wo shaam.......A.B

by adil bechain on May 29, 2012, 02:56:45 PM
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                          gire   aansu   kahaan  kab  royaa pataa nahin..,
                          hui   raat   kab   aur  kab soyaa pataa nahin..,

                          kamaaii   daulat   maine  her  lehaaz se lakin.,
                          khoyaa kyaa aur  kyaa payaa pataa nahin.,

                          wafaa   jisne   dikhaai   usi  ke ho liye hum.,
                          kaon looota aur  kisne aazmayaa pataa nahin.,

                          hain   zindaa    ab  talak khaa kar zakhm itne.,
                          di chot kisne, kisne marham lagayaa pataa nahin.,

                          khuli jab aankh apni to khud ko tanhaa dekha.,
                          thaa jo saath  kaafilaa kahaan gayaa pataa nahin.,

                          baad muddat 'bechain' hua jo saaamna aaine se.,
                          dahleez pe budhaape ki kab aayaa pataa nahin.,
                          

                          

                          
                          
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2012, 03:30:24 PM »
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                          gire   aansu   kahaan  kab  royaa pataa nahin..,
                          hui   raat   kab   aur  kab soyaa pataa nahin..,

                          kamaari   daulat   maine  her  lehaaz se lakin.,
                          khoyaa kyaa aur  kyaa payaa pataa nahin.,

                          wafaa   jisne   dikhaai   usi  ke ho liye hum.,
                          kaon looota aur  kisne aazmayaa pataa nahin.,

                          hain   zindaa    ab  talak khaa kar zakhm itne.,
                          di chot kisne, kisne marham lagayaa pataa nahin.,

                          khuli jab aankh apni to khud ko tanhaa dekha.,
                          thaa jo saath  kaafilaa kahaan gayaa pataa nahin.,

                          baad muddat 'bechain' hua jo saaamna aaine se.,
                          dahleez pe budhaape ki kab aayaa pataa nahin.,
                         

                         

                         
                         


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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2012, 05:57:14 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2012, 07:47:54 PM »
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Bohot khub.
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«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2012, 03:41:17 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2012, 03:31:24 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2012, 09:20:55 AM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...
bade gehre aur khoob khayaal piroye hai janab...

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe ... behad khoob aur
umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 

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Bahut Bahut Khooob Adil ji..

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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne bahut khoob jee bahut khoob...
bade gehre aur khoob khayaal piroye hai janab...

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe ... behad khoob aur
umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 



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