Uljhan -Panna 4:Shairi - E

Shikha12

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«Reply #45 on: October 17, 2007, 04:58:08 AM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Good one Shikha.........

Kisse hai jarurat yahan kissi ke saath ki,
Kya fark hai hai baat gar din ya raat ki,

Jab saath apne saaya bhi apna nahi rahe,
Kya aarzoo ho phir mujhko kissi ke hath ki..

Aise hi kat jayega ye jeewan tanha bhi,
Pyase ko pani chahiye, na justzu barsat ki..

Chand saansein mile dil ko aur ek maksad bhar,
Nahi jarurat mere dil ko ab kissi jajjbaat ki..

Nice Thinking.... =D> I appreciate... Usual Smile


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Rajbir

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Uljhan

«Reply #46 on: October 17, 2007, 05:54:57 AM »

Pooja, Shikha, Amit

Bahut he umda likha hai aap sab ne !

Shikha to raat se he shuru ho gayi likhna Laughing hard

Maine subah uth kar yeh sab padha ! =D>

Pooja, Shikha, Amit --> All the best :D


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Pooja

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Uljhan

«Reply #47 on: October 17, 2007, 07:18:39 PM »

Thanks Veer ji~!~ wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Shikha and Amit!!!


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Pooja

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Uljhan

«Reply #48 on: October 17, 2007, 07:29:00 PM »

Amit apki last likhi poem ko samne rakhte hue kuch likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu....

Bin jajbaat bhi to yah jajbaat laye nahi jaate
Kuch bhi kar lo, kuch dard bhulaye nahi jaate

Ulajhati hi rahti hai yaandein khud-b-khud
Yaandon ki lehro se, kuch saye nahi jaate

Na chahiye sath kisi ka yah soch liya humne
Phir kyun tanhai ke sath ke sahare nahi jaate

Kuch saansein ho gai khatam baki bhi ho jayegi khatam
Zindagi se uljhano ke taane-baane kabhi nahi jaate


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Roja

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Uljhan

«Reply #49 on: October 17, 2007, 11:37:11 PM »

wow All three are too good ... Keep going Pooja di, Shikha ji and
Thy Creator ji... =D>


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #50 on: October 23, 2007, 11:27:54 PM »

Thanks a lot Raj sahab and Roja ji.....

Pooja..........well said......

Gum-e-zindagi mein iss kadar majboor ho gaye,
Sabke pas aaye hum, khud se hi door ho gaye..

Kehte hain jindagi rafta rafta chalti rehti hai,
Hum ruke raston ke musaafir mashoor ho gaye..

Jeene aaye the jindagi, jindagi dhoondhte hai ab,
Apni nigaahon mein hum buzdil jaroor ho gaye..


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deepika_divya

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Uljhan

«Reply #51 on: October 24, 2007, 05:12:52 AM »

Dr. Amit... well described The topic uljan... good one...


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #52 on: October 24, 2007, 06:26:43 AM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

Dr. Amit... well described The topic uljan... good one...

Uffffffffffffff.............Dr. Amit..........10 saal meri umar badha di... Usual Smile

Thanks a lot, i am glad you liked it.... Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Uljhan

«Reply #53 on: October 24, 2007, 03:40:48 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Amit!!!

Kabhi haare to kabhi khud se jeet gaye
Na jaane kis tarah zindagi ke yah baras beet gaye

Kabhi chalke nayan khushi se to dukh mai baras gaye
Na jaane kis kis zindagi ke mord se hum gujar gaye

Dekhain aaina khud ya dikhaye zindagi ko hum
Inhi uljhano main, uljhate hum to rah gaye!!!!


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #54 on: October 24, 2007, 04:28:09 PM »

Wah Pooja ji........kal kuch bat hi aisi thi ki aisi lines likh gaya

Kuch bat aisi ban gayi, kehte kehte hum keh gaye,
Jindagi ke lamhon mein yuhi, bandh ke hum reh gaye..

Daman ummeed ka chute na ab, dua yahi bas aati hai,
Ek iske hi sahare pe hum, har dard ko bhi seh gaye...


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Pooja

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Uljhan

«Reply #55 on: October 24, 2007, 07:19:41 PM »

Nice Amit:

Zindagi mai na jaane kitani baar yah lamhe ayege
Her baar magar majboot tujhe banate jayege

Umeend ke diye kai baar bujhege kai baar jalate jayege
Dard ko pine ka hunar waqat ke sath sikhate jayege


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nikki

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Uljhan

«Reply #56 on: November 04, 2007, 12:35:35 PM »

Superbbb Pooja sis n Thy...

yeh maana zindagi uljhano bhari hai
magar jee rahe hain
har kadam pe ek nayi museebat
nayi chunaoti nazar aati hai
magar kadam kab thamte hain..
saansein kahan rukti hai
yeh zindagi ki gaadi..to har haal mein chalti jaati hai


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Rajbir

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Uljhan

«Reply #57 on: November 04, 2007, 12:39:40 PM »

Pooja, Amit, Niks

Very good by all of you !

Niks nice to see you after so long :hug:


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nikki

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Uljhan

«Reply #58 on: November 04, 2007, 01:07:31 PM »

thank u Rajbir...so nice of u

Zindagi mein kahin na kahin mulakat ho jaati hai
yunhi bhoole bhatke baat ho jaati hai
har baat mein zikr uljhan-e-dil ka hota hai
magar kya karein na to koi kissi ke liye rukta hai
na hi bin chahat ke kissi ka hota hai


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thycreator

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Uljhan

«Reply #59 on: November 15, 2007, 07:08:24 PM »

Kya baat hai Nikki.........Raj bhai se itna pyar....kash hame bhi thoda mil jata........ Usual Smile

Kuch likhne ki koshish karta hu...dekhne kaisa ban pata hai

Badi ummeed se hasraton ka diya jalaya hai,
Khoye lamho ko sanjo kar gulistan banaya hai,
Waqt ki aandhi se phir kashmakash hai meri,
Chand ehsaason se iss dil ko phir sajaya hai..

Jeene marne mein fark ko mehsoos kar saku,
Jindagi ko uss makam pe lane ki koshish hai,
Jin shigafon se beh ka nikal gaye jajjbaat,
Unhe phir waqt ke marhum se chupaya hai..

Gardish mein sitare sahi, gum kyu ho bhala,
Wo mayoosi kyu labon pe sada thirakti rahe,
Issi ek soch ke sajde kiye hai sab maine,
Ek muskan ka labon ko aashiyaan banaya hai..

Har dard ko dafan kiye chala main raah mein,
Har chot ke zakhm ko seene par hi liya maine,
Kuch bhi kahe jahan ab parwah hai kisko,
Aye jindagi maine toh tera saath hi nibhaya hai..


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