*** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***:Shairi - E

Zaif

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Tapti raat ke baad jhilmilata savera bhi tha..
Kal jali basti mein ek ghar mera bhi tha..

Kyun jalaya woh shazar Ae barq tune?
Haay haay! Usme kisi ka basera bhi tha..

Tere baad na laute wafa ke wo panchhi,
Mere dil mein jinka kabhi dera bhi tha..

Bezari mein bakht hi ki saazish na thi,
Pichhle janamo'n ka kuch phera bhi tha..

Tu hi thukraya tha zara yaad kar 'Zaif',
"Wo" maasoom shakhs kabhi tera bhi tha..


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Bishwajeet Anand Bsu

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2013, 07:12:42 PM »

kya kahne Zaif sahab, bahut hi umda kalam se nawaza hai aapne, bahut bahut khoob..
saare ahsaar bahut pasand aaye..
Applause


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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2013, 07:18:52 PM »

waah waah


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ParwaaZ

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 08:15:08 PM »

Zaif Sahaab Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab badi achchi aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne sabhi sher behad khoob rahe...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daaad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: Zaif on November 08, 2013, 07:07:44 PM

Bezari mein bakht hi ki saazish na thi,
Pichhle janamo'n ka kuch phera bhi tha..

Hum logoN meiN janmoN ko nahi mante is liye Is sher ke saani misre ko gar kuch youN kaheN toH baat bhi qayam raheNgi aur shayad durust bhi... yeH humara khayaal hai zaroori nahi ke aap isse mutafiq ho...

Bezari mein bakht hi ki saazish na thi,
Maazi ke karmoN ka phera bhi tha


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khujli

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #4 on: November 08, 2013, 08:37:17 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 08, 2013, 08:15:08 PM


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khujli

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #5 on: November 08, 2013, 08:38:39 PM »

Quote from: Zaif on November 08, 2013, 07:07:44 PM


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aqsh

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #6 on: November 08, 2013, 08:54:35 PM »

Quote from: Zaif on November 08, 2013, 07:07:44 PM

Awesomeeeeeeee zaif ji... aapki ghazalon ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai... aur mai yahan par parwaaz ji se sehmat hoon...baaki aap jaisa chaahe... is khooooob kalaam par hazaron dili daaaaaaad qubool kare....


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Saman Firdaus

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2013, 09:04:15 PM »

Veryyy nicee...


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Zaif

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2013, 11:24:19 PM »

Thnk to all.
Parwaaz ji, aqsh ji, hindu rivaajon me pichhle janam ko mana jata hai. Ye she'r isi nazariye se likha gya hai. Thnk u.. happy9


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mkv

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Re: *** Wo Maasoom Shakhs ***

«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2013, 11:51:08 PM »

Tapti raat ke baad jhilmilata savera bhi tha..
Kal jali basti mein ek ghar mera bhi tha..

Kyun jalaya woh shazar Ae barq tune?
Haay haay! Usme kisi ka basera bhi tha..

Tere baad na laute wafa ke wo panchhi,
Mere dil mein jinka kabhi dera bhi tha..

Bezari mein bakht hi ki saazish na thi,
Pichhle janamo'n ka kuch phera bhi tha..

Bahut khoob Zaif jee
khoob likhte hain aap..
bas wah wah aur wah aapke liye