V e d n a ! ! !

by Pooja on February 12, 2009, 06:40:13 PM
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Surmai sham main ansuoo ki laalima aai hai
Dil ki tadap ne, ajj phir ek halchal muchaai hai

Armaano se, ek Vedna ki Lehar Takraai hai
Sooni ankhio main,  rangeen ahsaas ki parchai hai

Roka hai, khud ko khud ne, jeevan se thokar khai hai
Zakhmo se bhare dil main, ek khalipan ne li agrdaai hai

Surmai sham main ansuoo ki laalima aai hai
Dil ki tadap ne, ajj phir ek halchal muchaai hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2009, 08:03:04 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 12, 2009, 06:40:13 PM
Surmai sham main ansuoo ki laalima aai hai
Dil ki tadap ne, ajj phir ek halchal muchaai hai

Armaano se, ek Vedna ki Lehar Takraai hai
Sooni ankhio main,  rangeen ahsaas ki parchai hai

Roka hai, khud ko khud ne, jeevan se thokar khai hai
Zakhmo se bhare dil main, ek khalipan ne li agrdaai hai

Surmai sham main ansuoo ki laalima aai hai
Dil ki tadap ne, ajj phir ek halchal muchaai hai

Nice One Again Poojaji Applause Applause Applause


Hriday ki Vedna antarman ki dabi si pukar ban jayegi,
Mita do is vedna ko yadi ye fir se koi vedna jagayegi...
~Pank~
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2009, 09:41:34 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 12, 2009, 06:40:13 PM
Surmai sham main ansuoo ki laalima aai hai
Dil ki tadap ne, ajj phir ek halchal muchaai hai

Armaano se, ek Vedna ki Lehar Takraai hai
Sooni ankhio main,  rangeen ahsaas ki parchai hai

Roka hai, khud ko khud ne, jeevan se thokar khai hai
Zakhmo se bhare dil main, ek khalipan ne li agrdaai hai

Surmai sham main ansuoo ki laalima aai hai
Dil ki tadap ne, ajj phir ek halchal muchaai hai


Very nicely written ...Bohot Khoob Pooja Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2009, 09:42:07 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 12, 2009, 08:03:04 PM
Nice One Again Poojaji Applause Applause Applause


Hriday ki Vedna antarman ki dabi si pukar ban jayegi,
Mita do is vedna ko yadi ye fir se koi vedna jagayegi...
~Pank~

Very nice reply Panks
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2009, 09:46:03 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 12, 2009, 09:42:07 PM
Very nice reply Panks
Thanx Celmiraji
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2009, 09:46:44 PM »
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I am not good with hindi words....Just a try...!!

Vedna jo man ki hai, aansuon main beh jaane do
Mann main dabi har tees ko aaj ubhar jaane do

Aankhon ke iss paani se wo sab yaadain dho daalo
Nayi bhor ki nayi kiran se mann ujjwal ho jaane do
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 09:54:57 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 12, 2009, 09:46:44 PM
I am not good with hindi words....Just a try...!!


Vedna jo man ki hai, aansuon main beh jaane do
Mann main dabi har tees ko aaj ubhar jaane do

Aankhon ke iss paani se wo sab yaadain dho daalo
Nayi kiran ke prakash se mann ujjwal ho jaane do
Veri Nice Celmiraji
Likhne ke liye words ki nahi feelings ki jarurat hoti hai

ehsaas khud labzo ko bunte chale jate hain...
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2009, 09:57:24 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 12, 2009, 08:03:04 PM
Nice One Again Poojaji Applause Applause Applause


Hriday ki Vedna antarman ki dabi si pukar ban jayegi,
Mita do is vedna ko yadi ye fir se koi vedna jagayegi...
~Pank~

bahoot khoob Pank ji!!! do line magar bahoot gahri...
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2009, 09:58:00 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 12, 2009, 09:46:44 PM
I am not good with hindi words....Just a try...!!

Vedna jo man ki hai, aansuon main beh jaane do
Mann main dabi har tees ko aaj ubhar jaane do

Aankhon ke iss paani se wo sab yaadain dho daalo
Nayi bhor ki nayi kiran se mann ujjwal ho jaane do

wow itna payara aor sahi likha hai Celmira... bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2009, 09:59:41 PM »
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Sach kaha aapne Panks..Shukriya..

Thank You Pooja

Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 08:02:40 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 12, 2009, 08:03:04 PM
Nice One Again Poojaji Applause Applause Applause


Hriday ki Vedna antarman ki dabi si pukar ban jayegi,
Mita do is vedna ko yadi ye fir se koi vedna jagayegi...
~Pank~

Vedna hai yah ise mitana asaan nahi hota
uth jaaye ek baar yeh tufaan, sambhlna asaan nahi hota
barsati hai ankhia aor khud ko khud man jalaata hai
iski agg se khud ko bachana, phir asaan nahi hota!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2009, 06:20:32 PM »
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Vedna..!! Waqai Aapne apni Vedna ko, Niraasha Ko Is Rachna ke zariye Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai... Bahut bahut Khooooob Pooja Ji.. Applause  Applause

Talat Ji aapne Bhi Bahut khoob Likha hai.. Aur Khaas Kar aapki Qalam se Likhi Yeh hindi Ki 4 Line Bahut Hi Acchi Lagi..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 06:25:47 PM »
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Nice creation Pooja di, Pank ji and dear Talat  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 21, 2009, 04:50:13 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 18, 2009, 06:20:32 PM
Vedna..!! Waqai Aapne apni Vedna ko, Niraasha Ko Is Rachna ke zariye Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai... Bahut bahut Khooooob Pooja Ji.. Applause  Applause

Talat Ji aapne Bhi Bahut khoob Likha hai.. Aur Khaas Kar aapki Qalam se Likhi Yeh hindi Ki 4 Line Bahut Hi Acchi Lagi..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft


**~** Mann **~**

thanks Mann ji!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 21, 2009, 04:50:35 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 18, 2009, 06:25:47 PM
Nice creation Pooja di, Pank ji and dear Talat  Usual Smile

Thanks Roja!!!
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