Waqt ki deewar par.....manjum

by manjum on April 15, 2011, 06:38:30 AM
Pages: 1 [2] 3  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2405 times)
manjum
Guest
«Reply #15 on: April 16, 2011, 03:58:33 AM »
Reply with quote
bahutbahut shukriya shihabji....

sath rahiega sada......
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
dar-o-deewar by webfish002 in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
***Deewar*** by Meena in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 3 4 5 »
Dil ki Dar-0-Deewar by lovebites in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
GHAZAL -------- PAS--E- DEEWAR ( Deewar Ke Picche ) by FIROZ IQBAL in Ghazals
bichhadte waqt.. "manjum" by manjum in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai « 1 2  All »
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #16 on: April 16, 2011, 11:09:57 AM »
Reply with quote
achchi post h ji…
bht khoob.
ek sawal ye ki yo par aksar zindagi ko dardila hi q dikhaya jaata h?
aur b roop h zindgi ke…
muje ek gana yad aya h share karna chahta hu izazat--
***
zindagi…
hasne gaane k lie h pak 2 pal
ise kho na nai,kho k ro na nhi…
zindgi…
hasne gaane…………

tere girne me bhi,teri haar nhi
ke tu aadmi h avtaar nhi…
***
b happy
Logged
brokenbyluv
Guest
«Reply #17 on: April 16, 2011, 11:25:35 AM »
Reply with quote
Bade hi alag andaz mein kavita pesh ki hai apne manju mann ji bahut khoob...
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2011, 11:45:24 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya kbji.... ab aapne jo baat kahi uska kya jawab den... han aapne jo gana likha us me bhi zindi ko hansne gane ke lie sirf 2 pal hi diye gaye hain....

sath rahie...
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #19 on: April 16, 2011, 11:48:30 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahuty shukriya geetji..... aapne sath diya.... sath rahiega...
Logged
adil bechain
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 161
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
31 days, 18 hours and 24 minutes.

Posts: 6552
Member Since: Mar 2009


View Profile
«Reply #20 on: April 16, 2011, 12:53:18 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: manjum on April 15, 2011, 06:38:30 AM
Waqt ki deewar par
Ek poster si zindgi...

Kuchh ruke
Rukkar padha
kuchh ne ruk kar sirf dekha
Kuchh ne dali ek nazar
aur chal diye.....

kuchh ne noucha
bin padhe hi
aur kuchh the
khikhila kar hans diye.....

Bheed thi bhari magar
apne nahi the
ek chubhan thi aankh main
sapne nahin the...

dard tha
bas dard tha..
chain ka zara sa
marham nahin tha...

dard ki deewar par
ek poster si zindgi...

manju "mann"

daad ke liye alfaaz kahin ko gaye,
tumhare is soch pe hum thagey se rah gaye,

aaj tak ka aapka sabse behtreen kalaam
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #21 on: April 16, 2011, 01:40:28 PM »
Reply with quote
uff mnju ji…
aap smjhi nhi is gaane ka mtlb…

yaha zindgi hi pal 2 pal ki h
ise haste gaate gujar do bs…
ise kho na nai  hai…

aap nxt time mst wala jhumta post do hum…
meri ye demaand h ek baar fir se Usual Smile
mangna kb ki fitrat nhi
lekin aapse maang lia
mayus mat karna bas
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #22 on: April 16, 2011, 01:41:15 PM »
Reply with quote
uff mnju ji…
aap smjhi nhi is gaane ka mtlb…

yaha zindgi hi pal 2 pal ki h
ise haste gaate gujar do bs…
ise kho na nai  hai…

aap nxt time mst wala jhumta post do hum…
meri ye demaand h ek baar fir se Usual Smile
mangna kb ki fitrat nhi
lekin aapse maang lia
mayus mat karna bas
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #23 on: April 18, 2011, 03:34:30 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya adilji...

bas aapki zarra nawazi hai... jo aap ne daad di... aur pasand kiya....

yun hi sath rahiega.....
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #24 on: April 18, 2011, 03:37:33 AM »
Reply with quote
kbji... gane ma arth to pata hai par.. ese b soch kar dekhie ijaise hamne socha.. aur chalie man lia ki koi khushi se bhari hui rachna pash ki jae.. jaldi hi koshish karte hain... aapke lie..

thanks...
Logged
killbill
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 0
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
24 days, 7 hours and 41 minutes.
Posts: 2130
Member Since: Oct 2010


View Profile
«Reply #25 on: April 18, 2011, 03:53:21 AM »
Reply with quote
thanx…
apne meri baat maani Usual Smile
or apki tarah hum soch ke dekhene
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #26 on: April 18, 2011, 04:05:00 AM »
Reply with quote
ek purani post... "Dhoom machate ho.... " dekhiye... thoda khushi ka hai.... aapko shayad acha lage.. naya bhi likhenge.....

thanks
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #27 on: April 20, 2011, 11:49:59 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: manjum on April 15, 2011, 06:38:30 AM
Waqt ki deewar par
Ek poster si zindgi...

Kuchh ruke
Rukkar padha
kuchh ne ruk kar sirf dekha
Kuchh ne dali ek nazar
aur chal diye.....

kuchh ne noucha
bin padhe hi
aur kuchh the
khikhila kar hans diye.....

Bheed thi bhari magar
apne nahi the
ek chubhan thi aankh main
sapne nahin the...

dard tha
bas dard tha..
chain ka zara sa
marham nahin tha...

dard ki deewar par
ek poster si zindgi...

manju "mann"

bahoot khoobsoorati se likha hai mnjum ji apne.......sahi alfaz aur behtreen khayal......dheron daad aapki is rachna ko......... Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #28 on: April 20, 2011, 11:53:55 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: manjum on April 15, 2011, 06:38:30 AM
Waqt ki deewar par
Ek poster si zindgi...

Kuchh ruke
Rukkar padha
kuchh ne ruk kar sirf dekha
Kuchh ne dali ek nazar
aur chal diye.....

kuchh ne noucha
bin padhe hi
aur kuchh the
khikhila kar hans diye.....

Bheed thi bhari magar
apne nahi the
ek chubhan thi aankh main
sapne nahin the...

dard tha
bas dard tha..
chain ka zara sa
marham nahin tha...

dard ki deewar par
ek poster si zindgi...

manju "mann"

VERY NICE
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #29 on: April 20, 2011, 12:01:30 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya shebaji...

sath rahiega....
Logged
Pages: 1 [2] 3  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shairi - E - Zindagi > Topic: Waqt ki deewar par.....manjum
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 09:40:48 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.096 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer