Uljhan

by thycreator on October 08, 2007, 09:11:03 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: October 11, 2007, 08:09:20 PM »
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Itane urdu ke shabd.. kam se kam meanings to likh dete...

bahoot hi rythem main, suchai bayan ki hai apne...  ek koshish meri taraf se bhi....

Suche dil se jo insaaniyat ki khidmat kare
Mil jaaye maan zindagi ko,
issi tarah se rub ki bandgi kare

her kisi ne sambhala hai khud ko yaha
sawarthi ho kar
bina sawarth ke rahne ki ek baar himmat kare

hai her kisi ko pyar khud ki hi zindagi se
dekhain charo taraf
aoro ki zindagi se bhi muhobat kare

rakh sake jo sab doosro ki bhawnao ka khayal
ek aise nai duniya ki aao chahat kare!!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #16 on: October 11, 2007, 08:20:44 PM »
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Kaun sa shabd samajh nahi aaya...sabaahat - beauty....ghaflat- ignorance.....yahi do hain thode alag se

Chalo zindagi ko naye mukaam pe laaya jaye,
Kissi toote hu dil-e-mandir ko basaaya jaye..

Badi muddat hui massom muskurahat dekhe,
Kissi rote hue bacche ko hansaya jaye..

Neend bhar so liya insaan toh jane kabse,
Kissi soye hue insaan ko jagaya jaye..

Jiye hai ab talak hum toh khud hi ke liye,
Kissi aur ke gulistaa ko mehkaya jaye..

Aye khud de mujhe shakti, badal do calan-e-bandagi,
Tujhko chod insaaniyat ko ab paaya jaye...
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: October 12, 2007, 10:23:16 AM »
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Very nice Pooja and Amit ..Good work
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thycreator
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«Reply #18 on: October 12, 2007, 03:48:35 PM »
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Thanks a lot Talat.............tumne kuch nahi likha.......your contribution is always appreciated...Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: October 12, 2007, 04:07:02 PM »
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Yahan itni achchi shayari ho rahi hai ki kuch likhne ka samajh hi nai aa raha Usual Smile will try for sure
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aankhain
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«Reply #20 on: October 12, 2007, 07:58:58 PM »
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bohat acha likha..=D>
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thycreator
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«Reply #21 on: October 15, 2007, 07:15:45 PM »
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Quote from: "Talat"
Yahan itni achchi shayari ho rahi hai ki kuch likhne ka samajh hi nai aa raha Usual Smile will try for sure


Thanks a lot........mujhe intezaar rahega.......Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #22 on: October 15, 2007, 07:16:12 PM »
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Quote from: "aankhain"
bohat acha likha..=D>


Thanks a lot.......Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #23 on: October 15, 2007, 07:28:56 PM »
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Phir aaj mujhpe zindagi ka sawal aa gaya,
Jo jee na sake unn palon ka malal aa gaya..

Badi hasrat se sochte hai unchuye raston ko hum,
Har ek khoyi hui manzil ka khayal aa gaya..

Kehte hai aage badhna hi dastoor-e-zindagi hai,
Kyu beete hue waqt ka phir ye jaal aa gaya..

Toote sapne ankhon mein aansso chod jate hai,
Phir hathon mein unka reshami rumaal aa gaya..

Aye dil-o-zindagi, hum bhala kis or ab jayen,
Nigahon mein phir unka parda-e-jamaal aa gaya..
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Rajbir
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«Reply #24 on: October 15, 2007, 07:39:05 PM »
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Amit

Wah ! wah ! bro kya baat hai =D> =D>

Bahut he achcha likhte ho tum !

Daad kabool kijiye :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #25 on: October 15, 2007, 07:42:01 PM »
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Thanks a lot Raj bhai........aap bhi kuch likhen toh maza aa jaye.......Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #26 on: October 15, 2007, 08:40:13 PM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai... kafi der se soch rahi hun kuch main bhi likhun ... but i'm so tired n sleepy ki ... Kaifiyaat-ae-maye ke siwa kuch soojhta hi nahi.

keep it up :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #27 on: October 15, 2007, 08:42:40 PM »
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Haan, tumhe aur kuch sujhega bhi nahi raat ke waqt.........tongue3
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: October 16, 2007, 06:36:25 PM »
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WAH WAH WAH!!!! Kaya baat hai Amit… ek ek line bahoot hi khubsurati se likhi hui hai…… Good Creation, Good Job!!!

Zindagi mai sawal baar baar ayege
Kuch khayali pal, umarbhar satyege

Bin baat hi barsaat ho jayegi ankhon se
Aor dil ko hum kuch samjha nahi payege

Kabhi khushi bhi degi dard bin baat ke
Jis dard ko, umarbhar hum sath liye, jiye jayege

Kaya toota kaya bach gaya zindagi main
Issi Uljhan main ab to umar bitayege
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Shikha12
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«Reply #29 on: October 16, 2007, 07:43:53 PM »
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Quote from: "thycreator"

Phir aaj mujhpe zindagi ka sawal aa gaya,
Jo jee na sake unn palon ka malal aa gaya..

Badi hasrat se sochte hai unchuye raston ko hum,
Har ek khoyi hui manzil ka khayal aa gaya..

Kehte hai aage badhna hi dastoor-e-zindagi hai,
Kyu beete hue waqt ka phir ye jaal aa gaya..

Toote sapne ankhon mein aansso chod jate hai,
Phir hathon mein unka reshami rumaal aa gaya..

Aye dil-o-zindagi, hum bhala kis or ab jayen,
Nigahon mein phir unka parda-e-jamaal aa gaya..


This is so beautiful Amit... =D>

Equally Nice reply Pooja Di... Usual Smile
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