tu kaha hai Maa... Intezar !

by Intezar on May 29, 2012, 02:23:35 AM
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udaas to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa
hassaas to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

Duniya bhar ki gardishe thi zakhm b kayi the
dukhta to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

yaad to bahut aayi, kayi baar neende gawayi
judaa to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

Daud kar pukarta tha tujhe tu kaha hai maa
Girta to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

aakar apne haatho se khilaye tu ye zid thi meri
bhukha to bahut tha lekin main nahi roya maa

teri chhaw ke bagair paaw jalte the dil jalta tha
thaka to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

ke sir chhupa kar aaj, teri goad me ro lu maa
chaaha to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa…!

Shukriya
Intezar !
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2012, 02:28:58 AM »
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aur ek rau janab aapke liye.....
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2012, 02:36:33 AM »
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Kya khoob likha hai aapne Intezar saheb, waqai lajawab. Beshak aapke iss kalam pe rau dena banta hai.
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2012, 03:59:18 AM »
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Intezaar ji bahut bhaut mubaarak baad deta hoon is ghazal ke liye haalaaki maine bhee kai ghazle is khaas andaa men kahee hai jis me doosraa misraa qqafiye se shuru ho aur baaqee radeef ho par thodaa qaafiyo kee choice men kamee rah gayee agar ye sab ham qaafiye hote to mazaa aa jaataa
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2012, 05:12:35 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2012, 06:15:54 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2012, 07:55:16 AM »
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Quote from: Intezar on May 29, 2012, 02:23:35 AM


udaas to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa
hassaas to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

Duniya bhar ki gardishe thi zakhm b kayi the
dukhta to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

yaad to bahut aayi, kayi baar neende gawayi
judaa to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

Daud kar pukarta tha tujhe tu kaha hai maa
Girta to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

aakar apne haatho se khilaye tu ye zid thi meri
bhukha to bahut tha lekin main nahi roya maa

teri chhaw ke bagair paaw jalte the dil jalta tha
thaka to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

ke sir chhupa kar aaj, teri goad me ro lu maa
chaaha to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa…!

Shukriya
Intezar !



Intezar Ji Aisa Bahut Kam Hota Hai Mere Saath, Ke Main Kisi Ki Kalaam Padhu Aur Unn Ehsaaso Se Meri Aankhein Nam Ho..Aapki Yeh Kalaam Padhte Waqt Aankhein Nam Ho Gayi..

Bahut Bahut AUr Bahut Khoob..Bahut Hi gehre Jazbaat!!!

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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2012, 08:15:17 AM »
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Quote from: Intezar on May 29, 2012, 02:23:35 AM


udaas to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa
hassaas to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

Duniya bhar ki gardishe thi zakhm b kayi the
dukhta to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

yaad to bahut aayi, kayi baar neende gawayi
judaa to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

Daud kar pukarta tha tujhe tu kaha hai maa
Girta to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

aakar apne haatho se khilaye tu ye zid thi meri
bhukha to bahut tha lekin main nahi roya maa

teri chhaw ke bagair paaw jalte the dil jalta tha
thaka to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa

ke sir chhupa kar aaj, teri goad me ro lu maa
chaaha to bahut tha, lekin main nahi roya maa…!

Shukriya
Intezar !


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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2012, 09:25:28 AM »
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BAHUT UMDA JAZBAAT INTEZAR JEE.
MERE PAAS LAFZ NAHEEN HAIN AAPKE KALAAM KI TAREEF KARNE KE LIYE.
KHUSH RAHIYE AUR LIKHTE RAHIYE.

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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2012, 02:29:16 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2012, 03:04:21 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai bhaai....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2012, 07:07:22 PM »
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Ripan ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

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Quote from: ripan dev on May 29, 2012, 02:28:58 AM
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aur ek rau janab aapke liye.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2012, 07:08:19 PM »
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Iftakhar sahab bahut bahut shukriya aapka...

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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 29, 2012, 02:36:33 AM
Kya khoob likha hai aapne Intezar saheb, waqai lajawab. Beshak aapke iss kalam pe rau dena banta hai.
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2012, 07:10:42 PM »
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shukriya saini sahab hausla afzaayi ke liye...
koshish ki thi kuch alag likhne ki shayad aage kuch achha kar paau, bas isi tarah saath dete rahiyega... Shukriya

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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 29, 2012, 03:59:18 AM
Intezaar ji bahut bhaut mubaarak baad deta hoon is ghazal ke liye haalaaki maine bhee kai ghazle is khaas andaa men kahee hai jis me doosraa misraa qqafiye se shuru ho aur baaqee radeef ho par thodaa qaafiyo kee choice men kamee rah gayee agar ye sab ham qaafiye hote to mazaa aa jaataa
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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2012, 07:11:57 PM »
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Shukriya sarfira bhai bahut bahut shukriya aapka... aap humesha saath dete hain achha lagta hai yuhi saath dete rahiyega... Shukriya...

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Quote from: sarfira on May 29, 2012, 05:12:35 AM
kya kehne--
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