Toot jaaye jo dil..... "ParwaaZ"

by ParwaaZ on May 01, 2013, 09:33:17 PM
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KoyiN youN hi khud ko tabaa nahi karta
Ek woH Khuda kya se kyaa nahi karta

YeH riwayat chali aa rahi hai baba aadam se
KouN hai yahaaN jo kabhi khataa nahi karta

Mujh ko gile shikwe haiN bus apne rab se
isliye maiN khud ke liye duaa nahi karta

Kuch toH matlab hoNga uski darya dili meiN
Wagerna koi dil itna bhi Badaa nahi karta

Toot jaaye jo dil "ParwaaZ" aik martabaa
WoH phir kisi marham se judaa nahi karta
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 09:45:40 PM »
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bahut khoob..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2013, 10:03:41 PM »
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Kya baat hai parwaaz ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. sabhi ashaar khoob hai. meri dili mubarak ko qubool kare..
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2013, 10:44:39 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bohat achi ghazal parwaz ji,...

Mujh ko gile shikwe haiN bus apne rab se
isliye maiN khud ke liye duaa nahi karta

yeh sher hasil ghazalrahaa,..
bohat bohat c daad rau ke sath,.........
khush rahen
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2013, 12:01:36 AM »
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Maqta behad khoob kaha Parwaaz bhai..
aur yahee is ghazal ka sabse khoobsurat sher bhi laga mujhe..

khoobsurat kalaam..

dil mubarakbaad..
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2013, 12:13:33 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 01, 2013, 09:33:17 PM



KoyiN youN hi khud ko tabaa nahi karta
Ek woH Khuda kya se kyaa nahi karta

Astaghfirullah

Faisle to humaare aamaal pe hote hain.kuch bhi khuda pe tohmat lagaane ya bura kehne se pahle
hume khudke aamaal ko dekh lena chaahiye.
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Dukh mein tum kabhi bhi pachtaway ke aanso
na bahavo kyun kay tum wo khush naseeb ho
jisay ALLAH ne aazmayish kay qaabil samjha
hai Hazrat Ali (R.A)


YeH riwayat chali aa rahi hai baba aadam se
KouN hai yahaaN jo kabhi khataa nahi karta

Beshaq Aadmi Khata Ka Putla Hai. Par Samajhdar To Wo Hai Jo Apni Ghaltiyon se Shabaq Le Aur Tauba Karke Taqdeer Badle Na Ki Yun Khuda Se Taqraar Kare.

Mujh ko gile shikwe haiN bus apne rab se
isliye maiN khud ke liye duaa nahi karta

naa maangar aap apna hi nuksaan kar rahe hain
Kyon Ki aapke naa maangne se usko koi fark nahi parhne wala.wo to aur farmabardaar aur.Aur maangne waale  Paida Kar lega
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Dua mangte raho kyun kay mumkin aur na
mumkin to sirf hamari soch mein hai ALLAH
(S.W.T) kay liye to kuch bhi na mumkin nahi. hazrat Ali (R.A)

Kuch toH matlab hoNga uski darya dili meiN
Wagerna koi dil itna bhi Badaa nahi karta

Ye Clear Nahi Ki Insan Ke Liye Hai Ya Khuda Ke
Liye So Ispe Kuch Nahi Kahunga.

Toot jaaye jo dil "ParwaaZ" aik martabaa
WoH phir kisi marham se judaa nahi karta

yeh Achcha Kaha Hai Aapne






Yun Na Apne Dil Ko Tum Napaak Karo
Karni Hai Gar Shairi To Kufra Se Pak Karo.



ALLAH Reham Kare ...Aameen...

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2013, 01:13:13 AM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Parwaaz ji,
Bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai aapne.really beautiful.
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2013, 01:14:46 AM »
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Andaaz Bhut Khoob Hai.Beautiful.
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2013, 01:38:01 AM »
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Quote from: nashwani on May 01, 2013, 09:45:40 PM
bahut khoob..dhero daad..happy9



Nashwani Jee Aadaab..!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee, kalaam ko pasaND karne aur houNsla badhane ke liye..
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.. Aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2013, 01:44:55 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on May 01, 2013, 10:03:41 PM
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Kya baat hai parwaaz ji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. sabhi ashaar khoob hai. meri dili mubarak ko qubool kare..

Aqsh Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee, is purkhulus tareef O houNsla afzai ke liye.. Usual Smile
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2013, 01:51:49 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on May 01, 2013, 10:44:39 PM
Applause Applause Applause bohat achi ghazal parwaz ji,...

Mujh ko gile shikwe haiN bus apne rab se
isliye maiN khud ke liye duaa nahi karta

yeh sher hasil ghazalrahaa,..
bohat bohat c daad rau ke sath,.........
khush rahen

Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab..!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa jee, Kalaam ko pasaNd karne aur houNsla badhane ke liye.. Usual Smile

Aage bhi apna kimti waqt dete rahiye... Saath banaye rakhiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2013, 02:06:14 AM »
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Parwaaz saheb, mujhe bhi ye khyalaat sahi nahiN lag rahe. Khuda se gile shikwe rakhne waali baat mujhe bahut buri lagi, insaan ko har haal meiN Khuda ka shukriya adaa karna chahiye. Aap ko Hazrat Ayyub(R.A.) ka waaqya yaad rakhna chahiye unki maal daulat, bachhe, maweshi wagairah sab kuch chin gaye thay phir bhi unhoN ne Khuda ki raah nahiN chorri.
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2013, 02:09:07 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 02, 2013, 12:01:36 AM
Maqta behad khoob kaha Parwaaz bhai..
aur yahee is ghazal ka sabse khoobsurat sher bhi laga mujhe..

khoobsurat kalaam..

dil mubarakbaad..

Mukesh Jee Aadaab..!

Bahut bahut Shukriyaa janab... maqta toH instantly likh diyaa tha humne aur woH aapko pasaNd aaya jaankar badi khushi huyi.. Usual Smile

Aage bhi apnaa saath banaye rakhiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2013, 02:22:37 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 02, 2013, 12:13:33 AM

Yun Na Apne Dil Ko Tum Napaak Karo
Karni Hai Gar Shairi To Kufra Se Pak Karo.



ALLAH Reham Kare ...Aameen...

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab

Shihaab Sahaab Aadaab..!


Bhai awaal toH aapki aamad hi mere liye khushi ka toHfaa hai... Usual Smile
Aapki tamaam baatoN ko maiN apne sar aaNkhoN par rakhta huN...

Gar apne rab se hi apni naraazgi na jatuN toH kisse jataauN janab... Jisne zindagi baqshi jisne maal zar zameen zewar har cheez baqshi ... par phir bhi usse gilaa karne ko jee chahe toH kia gunaaH hai... gar gunaaH hai toH woH muaaf bhi karne wala hai... beshak muaf bhi kar deNga... Usual Smile

Gar meri is kalaam se aaplogoN ke dil ko thes pahuNchi hai toH maiN tah e dil se mazarrat khuwaN huN...

Par maire dil ki halat maiN jaanta huN aur mujhse behtar mera rab janta hai... ke is kalaam meiN mera maqsad sirf usse rujoo hona tha... Usual Smile

Khair gar aisi kalaam meri kalam se naa aayi hoti toH mujhe itni hadise bhi kabhi maloom na hoti.. bahut bahut shukriyaa janab, maiN ghafil e imaaN nahi huN haaN yeH bhi hai ke saahib e imaaN bhi nahi huN... Usual Smile aap jaise dostoN ka saath raha toH Insha Allaah sawar jauNga.. Usual Smile

Apna kimti waqt dene ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa.. aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



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