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                            main  moqaddar  ki  baat nahin karta...,
                            kisi  sikandar  ki baat  nahin karta...,

                            apni  qalam  apne khayalaat hi  sahi...,
                            main  gadar  ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            malaamat-e-zameer hi doobaa de mujhe...,
                            main  samandar  ki  baat nahin karta...,

                            hai  saraa  jahaan  apna  gar  socho...,
                            khususi  ghar  ki  baat  nahin karta...,

                            hoon  kaasid bus pahunchaao.n sandesa...,
                            idhar-udhar   ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            hai  wadaa  khelaafi  khoon mein mere...,
                            bechain agar-magar ki baat nahin karta...,
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2013, 12:41:06 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2013, 12:52:29 AM »
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apni  qalam  apne khayalaat hi  sahi...,                             main  gadar  ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

Bahut khoob Adil bhai
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2013, 12:52:52 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2013, 12:55:09 AM »
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Nice Adil Jee!!

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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2013, 01:00:16 AM »
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 Applause Applause
 bahut khoob , adil ji.
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2013, 01:24:35 AM »
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                            main  moqaddar  ki  baat nahin karta...,
                            kisi  sikandar  ki baat  nahin karta...,

                            apni  qalam  apne khayalaat hi  sahi...,
                            main  gadar  ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            malaamat-e-zameer hi doobaa de mujhe...,
                            main  samandar  ki  baat nahin karta...,

                            hai  saraa  jahaan  apna  gar  socho...,
                            khususi  ghar  ki  baat  nahin karta...,

                            hoon  kaasid bus pahunchaao.n sandesa...,
                            idhar-udhar   ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            hai  wadaa  khelaafi  khoon mein mere...,
                            bechain agar-magar ki baat nahin karta...,

waahh bohat khoob ab ji,...........bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2013, 01:32:00 AM »
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gazabb ki poetry..
mujhe isi tarah k alfaaz pasand hain bahot
janaab its awesome poetry

har ek ashaar josh se bharpur
mindblowing lajawaab

ek rau aaj hm bhi dete hain pehli baar Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2013, 02:11:45 PM »
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                            main  moqaddar  ki  baat nahin karta...,
                            kisi  sikandar  ki baat  nahin karta...,

                            apni  qalam  apne khayalaat hi  sahi...,
                            main  gadar  ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            malaamat-e-zameer hi doobaa de mujhe...,
                            main  samandar  ki  baat nahin karta...,

                            hai  saraa  jahaan  apna  gar  socho...,
                            khususi  ghar  ki  baat  nahin karta...,

                            hoon  kaasid bus pahunchaao.n sandesa...,
                            idhar-udhar   ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            hai  wadaa  khelaafi  khoon mein mere...,
                            bechain agar-magar ki baat nahin karta...,


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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2013, 03:24:05 PM »
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                            main  moqaddar  ki  baat nahin karta...,
                            kisi  sikandar  ki baat  nahin karta...,

                            apni  qalam  apne khayalaat hi  sahi...,
                            main  gadar  ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            malaamat-e-zameer hi doobaa de mujhe...,
                            main  samandar  ki  baat nahin karta...,

                            hai  saraa  jahaan  apna  gar  socho...,
                            khususi  ghar  ki  baat  nahin karta...,

                            hoon  kaasid bus pahunchaao.n sandesa...,
                            idhar-udhar   ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

                            hai  wadaa  khelaafi  khoon mein mere...,
                            bechain agar-magar ki baat nahin karta...,

waah waah zabardast Adil sahab
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2013, 07:53:34 PM »
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waah waah waah. bahut khoob adilji. dheron daad.
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2013, 01:31:18 PM »
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 Applause Applause wah!
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Bahut Khoob.

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apni  qalam  apne khayalaat hi  sahi...,                             main  gadar  ki  baat  nahin   karta...,

Bahut khoob Adil bhai

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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