~~Umar - Jisam - Rooh~~

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«Reply #15 on: October 17, 2008, 11:47:52 AM »
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bahut ache kantai aur sajid saheb.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: October 17, 2008, 11:55:50 AM »
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Kyon Baithe hai woh yuh udaasi se
Yeh Umar, Jism, Rooh hisse hai Zindagi ke,
Mil-Jhool Kar Raha karo Zindagi Bhar Ke Saathi Se....


Umar Ki Soch, Woh Kare, Jo Zinda Dil Na Ho,
Kyon Guzar Rahe Ho Aap, Inn Khayalo Ki Sard Ghaati Se....


Pakad Saka Na Koi Waqt Ka Daaman,
Na Umar Ki Raah Rok Saka Koi,
Inn Sab Ki Apni Chaal hai,Yeh Chalte Hai Apni Azaadi se....


"KHWAISH" Hawa Ki Rukh se alag apni manzil ko na Dhoond,
Jism Aeena hai Aur Rooh Apni Parchai,
Mil-Jhool Kar Raha kar Apne Umar bhar ke saathi se...
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«Reply #17 on: October 17, 2008, 04:04:02 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 17, 2008, 07:17:00 AM
SAJHE_DARI HAIN YEH JISM AUR ROOH KI PYARI
YEH BAAT KUCH KUCH HAIN SAMAJ AAYEE
JAZBA THA ROOH KA MAZBOOT JUNG ME
AUR JISM NE HAS KAR GARDAN KATWAIEE

                      -SG-


Nice lines SG JI!!
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«Reply #18 on: October 17, 2008, 04:11:35 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 17, 2008, 11:46:51 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja!!! Applause Applause Applause

Iss Topic Par likhna asaan nahi, aapne bakhoobi likha..
bahut ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Khwaish ji.. jo man mai tha waise wo sahi tarah se nahi likh saki.. jab mood bana tab dobara koshish karugi..

Apne behad acha likha hai!!
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«Reply #19 on: October 17, 2008, 04:12:17 PM »
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Thanks Bhawna, Honey, Shally and Syednaami ji!!

App sab bhi kuch likhte to acha lagta!!
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«Reply #20 on: October 17, 2008, 05:16:34 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on October 17, 2008, 04:11:35 PM
Bahoot bahoot shukaria Khwaish ji.. jo man mai tha waise wo sahi tarah se nahi likh saki.. jab mood bana tab dobara koshish karugi..

Apne behad acha likha hai!!

thanx a lot pooja...main khud bhi shayad jo likhna chahta tha, na likh saka..phir se zaroor koshish hogi.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: October 17, 2008, 05:50:07 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 17, 2008, 11:55:50 AM
Kyon Baithe hai woh yuh udaasi se
Yeh Umar, Jism, Rooh hisse hai Zindagi ke,
Mil-Jhool Kar Raha karo Zindagi Bhar Ke Saathi Se....


Umar Ki Soch, Woh Kare, Jo Zinda Dil Na Ho,
Kyon Guzar Rahe Ho Aap, Inn Khayalo Ki Sard Ghaati Se....


Pakad Saka Na Koi Waqt Ka Daaman,
Na Umar Ki Raah Rok Saka Koi,
Inn Sab Ki Apni Chaal hai,Yeh Chalte Hai Apni Azaadi se....


"KHWAISH" Hawa Ki Rukh se alag apni manzil ko na Dhoond,
Jism Aeena hai Aur Rooh Apni Parchai,
Mil-Jhool Kar Raha kar Apne Umar bhar ke saathi se...

Bohot achcha likha hai Khwaish Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: October 18, 2008, 06:15:30 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 17, 2008, 11:55:50 AM
Kyon Baithe hai woh yuh udaasi se
Yeh Umar, Jism, Rooh hisse hai Zindagi ke,
Mil-Jhool Kar Raha karo Zindagi Bhar Ke Saathi Se....


Umar Ki Soch, Woh Kare, Jo Zinda Dil Na Ho,
Kyon Guzar Rahe Ho Aap, Inn Khayalo Ki Sard Ghaati Se....


Pakad Saka Na Koi Waqt Ka Daaman,
Na Umar Ki Raah Rok Saka Koi,
Inn Sab Ki Apni Chaal hai,Yeh Chalte Hai Apni Azaadi se....


"KHWAISH" Hawa Ki Rukh se alag apni manzil ko na Dhoond,
Jism Aeena hai Aur Rooh Apni Parchai,
Mil-Jhool Kar Raha kar Apne Umar bhar ke saathi se...


udaaas nahi yah to dil ki baat hai
Jisam aor Rooh ke ladai ab aamm baat hai
rooh ke armaan jisam per sajaye nahi jaate
Jisam ke ilzaam rooh se nibhaye nahi jaate
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«Reply #23 on: October 18, 2008, 06:24:53 AM »
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POOJA DIDI CHOTI SI KOSHISH KI HAI KUCH
LIKHNE KI UMEED HAI AAP SABKO PASAND AAYEGA,


"CHOOTI SI UMAR NE KAYI RANG ISS DUNIYA
KE DIKHA DIYE,ROOH KI CHAHTO NE KAYI
JAGHO KE DHAKKE KHILWA DIYE,JISM NE TO
KHUSH KIYA KAYIYO KO PAR MERE HI HISSE
GAMM LIKHWA DIYE",

"APNI UMAR KO KISS TARAAZO ME TOLE HAM
KI AABHI TO ROOH KI TASSALI ME BAHUT
KUCH PAANA HAI,

JISM TO SAATH DETA HAI MAGAR KISMAT BHI
AGAR DE DE SAATH TO ISS UMAR AUR ROOH KE
BANDISHO KO TOD DE HAM,

HAI CHAHTE BEINTAHA ROOH KI MAGAR KHUDA
KI REHMAT HO TO MUJHE INN SAB KE SAATH
HOKAR BAHUT DOOR JAANA HAI",

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #24 on: October 18, 2008, 06:39:28 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai shael, bahoot khoob... yah lines to kamal ki likh di hai apne.....

"CHOOTI SI UMAR NE KAYI RANG ISS DUNIYA
KE DIKHA DIYE,ROOH KI CHAHTO NE KAYI
JAGHO KE DHAKKE KHILWA DIYE,JISM NE TO
KHUSH KIYA KAYIYO KO PAR MERE HI HISSE
GAMM LIKHWA DIYE",
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«Reply #25 on: October 18, 2008, 06:45:49 AM »
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 notworthy
SHUKRIYA DIDI,
AACHA LAGTA AGAR AAP BHI
2 LINES NAZAR KARTI TO...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #26 on: October 18, 2008, 06:57:54 AM »
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Koshish ki hai Shael.. shayad apko pasand aye...

rang dunia ke dekh kar, rooh yeh preshan hai
Jisam chal raha hai apni chaal, isko bhi kaha araam hai
asar dikhta hai zisam per, rooh to sambhal se jaati hai
Rooh ke armmano per, kab kaha koi viraam hai

kabhi yah to kabhi wo sapne dikhati hai
jisam se milta nahi jab sath, bharak jaati hai
dekh aaine main, Pooja dono samjhati hai
kuc h iski, kuch uski, dono ko manati hai

isi kash m kash main zindagi gujarati jaati hai
kabhi umar to kabhi rooh jeet jaati hai
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«Reply #27 on: October 18, 2008, 08:02:39 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL

KYA KHOOB KHUDA NE NIYAMTE BHAKSHI HAI
INSAAN KO,
ROOH FARMAATI HAI ISHQ MASOOMIYAT SE,AUR
CHOT JISM KO LAGTI HAI,
AUR UMAR ISHQ KI USS MASOOMIYAT KA KHAMIYAZA
BHUGAT.TI HAI...
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«Reply #28 on: October 18, 2008, 05:05:05 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on October 18, 2008, 06:15:30 AM

rooh ke armaan jisam per sajaye nahi jaate
Jisam ke ilzaam rooh se nibhaye nahi jaate

Applause Applause Applause Bohot gehri baat kahi hai Pooja
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«Reply #29 on: October 18, 2008, 05:06:13 PM »
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Very nice creations Pooja, Shael  Applause
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