watan ab de raha aawaaz.................MKV

by mkv on December 25, 2012, 04:39:14 PM
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watan ab de raha aawaaz denee hogi qurbaanee
Nikal aao gharoN se, hai agar jo baat manvaanee

nikalna hoga sadkoN par tabhee kuch ho sakegaa ab
jagaana hoga janta ko banee baitheei hai anjaanee

hamaaree betiyaaN bahueN sahe ab zillateN kitnee
dabaayeN kaise dil meN ab jo baateN lagti bemaanee

agar roka naheeN jaldee to samjho kho gayaa sab kuch
samay rahte khilaafat baat jaake sabko batlaanee

hata do zulm duniyaa se mitaa do vahshiyaanapan
sazaa do in darindoN ko na kar paaye ye manmaanee
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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2012, 05:07:35 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

mukesh ji bahut hi umda
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2012, 05:57:18 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2012, 06:00:02 PM »
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Mukesh bhai, bahut badhiya, excellent.
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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2012, 06:20:31 PM »
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Aakrosh ko abhivyakt karti hui
atyant shashakt evam samyik rachna.
Sadhuvad evam shubhkamnayen.
-Arun Mishra.
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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2012, 06:29:38 PM »
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bahu khoob , mukesh ji . waqai yahi waqt ki aaawaaz hai.
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 07:18:41 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 25, 2012, 04:39:14 PM
watan ab de raha aawaaz denee hogi qurbaanee
Nikal aao gharoN se, hai agar jo baat manvaanee

nikalna hoga sadkoN par tabhee kuch ho sakegaa ab
jagaana hoga janta ko banee baitheei hai anjaanee

hamaaree betiyaaN bahueN sahe ab zillateN kitnee
dabaayeN kaise dil meN ab jo baateN lagti bemaanee

agar roka naheeN jaldee to samjho kho gayaa sab kuch
samay rahte khilaafat baat jaake sabko batlaanee

hata do zulm duniyaa se mitaa do vahshiyaanapan
sazaa do in darindoN ko na kar paaye ye manmaanee


ek bulund jazba hai......!
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2012, 03:15:10 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 25, 2012, 04:39:14 PM
watan ab de raha aawaaz denee hogi qurbaanee
Nikal aao gharoN se, hai agar jo baat manvaanee

nikalna hoga sadkoN par tabhee kuch ho sakegaa ab
jagaana hoga janta ko banee baitheei hai anjaanee

hamaaree betiyaaN bahueN sahe ab zillateN kitnee
dabaayeN kaise dil meN ab jo baateN lagti bemaanee

agar roka naheeN jaldee to samjho kho gayaa sab kuch
samay rahte khilaafat baat jaake sabko batlaanee

hata do zulm duniyaa se mitaa do vahshiyaanapan
sazaa do in darindoN ko na kar paaye ye manmaanee

mukesh bhai, kya baat hai, bohut khoob shabdoN se zyada us jazbe ko salaam jo is rachna meN nazar aata hai. sahi kaha aapne ab waqt aa gaya hai apni buzdili aur kamzororiyoN ko chorhh kar ekjut hokar in buraiyoN ke khilaf awaz uthaane ka.. dherrooN mubarakbaad aapko is rachna ke liye . aur dherrooonnn salaaam aapke is jazbe ko ..... notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2012, 04:02:58 AM »
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ji bilkul sahi baat kahi aapne sir jiiiiiiiiii
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2012, 04:04:16 AM »
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bohut khub bohut umda bilkul sahi baat ki hai aapne acha sandesh mukesh ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2012, 04:15:34 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Mukesh ji......!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2012, 05:11:41 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 25, 2012, 04:39:14 PM
watan ab de raha aawaaz denee hogi qurbaanee
Nikal aao gharoN se, hai agar jo baat manvaanee

nikalna hoga sadkoN par tabhee kuch ho sakegaa ab
jagaana hoga janta ko banee baitheei hai anjaanee

hamaaree betiyaaN bahueN sahe ab zillateN kitnee
dabaayeN kaise dil meN ab jo baateN lagti bemaanee

agar roka naheeN jaldee to samjho kho gayaa sab kuch
samay rahte khilaafat baat jaake sabko batlaanee

hata do zulm duniyaa se mitaa do vahshiyaanapan
sazaa do in darindoN ko na kar paaye ye manmaanee

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waah waah mukesh ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 26, 2012, 05:36:59 AM »
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

kya jazba hai mukesh jee really hats off to you for this truly written kalam
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2012, 05:59:38 AM »
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waah waah kyaa burning topic liyaa hai saadhuwaad
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2012, 06:03:19 AM »
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Mukesh Sahab No Word This Creation Just Awesome Its True Creation Sir Ji

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