Tim timati Aql .......... Abul Asad

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Tifl-e-maktab ki tim-timati aqal ki raushni thi
 Muqabla voh andhiyon se kar baitha
 
Zarra tha khaak ka voh magar
 Jawaan seenon men aag laga kar chala
 
Zarkhareed ghulam hi tha voh magar
 lakeeron me uski likha tha aik sultanat ka taqht



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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2011, 06:23:42 AM »
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Tifl-e-maktab ki tim-timati aqal ki raushni thi
 Muqabla usne to andhiyon se kar badha
 
Zarra tha khaak ka voh magar
 Jawaan seenon men aag laga kar chala
 
Zarkhareed ghulam hi tha voh magar
 lakeeron men likha tha uske sultanat ka taqht



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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2011, 06:34:43 AM »
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Adil Saheb,
Dil se mamnun aur mashkur aapka
Itni farakh dil dad ka apke

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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2011, 07:44:56 AM »
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Adil Saheb,

Kya aapne shayari kanhi se seekhi hai?

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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2011, 07:56:49 AM »
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Adil Saheb,

Kya aapne shayari kanhi se seekhi hai?

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ABUL SAHAB MUJHE MAAF KARNA AGAR MERE LIKHNE MEIN KOI KHATA HO TO,

MERA HAATH BAHUT HI TANG HAIN ISS MAIDAAN MEIN . ISS LIYE AGAR SHER-O-SHAYRI KE MOTALLIK KUCH SAWAAL KAREIN GE TO NAHIN BATAA PAAON GA MAIN.
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2011, 08:02:16 AM »
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Adil bhai,

Aap ki saaf dili aur masoom aur narm andaz ke qayel hove ham,
magar main koi urdu ke mutabiq sawal karne ke liye nahi poocha tha aapse voh
sawaal. Sirf ye ke aap ke kalaam pasand aye, aur iss tarha laga
ke aap ne shayari kanhi  se seekhi ho, so poochliya.

Mere is sawaal se koi ghalat fehmi, ya fikrmandi hovi ho
to Mazarath khwaan hoon aapse.

Dua Goo
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2011, 08:04:36 AM »
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Tifl-e-maktab ki tim-timati aqal ki raushni thi
 Muqabla usne andhiyon se kar badha
 
Zarra tha khaak ka voh magar
 Jawaan seenon men aag laga kar chala
 
Zarkhareed ghulam hi tha voh magar
 lakeeron ne uski likha aik sultanat ka taqht



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bahut khoob.............!
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2011, 08:14:36 AM »
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Adil bhai,

Aap ki saaf dili aur masoom aur narm andaz ke qayel hove ham,
magar main koi urdu ke mutabiq sawal karne ke liye nahi poocha tha aapse voh
sawaal. Sirf ye ke aap ke kalaam pasand aye, aur iss tarha laga
ke aap ne shayari kanhi  se seekhi ho, so poochliya.

Mere is sawaal se koi ghalat fehmi, ya fikrmandi hovi ho
to Mazarath khwaan hoon aapse.

Dua Goo
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       ASAD SAHAB,
         
 HAAN THODA SHUBHA TO HUA KI NA JAANE AAP KYA JAAN NA CHAHTE HAIN.
 RAHI BAAT SEEKHNE KI TO AAP KE ISS SAWAAL KO MAIN AS A COMPLIMENT KE TAUR PE LE RAHA HOON. KYON KI AAP KO PADHNE KE BAAD MUJHE AAPKI QABLIYAT PE SHAK KARNA BHI SHAYAD GUNAH HOGA.
  RAHI BAAT SHER-O- SHYRI KI TO SHAUK HAI SUNNE KA, PER URDU , ENGLISH, HINDI KISI MEIN MAHARAT NAHIN HAI HINDUSTAANI MEIN LIKH LETA HOON. PER 'BAHR' KI KOI JAANKAARI NAHIN HAI. SHER-O-SHAYRI BHI EK ART HAI JO HAR KISI KI BAAT NAHIN. MAIN TO BUSS APNE KHYAAL RAKHTA HOON .ISS SE ZYADA KUCH NAHIN..
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2011, 08:29:52 AM »
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Adil Sahab,

Aap ki guftugu mein chupi kissi ache dil ki hasti ki jhalak aati hai. Ji beshak aapko voh dad hi di thi maine.

Sher-o Shayri mein hum waqey aik tifl hi hain, shayad chand alfaaz hamare ghalati se ache darz hogaye hon, isse ham kanhi
bhi koi muqam ke shayr nahi bane. Hamara bhi yeh shauqh hi hai
likhne ka, aur fan ko sikhna aur samajhne ka. Phir bhi kabhi agar
aap koi ghalati dekhen to islah karne na jhijakiye ga.

Mehfil to aap ate hi rehte hain, rabta dil se dil ko rahega aap se
younhi muhabbaton ka silsila jari rakhiye.

Dua goo
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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2011, 08:39:23 AM »
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Abul asad saheb,Bahut achhe ashaar hain.Mubarak ho.Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2011, 09:04:34 AM »
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Hasan bhai,

Khushamdeed, aap ke chand alfaaz dil ko raushan kar gaye, kitne
purasrar hain yeh.

Shukriya bhai,
Ghalatiyon ki islah talab

Dua goo
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2012, 06:53:32 PM »
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Quote from: Abul Asad on December 15, 2011, 06:19:27 AM
Tifl-e-maktab ki tim-timati aqal ki raushni thi
 Muqabla voh andhiyon se kar baitha
 
Zarra tha khaak ka voh magar
 Jawaan seenon men aag laga kar chala
 
Zarkhareed ghulam hi tha voh magar
 lakeeron me uski likha tha aik sultanat ka taqht



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Sarfira Saheb,

Aik arse baad aap se guftagu horahi hai
Aur har baar ki tarah aap ki inayat hai mujh pe
Shukriya aap ka bahut bahut shukriya

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