Uljhan -Panna 3:Shairi - E

thycreator

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«Reply #30 on: October 16, 2007, 07:52:45 PM »

Thanks a lot Shikha.................i am glad you liked it...........but nothing from you......apko shabdon ki kami kabse ho gayi............ tongue3


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #31 on: October 16, 2007, 07:58:20 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

WAH WAH WAH!!!! Kaya baat hai Amit… ek ek line bahoot hi khubsurati se likhi hui hai…… Good Creation, Good Job!!!

Zindagi mai sawal baar baar ayege
Kuch khayali pal, umarbhar satyege

Bin baat hi barsaat ho jayegi ankhon se
Aor dil ko hum kuch samjha nahi payege

Kabhi khushi bhi degi dard bin baat ke
Jis dard ko, umarbhar hum sath liye, jiye jayege

Kaya toota kaya bach gaya zindagi main
Issi Uljhan main ab to umar bitayege

Thanks a lot pooja ji and good one from you too......... Usual Smile

Nahi afsoos hai mujhko ki mera dil ye toota hai,
Nahi gam hai ki mujhse mera rab bhi rootha hai..

Dukh hai yahi ki insaan ki parakh hi nahi humko,
Gairon se bachte firte the, apno ne loota hai..

Kya jawab de khud ko, kya iss dil ko samjahyen,
Ab toh lage hai yu ki ya jahan hi jhootha hai..


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Rajbir

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Uljhan

«Reply #32 on: October 16, 2007, 08:10:16 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Thanks a lot Shikha.................i am glad you liked it...........but nothing from you......apko shabdon ki kami kabse ho gayi............ tongue3

Shikha ko neend mein chalne ki aadat hai...aaj bhoole bhatke Yo par aa gayi Laughing hard

Subah likh degi kuch na kuch :D

Amit, Pooja

Good going =D>


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Pooja

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Uljhan

«Reply #33 on: October 16, 2007, 08:11:55 PM »

bahoot khoob Amit

Jhoothe to hai hum khud bhi
Kaise kisi ko jhootha kahu

Jaanbujh kar karu khud galat
Kaise kisi ko boora kahu

Dil jaan jaata hai, phir bhi manta nahi
Aise mai kaise khud ko nasamjh kahu

Dukh dete hai khud hi khud ko jab hum
Kaise phir kisi ko main bewafa kahu

Insaan ki fidrat yahi hai shayad ya main janti nahi
Ab to samjh main nahi atta kis ko kaya aor khud ko kaya main kahu….


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Shikha12

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Uljhan

«Reply #34 on: October 16, 2007, 08:19:12 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Thanks a lot Shikha.................i am glad you liked it...........but nothing from you......apko shabdon ki kami kabse ho gayi............ tongue3

Pooja di aur Aap ke saamne likhte hue darr lagta hai... tongue3

Neways... A Try Usual Smile

Zindagi mein aise sawaalon ne ghera hai,
Har shaam ka uljhaano mein basera hai...

Hum bhi hue hai shikaar us kaatil gum ke,
Woh jise tu kehta hai ki woh sirf tera hai...

Bhigo ke baithe hai daaman aansuon se,
Daag bewafaai ka magar bahut gehra hai...

Dhal jaayega yeh baadlon ke paar kahin,
Yeh chaand jo abhi chamakta sunhera hai...

Waqt par kab kiska zor chal paaya yahan,
Harr saans par laga hua waqt ka pehra hai...

BHOOL CHOOK MAAF... tongue3


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #35 on: October 16, 2007, 08:19:29 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Shikha ko neend mein chalne ki aadat hai...aaj bhoole bhatke Yo par aa gayi Laughing hard

Subah likh degi kuch na kuch :D

Amit, Pooja

Good going =D>

Thanks Raj bhai.............. Usual Smile

Shikha........sun rahi ho raj bhai ne kya kaha.......... tongue3

Jago bharat ki naari......jaago........ tongue3


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #36 on: October 16, 2007, 08:21:13 PM »

Ha ha ha........ye toh sochte hi jaag gayi....kehne ki jarurat bhi nahi padi.......pooja se darti ho....aur wo mujhse......... tongue3


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Shikha12

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Uljhan

«Reply #37 on: October 16, 2007, 08:24:46 PM »

hhhmmm

Kehne waalon ki koi kami nahin,
Isliye daleel humari hi suni nahin...
Humne to sir jhuka diya adab se,
Kyonki hum aap jaise guni nahin... Winking


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #38 on: October 16, 2007, 08:28:11 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Pooja di aur Aap ke saamne likhte hue darr lagta hai... tongue3

Neways... A Try Usual Smile

Subhaan Allah...........

Bas ek kami............chand ki chandani ko sunehra keh diya apne.... tongue3

Gam ka har dil mein basera hai, kya tera hai kya mera..
Sabhi ko tanhai ne ghera hai, kya tera hai kya mera..
Phir bhi ummeed ki kiran chamkati hai fizaon mein,
Muskurahaton ka savera hai, kya tera hai kya mera..


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Shikha12

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Uljhan

«Reply #39 on: October 16, 2007, 08:44:17 PM »

Nice one... Again... Usual Smile

Tanhai ki baat woh karte hai aise,
Jaise kissa koi zindagi ki kitaab ka...
Chalo baant lete hai mil kar isey,
Aadha humara aur aadha aap ka...

Puraani yaadon ki kitaabon mein,
Sookh jaaye jaise phool gulaab ka...
Sunhaare chaand ko shyaah kehta,
Kaisa nazariya hua hai janaab ka...


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #40 on: October 16, 2007, 08:56:00 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

hhhmmm

Kehne waalon ki koi kami nahin,
Isliye daleel humari hi suni nahin...
Humne to sir jhuka diya adab se,
Kyonki hum aap jaise guni nahin... Winking

Hamare ek majak ka yu na bura mano,
Kabhi toh iss ada ko tum bhi pehchano,
Tumne sir jhuka diya kiske samne dekho,
Kabhi toh apne gun ko khud tum bhi jano... Usual Smile


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #41 on: October 16, 2007, 09:00:09 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Nice one... Again... Usual Smile

Ufffffffff......................

Bant bhi le hum jo kuch ho hamare pas bacha,
Ab toh khushi na koi na gum ki koi parchai hai,

Zindagi ko uss makam pe laane lage hain hum,
Jahan tak aawaz hi kissi ki na aa paayi hai...

Nahi gum ke andhere chahiye, na ujale khushi ke,
Hum khush hain ki saath mere meri tanhai hai...


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #42 on: October 16, 2007, 09:05:50 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Bat kehne ki jo aa padi hai to ye kehna hai,
Har kissi ko bas khud ke liye hi jinda rehna hai..

Sabhi rishte sabhi naate tabhi mukammal hain,
Chere pe jo muskurat aur khushi ka gehna hai..

Kya sahi hai kya galat, khud ki paribhasha karo,
Kab tak kissi ke sahare se hi bas chalna hai,

Dil mein dard liye jeene se marna hi bhala hua,
Aise jeekar bhala kisko humne khush karna hai...


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Shikha12

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Uljhan

«Reply #43 on: October 16, 2007, 09:28:17 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Nice one... Again... Usual Smile

So speedy replies... Puzzled !

But Very Well said... =D>

Ek Main hoon aur Ek meri tanhaayi hai,
Zindagi ki humpe kitni rehnumaayi hai...

Ab koi aur jeene ki wajah ho to kya ho,
Jeete rehne ki wajah yeh tanhaayi hai...

Kisi ki awaaz suni aaj jab barson baad,
Paaya Dil mein gungunaati tanhaayi hai...

Pardon ke peechey ki halchal ke beech,
Muskuraati hui dekhi humne tanhaayi hai...


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #44 on: October 16, 2007, 09:38:54 PM »

Good one Shikha.........

Kisse hai jarurat yahan kissi ke saath ki,
Kya fark hai hai baat gar din ya raat ki,

Jab saath apne saaya bhi apna nahi rahe,
Kya aarzoo ho phir mujhko kissi ke hath ki..

Aise hi kat jayega ye jeewan tanha bhi,
Pyase ko pani chahiye, na justzu barsat ki..

Chand saansein mile dil ko aur ek maksad bhar,
Nahi jarurat mere dil ko ab kissi jajjbaat ki..


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