~~Umar - Jisam - Rooh~~:Shairi - E

Pooja

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Chuti rahi jisam ko
Rooh ko na chu paai
E UMAR meri kaya kahu tujhse
Mujhe ek sa kyun nahi tu rakh paai

Jisam hota raha, umar ke sath bara
Rooh main wo baat kyun najar nahi aai
kis duvidha main jaan phans gai
dono main ab hone lagi hai ladai

Jisam dikhata hai jhalak umar ki
Rooh ko yah baat he pasand nahi aai
Jab bhi jaage armaan rooh ke
jisam ne so atkane hai lagai

Chuti rahi jisam ko
Rooh ko na chu paai
E UMAR meri kaya kahu tujhse
Mujhe ek sa kyun nahi tu rakh paai....


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Kanta

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2008, 09:51:13 PM »

very beautiful pooja

ayu to sharir se juri he
atma hruday mein chupi he

leke gum sharir tut gaya
atma pir bhi yuva rahi he

atma ku bhae keval shanti
jism chahe keval shor hi he

ayu ka ehsas atma ku nahi
jism mange or bhi jindgi he

atma ku bhul gai bewaja
is mein ayu ki kiya galti he

samay he mana le atma ku
nahi to atma ayu le uri he

Kanta's


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Pooja

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 09:57:27 PM »

Very Nice lines Kanta!! apne to adhyatmikata ki taraf morr le liye!! good creation!!


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #3 on: October 16, 2008, 09:59:11 PM »

Bohot khoob pooja ji, gehri soch he achha kalam he.

Or bohot achha likha aap ne kanta ji, sundar kavita he.


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Pooja

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2008, 10:01:27 PM »

Shukaria Sayyid ji!! bas kuch man mai ayya to shabdo ka roop de diya..

wo baat poori tarah se shabdo mai la nahi saki... ab jab mood bana to ek baar aor koshish karugi.. abhi dekhte hai ki baki Yo sathi kaya likhte hai


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Kanta

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #5 on: October 16, 2008, 10:11:25 PM »

danyavad sayyid measurement of lines teek he na?

tum ne sharir ku anushasan banae mein ne atma ku, ayu gujr gai is mein DOH


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Talat

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #6 on: October 16, 2008, 10:23:09 PM »

Pooja and Kanta, Very Good Work friends Applause


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Pooja

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #7 on: October 16, 2008, 10:31:26 PM »

Thanks Celmira!!!


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2008, 07:17:00 AM »

SAJHE_DARI HAIN YEH JISM AUR ROOH KI PYARI
YEH BAAT KUCH KUCH HAIN SAMAJ AAYEE
JAZBA THA ROOH KA MAZBOOT JUNG ME
AUR JISM NE HAS KAR GARDAN KATWAIEE

-SG-


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 09:28:25 AM »

both of u kanta ji and pooja ji bohut hi acha likha hai really a wonderful creation Applause


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k.shael

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2008, 09:29:55 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB POOJA DI, Applause

& NICE WORK FROM UR SIDE 2 KANTA, Applause

BY. K.SHAEL


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syednaami

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2008, 10:17:04 AM »

Pooja saahiba aor Kanta saahiba,
Dono ne badhiya kalaam paish kiye hain. Applause


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honeyrose

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2008, 10:28:11 AM »

Bohat khoob pooja kamaal ka likha hai aapne...

very nice reply kanta dear...


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Talat

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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2008, 11:44:45 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 17, 2008, 07:17:00 AM

SAJHE_DARI HAIN YEH JISM AUR ROOH KI PYARI
YEH BAAT KUCH KUCH HAIN SAMAJ AAYEE
JAZBA THA ROOH KA MAZBOOT JUNG ME
AUR JISM NE HAS KAR GARDAN KATWAIEE

-SG-

Nice one Sajid Ji


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Re: ~~Umar - Zisam - Rooh~~

«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2008, 11:46:51 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on October 16, 2008, 09:15:11 PM

Chuti rahi zisam ko
Rooh ko na chu paai
E UMAR meri kaya kahu tujhse
Mujhe ek sa kyun nahi tu rakh paai

Zisam hota raha, umar ke sath bara
Rooh main wo baat kyun najar nahi aai
kis duvidha main jaan phans gai
dono main ab hone lagi hai ladai

Zisam dikhata hai jhalak umar ki
Rooh ko yah baat he pasand nahi aai
Jab bhi jaage armaan rooh ke
zisam ne so atkane hai lagai

Chuti rahi zisam ko
Rooh ko na chu paai
E UMAR meri kaya kahu tujhse
Mujhe ek sa kyun nahi tu rakh paai....

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja!!!

Iss Topic Par likhna asaan nahi, aapne bakhoobi likha..
bahut ache


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