<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

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<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

har dard wo muskurake sehte hain
jo kisise sachchi mahobbat karte hain

ye ashk jo kisiki yaad me behte hain
ye roz hi ik nai gazal likhte hain

khwabon me jhilmilate hain jo chaand sitare
wo aankh khulte hi sulagte koyle se dikhte hain

angaaron pe chal padte hain ye kadam
jab saamne khade mere mehbub mujhe dikhte hain

kya kahe ye kasak hai kaisi iss dil me
jo tere hoke bhi tujhse begaane hum rehte hain......!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2010, 09:41:35 AM »
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Badi dil choone wali nazm likhi hai Anamika di..! Bahaut khoob..! Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2010, 12:28:52 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 09:28:44 AM
<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

har dard wo muskurake sehte hain
jo kisise sachchi mahobbat karte hain

ye ashk jo kisiki yaad me behte hain
ye roz hi ik nai gazal likhte hain

khwabon me jhilmilate hain jo chaand sitare
wo aankh khulte hi sulagte koyle se dikhte hain

angaaron pe chal padte hain ye kadam
jab saamne khade mere mehbub mujhe dikhte hain

kya kahe ye kasak hai kaisi iss dil me
jo tere hoke bhi tujhse begaane hum rehte hain......!!!

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Anuji..Aapke Kya Kehne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2010, 01:52:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhse behad mahobbat karte hain hum
Kuchh majboori hai keh nahi sakte hum

Dil me basaa hai, tujhe,roj milte hain hum
Rubaru tere kabhi ho nahi paate hain hum

Samajhta hoga dil tera bhi meri chahat ko
Jaanta hai tu bhi hai ye jo uss rukaavat ko





Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 09:28:44 AM
<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

har dard wo muskurake sehte hain
jo kisise sachchi mahobbat karte hain

ye ashk jo kisiki yaad me behte hain
ye roz hi ik nai gazal likhte hain

khwabon me jhilmilate hain jo chaand sitare
wo aankh khulte hi sulagte koyle se dikhte hain

angaaron pe chal padte hain ye kadam
jab saamne khade mere mehbub mujhe dikhte hain

kya kahe ye kasak hai kaisi iss dil me
jo tere hoke bhi tujhse begaane hum rehte hain......!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2010, 06:13:54 PM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aik bahut achchi koshish per humari aur daad,
Khayaal to aapke umdaa hai i par lafzoN meiN dhala bhi khoob hai aapne..... Aur yeh jo ashaar kahe naa aapne realy mindblowing...

Yeh ashak jo kisiki yaad meiN bahete hai
eh roz hi ek nayi gazal likhate hai         


Likhati rahiye
Khush rahiye...

         
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2010, 06:19:02 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 06:13:54 PM
Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Aik bahut achchi koshish per humari aur daad,
Khayaal to aapke umdaa hai i par lafzoN meiN dhala bhi khoob hai aapne..... Aur yeh jo ashaar kahe naa aapne realy mindblowing...

Yeh ashak jo kisiki yaad meiN bahete hai
eh roz hi ek nayi gazal likhate hai         


Likhati rahiye
Khush rahiye...

         


parwaz ji aapse ye sunna k achcha likha hai badi khushi deta hai..yunhi kehte rahiye....

thnx alot for appreciation
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 06:45:45 PM »
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jAANTE HAIN HUM...ye koi nayee baat nahi hai ji..... Winking
kavita achhi hai ji.... Clapping Smiley

Kuchh na kaho,Jaante hain hum
Khafa-khafa humse rehte ho tum

Mann he mann ghuut-te ho tum
Par ufffff bhi nahi karte ho tum

Humnaam humraaz sab hain kehne ko
Batlaao phir kyu begaane se rehte ho

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 09:28:44 AM
<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

har dard wo muskurake sehte hain
jo kisise sachchi mahobbat karte hain

ye ashk jo kisiki yaad me behte hain
ye roz hi ik nai gazal likhte hain

khwabon me jhilmilate hain jo chaand sitare
wo aankh khulte hi sulagte koyle se dikhte hain

angaaron pe chal padte hain ye kadam
jab saamne khade mere mehbub mujhe dikhte hain

kya kahe ye kasak hai kaisi iss dil me
jo tere hoke bhi tujhse begaane hum rehte hain......!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 10:48:00 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Kasak ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2010, 06:49:00 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 09:28:44 AM
<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

har dard wo muskurake sehte hain
jo kisise sachchi mahobbat karte hain

ye ashk jo kisiki yaad me behte hain
ye roz hi ik nai gazal likhte hain

khwabon me jhilmilate hain jo chaand sitare
wo aankh khulte hi sulagte koyle se dikhte hain

angaaron pe chal padte hain ye kadam
jab saamne khade mere mehbub mujhe dikhte hain

kya kahe ye kasak hai kaisi iss dil me
jo tere hoke bhi tujhse begaane hum rehte hain......!!!

har dard ko muskura kar sahne ki aadat hai hamen
har gam se dil lagane ki aadat hai hamen
hamen to kisi ne apna banaya nahi
par har kisi ko apna banane ki aadat hai hamen

aankhon me sapne hamne dekhe the kai
sajaye the chand sitaron ko khwabon me
ab to tanhaiyon ki mashaal sulgati hai
aag nikalti hai pyaar ki rubaiyon me
tanha baith kar rone ki aadat hai hamen

likha karty the gajal kal ham kisi ke naam par
aaj aati hai nafrat dil me uski ke naam par
aise aag lagti hai dil me jaise sulag raha jahan ho
aaj rota hu har pal mai uski ke naam par
fir bhi pyaar karne ki usko aadat hai hamen
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2010, 06:52:33 AM »
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diiiiiiiiiiiiiii bhut acha likha hai aap ne
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2010, 01:29:13 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 09:28:44 AM
<>*Tujhse begaane hum rehte hain.*<>

har dard wo muskurake sehte hain
jo kisise sachchi mahobbat karte hain

ye ashk jo kisiki yaad me behte hain
ye roz hi ik nai gazal likhte hain

khwabon me jhilmilate hain jo chaand sitare
wo aankh khulte hi sulagte koyle se dikhte hain

angaaron pe chal padte hain ye kadam
jab saamne khade mere mehbub mujhe dikhte hain

kya kahe ye kasak hai kaisi iss dil me
jo tere hoke bhi tujhse begaane hum rehte hain......!!!

Bahut khoob Anamika Ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 30, 2011, 05:51:20 PM »
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ye jo zindgi hai bahot se khel dikhati he
chahat ho kisi se to ye beinteha rulaati he

har dard ko sah jaati ye mohabt me
ashko ko bhi chipakar naino me hotho se jhuthi muskurati he

kabhi wo kahalwati bewafa apne hi mehbub ko
to kabhi sach ko hi jhuthlaati hai

ye to aap jaise deewane he jo
kabi mohabt to kabhi maut ko bhi……
zindagi ka naam de jaati hain
””
uff pta nhi me kya kya likh gaya.
maaf karna aat mujhe.
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