UMR KI SHAAM DHALTI RAHI........................... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 03, 2013, 07:40:34 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 04, 2013, 01:56:04 PM »
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Ban  gayi  bojh  sab ke liye
Laash  kaandhe  badalti rahi

Kaun  aaya  gaya  kya   pata
Rail  patri  pe  chalti rahi

Roti  seinka  kiye  rahnuma
Aag  nafrat  ki  jalti  rahi


ab ye samajh nahiN aa raha i in sheroN pe wah kahun ya aah kahuN... bas gazab ke khayaal aur adaaygi.... maza aa gaya, rau hai nahiN, hota to 2-3 rau de deta in sheron ko maiN...
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«Reply #16 on: August 04, 2013, 04:04:49 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on August 03, 2013, 08:08:53 PM
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Uffffff kaise tareef karoon is ghazal ki. har sher bahut bahut bahut khooooooob hai hasan ji. mujhe aapki yeh kalaaaaaaaaaam behad pasand aayi aur kuch ashaaaaaaaaaar toh ghazab ke rahe. rau ke saath hazaron dili daad qubool kare.

Andha Qanoon  andha raha
Zulm ki tahni phalti rahi

Ban gayi bojh sab ke liye
Laash kaandhe badalti rahi

Roti seinka kiye rahnuma
aag nafrat ki jalti rahi

Roti seinka kiye rahnuma
aag nafrat ki jalti rahi

in ashaar ke kya kehne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut shukriya Aqsh ki aap ne ghazal pasand ki aur housla barhaya. dili duaaein pesh hain.
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«Reply #17 on: August 04, 2013, 11:27:21 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on August 03, 2013, 09:31:19 PM


[size=11 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!  Hats off to you!

Kya Kehne Saheb....Sach Ka Aaena Dikhaati hui Ghazal...Lajawaaaab...

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Khwahish ji , Hausla afzai ke liye bahut mashkoor hoon ,dheron duaaein.
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«Reply #18 on: August 05, 2013, 12:08:10 AM »
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Shukriya .Adil Bechain saheb.
Quote from: adil bechain on August 03, 2013, 10:38:39 PM


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah 2nd sher khaas raha hasan sahab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: August 05, 2013, 02:27:53 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on August 03, 2013, 11:36:55 PM
Siddiqui Saheb, Sabhi Ashaar ek se badhkar ek hai lekin, in ka kya kahna. Waah Bahut bahut mubarak ho aj ke hallat ki ek dam sahi tashveer ki peshgi. Applause Applause Applause

Saraswat ji ,Housla afzai k liye behad
mamnoon hoon . Duago,Hasan
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«Reply #20 on: August 05, 2013, 02:31:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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waah waah waah waah...
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«Reply #21 on: August 05, 2013, 09:31:17 AM »
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«Reply #22 on: August 05, 2013, 01:30:26 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on August 03, 2013, 11:52:01 PM
Yet another beautiful ghazel,
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SARVESH RASTOGI

Thanks a lot , Sarvesh ji , for your nice
words of appreciation . Wish you are well.
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«Reply #23 on: August 05, 2013, 02:59:08 PM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy

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BAHUT BAHUT AUR BAHUT UMDAA KALAAM HASAN BHAI.. Usual Smile

DILI MUBARAKBAAD..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #24 on: August 05, 2013, 04:57:27 PM »
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Quote from: Saavan on August 04, 2013, 12:47:30 AM
Lajawab.. Dhero daad...
Thanks , Saavan ji . Khush o khurram rahye.
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«Reply #25 on: August 05, 2013, 07:18:44 PM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on August 04, 2013, 02:58:10 AM
hamesha ki tarah umda!
Bahut bahut shukriya Kaash ji . khush rahye .
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«Reply #26 on: August 06, 2013, 04:01:13 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 04, 2013, 04:29:41 AM

bahut khoob.....!
thanks , shebaji
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«Reply #27 on: August 06, 2013, 04:38:31 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 04, 2013, 07:51:28 AM
har baar ki tarha la'jawab - dheron daad  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
SHUKRIYA , IQTEDAR  SAHEB . DUAAEIN .
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«Reply #28 on: August 06, 2013, 05:29:35 PM »
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«Reply #29 on: August 07, 2013, 01:48:18 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on August 04, 2013, 08:51:07 AM
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thanks Miraj saheb
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