Tinkoun ko rakh sambhaal key !

by abdbundeli on April 06, 2009, 02:47:37 PM
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Tinkoun ko rakh sambhaal key, mat yuun bikheyr too!
Bulbul key aashiyaan kee yaadgaar hain sabhee!!
Taqiye mein in key dafn hain wah meethee aahteyn:
Lamhey khushee key, jin ney, laakh jiye hain kabhee!!

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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2009, 02:58:01 PM »
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Jab jal gayee duniya teri ABD
Yeh tinke bhi jala de

Phut pade jinse dil ke chale
Tu woh har yaad mita de

Bohat behtar hain tu GHAYEL se
Jo uske hain, unhe apna deewana bana de
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2009, 03:02:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob uncle ji and sajid ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2009, 08:48:30 PM »
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very beautiful sher likha hai ghayel ji.
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very nice.
  madhu.lol
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2009, 09:10:00 PM »
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bahut khoob abd ji.very nice,
madhu
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2009, 09:46:57 AM »
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Bahut khob Abd Sahab  Applause Applause
Sajid sahab Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 12:12:27 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 06, 2009, 02:58:01 PM
Jab jal gayee duniya teri ABD
Yeh tinke bhi jala de

Phut pade jinse dil ke chale
Tu woh har yaad mita de

Bohat behtar hain tu GHAYEL se
Jo uske hain, unhe apna deewana bana de

Unhain khojtey-khojtey     
Kho jaatey hain log!
Yug beetey bhee, phir kahaan
Hotaa hai sanyog!!

Yatn karo laakhoun, magar,
Koun sakaa hai bhool?
Bahudhaa kumhlaatey naheen
Yaadoun key wey phool!

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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 12:15:33 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 06, 2009, 03:02:15 PM
Bahut khoob uncle ji and sajid ji
Thanks Roja!
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2009, 12:16:45 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob kaha Abd ji..... Applause

boaht khoob sajid ji... Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2009, 12:17:15 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 06, 2009, 09:10:00 PM
bahut khoob abd ji.very nice,
madhu

Thanks a lot Madhu ji!
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2009, 12:18:24 PM »
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Quote from: diya786 on April 07, 2009, 09:46:57 AM
Bahut khob Abd Sahab  Applause Applause
Sajid sahab Applause Applause

Thanks a lot diya786 ji!
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2009, 12:20:43 PM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on April 09, 2009, 12:16:45 PM
bohat bohat khoob kaha Abd ji..... Applause

boaht khoob sajid ji... Applause

Thanks a lot, Tanha(Saurabh) ji!
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2009, 12:55:54 PM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Sajid Bhai, Nice One,.
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2009, 01:03:48 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 09, 2009, 12:55:54 PM
Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya, Sajid Bhai, Nice One,.
Thanks Jaanasheen ji!
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