thori si kami

by chitralsony on February 14, 2009, 07:23:02 PM
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shayira nida fazli ka yay kalam hay ,shayed onhon nay os kami ko mehsoos kiya aur alfaaz ki sorat daidi jo kami hum hr cheez may patay hain kay is fani dunia may koyi be cheez mukamal nahi ,hr baat ,hr kaam jo bazahir mukamal dekhti hay mager ek tashnagi reh jati hay and osi ko nida nay biyaan kiya hay


      hr nazam mukamal hoti hay
      lakin wo kaghaz say qalam pr
       jub ati hay
       thori si kami reh jati hay
       hr preet mukamal hoti hay
       lakin wo gagan say dherti pr
        jub ati hay
       thori si kami reh jati hay
       phir nazm nayi
       phir preet nayi
       phir jeet nayi behlati hay
       hr baar mager lagta hay yunhi
       thori si kami reh jati hay
                          not mine
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2009, 03:05:39 PM »
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Waah bahot khoob sharing ki hai aapne, Nida Fazli ji ki ye nazm behad umda hai
thank u kaash ji
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