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Tere Beena Aaj Jeena Chahti Hu……..Koyal
Lo aaj mein bhee zindagi ko aazmaana chahti hu
Jo bhee ho challange sab sweekaarnaa chahti hu
Mile hain jobhi avsar unhein samajhna chahti hu
Ek baar phir se khel zindagi ka khelna chahti hu
Nasseb mai mere kya likha hai dekhna chahti hu
Haath ki eenn lakiron ko mein badalna chahti hu
Tere beena bhee mein ye jeevan jeena chahti hu
Tere wajood ko bhee mein bhool jaana chahti hu
Apne bal-bute pe naya sansaar basaana chahti hu
Khudhe aaj mein apne housale dekhana chahti hu
Rah nayee ek ab mein apne liye banana chahti hu
Lo aaj mein bhee zindagi ko aazmaana chahti hu
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2010, 10:59:25 AM » |
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koyal ji aapka ye honsla bahut aacha lga.kuch aisa hi faisla kabi khud se maine bhi kiya tha aapke sath baant rahi hu,
nirney liya kismat ne jis chhan
mujhko aur rulane ka,
maine bhi tab kiya faisla
har gam me muskrane ka....
kush rahiye.
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2010, 11:12:34 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2010, 11:20:03 AM » |
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Badi khushi huyee Poonam-di ye sunn kar ki aapne kabhi itna bada faisla liya tha aur aaj aap faqra se keh sakti hain ki aap apne faisle se bahut khush hain...... Thanks a lot Poonam-di.... Kabhi hasne ka waada kiya tha
So ab har pal muskuraati hu mein....
Geet gaane ka waada tha mera...
So ab har pal gungunaati hu mein.....
koyal ji aapka ye honsla bahut aacha lga.kuch aisa hi faisla kabi khud se maine bhi kiya tha aapke sath baant rahi hu,
nirney liya kismat ne jis chhan
mujhko aur rulane ka,
maine bhi tab kiya faisla
har gam me muskrane ka....
kush rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2010, 11:59:24 AM » |
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guddu......main to hamesha tere sath hun re....koi bhi faisla lo jo bhi karo..main sath hun re..........mmmuuuaaahhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2010, 01:38:11 PM » |
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Tere Beena Aaj Jeena Chahti Hu……..Koyal
Lo aaj mein bhee zindagi ko aazmaana chahti hu
Jo bhee ho challange sab sweekaarnaa chahti hu
Mile hain jobhi avsar unhein samajhna chahti hu
Ek baar phir se khel zindagi ka khelna chahti hu
Nasseb mai mere kya likha hai dekhna chahti hu
Haath ki eenn lakiron ko mein badalna chahti hu
Tere beena bhee mein ye jeevan jeena chahti hu
Tere wajood ko bhee mein bhool jaana chahti hu
Apne bal-bute pe naya sansaar basaana chahti hu
Khudhe aaj mein apne housale dekhana chahti hu
Rah nayee ek ab mein apne liye banana chahti hu
Lo aaj mein bhee zindagi ko aazmaana chahti hu
bhut hi badiya koyal jiiiiiiiiii iska jawab bhi aap ko sab ne acha diya hai guddddddddd sabhi ne acha likha maja aaya |
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2010, 05:37:20 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Abhi.......haan ye bhi ek sanjog hai.......same khayaal aaya hamaare deemaag mai..... Padha tumhaara post bhi.......chhan hai reeeeeee |
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2010, 06:03:49 PM » |
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Kya kahne Koyal ji. Behad khubsurat poem likhi hai aapne, bilkul naye andaaz mein. Daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2010, 06:14:12 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Geet-di.......You are absolutely right......meinne ye poem aapki poem... ."ZINDAGi ko azmaana chahti hu" se prerit ho k he likhi hai....... Asal mein pehli chaar lines tou aapke thread par pehle he likh chuki hu....... baki poem baad me likhi........ bahut peni nazar hai aapki aur zabardast yaad-daast....U R Gr8 Geet-di.......  Nice poem koyal..kuch kuch padhi padhi si lag rahi hai...  just kidding really nice n with meanings in it... 
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«Reply #14 on: November 04, 2010, 06:40:11 AM » |
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BAHUT KHUBSURAT HE...........  |
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