Tuti Jhopdi ( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on June 10, 2009, 01:29:14 PM
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Bohat se aise logh hain jo apni zindagi bohat neeche se shuru karte hain aur ek oocha makam hasil karte hain, par woh apne bure dino ko kabhi nahi bhoolte bas usi soch ko dhiyaan me rakh kar kuch likha hain.....

Tuti ek jhopdi thi meri, purani si ek basti me kahi

Barso jaha mere haal pe muflisi hasti rahi

Woh chat me sawan ka rona mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Woh mayusi ki dhool se saja bichauna mujhe aaj bhi yaad hain

Woh gam ki deewaro pe sar rakh_ke rona main kaise bhool jaoo

Woh kaiee rato bhookho sona main kaise bhool jaoo

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad aata hain woh mera aalishaan aashiyana

Jaha ki har takleef mithi thi har dard tha aashikana

Usi tuti jhopdi me maine jeena seekha hain

Bhookhe pet bhi hasne ka salika seekha hain

Jaha toofan ko humne chanchal mauj samjha tha

Jaha aandhiyo ko thandi hawa ka jhoka kehte the

Kabhi koi shikwa nahi kiya humne har haal me khush rehte the

Mana aaj sone chandi ki deewaro me mera basera hain

Par aye tuti jhopdi jo bhi hain mere pass sab tera hain

Tu na hoti to kaise hum zindagi ki mushkilo ko jante

Tu na hoti to kaise khud ko pehchante

Jeevan ki har seekh di hain tune har sabak seekhaya hain

Bankar meri MA apne aachal me sulaya hain

Yeh mana mere halaat badal gaye par tu waisi ki waisi rahi

Tuti ek jhopdi thi meri purani si basti me kahi

Barso jaha mere haal pe muflisi hasti rahi...

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 01:41:12 PM »
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Bahut khub Ghayel ji.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 01:53:24 PM »
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 Applause Applausebahoot dino baad yahan aaya aur ye rachna padh-kar dil baag baag ho gaya..bahoot bahoot daad sajid bhai aapko
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 02:09:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob Ghayal Ji
very very touching and emotional poem
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 04:07:40 PM »
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Bohot Khoob.....!
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 04:13:04 PM »
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Mere Haal Se Wabasta Hai Ye Nazm Bhai,.
Bohat Achche behtareen Kalaam,.
Bohat Achche,
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 04:41:37 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 10:27:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Ghayel Saheb...Apka kalam padna hamesha acha lagta hai...
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 05:30:58 AM »
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Wah wah Sajid ji,very touching,kamaal ka likha hai aapne.
mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai jab hum bhi jhopdi mein rahete the.
sahi kaha aapne kabhi nahi bhoolna chaiye gareebee ke din. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2009, 02:55:34 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on June 10, 2009, 01:41:12 PM
Bahut khub Ghayel ji.... Applause Applause

Bohat shukriyaa JJ..
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2009, 03:33:57 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 10, 2009, 01:53:24 PM
Applause Applausebahoot dino baad yahan aaya aur ye rachna padh-kar dil baag baag ho gaya..bahoot bahoot daad sajid bhai aapko


Bohat shukriyaa dost tumhe pasand aaya meri mehnat wasool hui..
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