TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ.........

by sajid_ghayel on August 25, 2008, 07:44:55 AM
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PAT_THAR KO PUJTE THE
PAT_THAR SE CHOT KHAYEE
DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE

APNA SABKUCH LUTAYA JISPE
USNE KEEMAT MERI LAGAYEE
SARE AAM BIKI WAFA MERI
WOH BANA RAHA TAMASHAEE

DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE

MA KI LORIYO SE BHI HOTI HAIN PYARI ROTI
BHOOKE BACH_CHO KI MA SE POOCHO AAJ LORI BHI KAM NA AAYEE
INSAN TERI ZULMAT TAREEF KE HAIN KABIL
GHAYEL KE SATH SATH RONE LAGI KHUDAIEE

DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE

AISA MARNA BHI KYA HAIN MARNA
JISE DEKH MAUT BHI GABRAYEE
TUKDO ME TAKSIM HAIN YAHA LASHE
KOI SURAT PEHCHAN ME NA AAYEE

DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE

KAUN RAM KA HUA KISNE RAHIM KO HAIN SAMJA
APNE KHUDA SE SABNE KI HAIN BE_WAFAIEE
KIS KAM KE HAIN TIRTH TERE KAISA TAWAF TERA
KISI NE MANDIRO KO TODA KISI NE MASJIDE HAIN DHAYEE

DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE

TAWAF: TO GO AROUND KABA 7 TIMES ON A PILGRIMAGE IN MECCA
TIRTH: HINDU PILGRIMAGE

AB AUR NAHI JEENA TERI DUNIYA ME HUMKO YA RAB
BOHAT JEE KE HUMNE DEKHA YEH DUNIYA NA RAAS AAYEE
AUR JO GAREEB BACH GAYE BUM YA GOLI SE
UNHE BHI MAR GAYEE BADHTI MEHNGAYEE

PAT_THAR KO PUJTE THE
PAT_THAT SE CHOT KHAYEE
DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE.

                         -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2008, 08:05:36 AM »
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sajid ji bohut khoob likha aur sach bhi
good work
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2008, 08:14:56 AM »
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thanks kaushik
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2008, 10:16:24 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA SAJID JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2008, 10:19:55 AM »
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shukriya shael jee bas apna hi shagird samje is nacheeze ko
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2008, 12:15:37 PM »
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wah s.g kia bat hai good work....
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2008, 12:30:02 PM »
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Nice creation sajid_ghayel ji good work.. Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2008, 01:03:00 PM »
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THANKS GIRLS
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2008, 03:13:46 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
sajid ji behad achcha laga aapko padhkar....ek ek sher motiyon ki tarah sachcha.....aur ise pirokar aapne jo mala taiyar kee hai...samaj ke har pahloo par aapki sashkt nazron ka saboot hai..aur aapke samvedansheel man ki pahchan bhi........likhte rahiye......aapko padhkar hum bhi kuch sikhen..again superb  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 03:30:23 AM »
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Bahut acche... Wonderful creation  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 04:14:31 AM »
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yaaro lekin kal se bohat udas aap sab ko thoda hasaoo yeh soch kar kal ek kavita post ki thi pati patni par kisi ne padhii nahi shayed
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 03:55:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahoot khoob Sajid ji.. jaise ki bekarar ji ne kaha.. simple shabdo se apne bahoot he gahri baatein likhi hai. bahoot acha laga apko padna...Good creation!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2008, 10:22:05 AM »
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Applause Applause bohat kamaal ka likha hai sajid ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2008, 10:23:36 AM »
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Applause Applause bohat kamaal ka likha hai sajid ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2008, 10:26:33 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Sajid saab!!
 bahut acha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
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