bhale ho jayen milon ke fasle dur ho na payen

na kar gila-shikwa tu jindagi se
mai dunga itna prem tujhe ki har dard dab jayengy

mai chhin longa tanhayon ko teri
dil me chupa dunga tujhe aise,wo dhundh nahi payengy

har ghadi tujhe dunga ek ehsas naya
tere dil ki dhadakan ko ham giton me gungunayengy

nahi hai bhut najuk ye rishton ki door hamari
mil jaye ye jahan sara to bhi ise tod nahi payengy

ke lout ke aaja yahan tera intajaar hai "neel"
har "Raahi" teri raah pe phool barsayengy

Bahut Khoob Rahi Ji
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 03:29:59 PM »
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Neel ke naam paighaam,



Yeh thread aapke liye banaye ja rahe hai kya, baat kya hai...............

Waise ek baat bata du zati tajruba hai kuch nahi hota yeh sab karne se......sage maa baap mar jate hai auladein bhool jati hai. Koi kisi ko yaad nahi rakhta aaj phir thode bohat logh pooch rahe hai kal woh bhi nahi poochege.

Zyda seriously na le kisi baat ko aaye apne kalam share kare auro ke kalam padhe, bas waqt katne ka ek bahana hai koi zindagi nahi hai yeh net ki duniya.

Khayaal rakhe apna.

Ghayel
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