Woh Ek Daur..'Bachpan' "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 30, 2012, 02:16:44 PM
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Kal Raat Jagjit Singh Ji Ki Awaaz Mein Sudharshan Faakir Ji Ki Ek Anmol Nazm Suun  Raha Tha Jo Shayad
Mujh Ginti Bhi Nahi Hogi ke Kitne baar suun chuka Hoon..Jiske Bol Yeh the..
 
"Yeh Daulat Bhi Le Lo yeh Shohrat Bhi Le lo
  Bhale Cheen lo Mujhse Meri Jawaani
  Magar Mujhko Lauta Do Bachpan Ka Saawan
  Woh Kaaghaz Ki Kashti Woh Baarish Ka Paani..."

Suunte Suunte Aankhein Humesha Ki tarah Kuch Nam Hui Aur Kuch Bachpan ki Yaadon ne
Dil Mein Ghar kar Liya..Kalam Uthaai Aur unn Yaadon Ko Lafz Deta reh gaya..Kuch Bachpan Ki Baatein
Kuch  Apni Zindagi Se Juudi Yadein Hai ..Waqt Zaroor Dijiyega..



"Bachpan Ki Woh Ameeri Naa Jaane Kahaan Kho Gayi
Jab Paani Mein Humaare Bhi Jahaaz Chala Karte The..."




Bachpan Ki Yaadon Mein Kho Jaana Chaahta Hoon
Main Aaj Phir Unn Yaadon Mein Ro Jaana Chaahta Hoon....

Woh Ek Daur Jab Jebein Apni Khaali Hua Karti Thi
Kuch Paise Milne Par To Jaise Diwali Hua Karti Thi
Har Ek Se Apne Dil Ki Baatein Keh Jaana..!!!!
Dost Ke Ruthne Par Ashqon Ka Aankhon Se Beh Jaana

Woh Ek Daur Jab Khelne Ke Siva Kuch Aur Aata Nahi Tha
Kuch kehna Chahun To Sahi lafzon Mein keh Paata Nahi Tha
Woh Chota Sa Basta Jisme Kitaabein Rakha Karte The!!!
Woh Tooti Hui Pencil Ko Sharpener Se Ghassa karte The

Woh Ek Daur Jab Sirf Ro Dene Se Mann Halka Ho Jaata tha
Katti-Dosti kehkar Main RishtoN Ko Nibhaa Jaata Tha
Apnapan Jataane Ke Liye Mujhe Dikhawe Ki Zaroorat Naa Thi
Pyaar Ke Samundar Mein Jhoote Kinaaron Ki Zaroorat Naa Thi

Woh Ek Daur Jab Pehla Pyaar Kisi Hone Laga Tha
Main Neend- Sukoon Dono Saath Mein Khone Laga Tha
kisi Ke "I Love You" kehne Se Jaise meri Duniya Rukh Gayi Thi
Uska naam Lene Se Sharm se Meri Palkein Jhuk gayi Thi

Woh Ek Daur Jab ZarooratoN Ne Aage Chalna Seekhaya
Main Gira, Utha, Phir Chala, Par har Haal mein Muskuraya
Waqt Ne Imtehaan De-De kar Mujhko yeh samjhaaya
Yeh Zindagi Hai AnderoN Mein Saath Bhi Nahi Reh Paata Humsaaya

Woh Ek Daur Jab Zimmedariyan Nibhaana Hi Zindagi keh Laaye
Maa-Bap, Bhai-Behan, Biwi-Bachen saath Sirf yeh Rishte Reh Jaaye
Mujhe Shikayat Zindagi Se Hargizz Nahi Hai..!!!!!!
Woh Ek Daur Tha!!! Ab Yeh Daur Bhi Sahee Hai...

Main Aaj Khuli Aankhon Ke Sapno Mein Kho Jaana Jaata Hoon
"Khwaish" Kuch Yaadon Mein bas behkar Ro Jaana Chaahta Hoon


                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2012, 02:39:48 PM »
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Aapki es post ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kam h....
Jis tarah aapne bachpan ko hamari aankho ke samne la ke khara kar diya h uspe lakho daad hazir h...
Or ha ak RAU bhi
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2012, 02:59:25 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya baat hai Khwaish Ji.. Ak ak sher Apne aap mea Kahin Sachai darsha raha hai.. Woh bachpan ke Din yaad gaye.. Sach Mein Kitna Sach Likha hai ... Bahoot Bahoot Lajwaab peshkash. Dil ko chhu gai aapki yea peshkash ..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2012, 03:30:00 PM »
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beautifull khwahish jiii...bahut bahut sundar...Usual SmileUsual Smile...sahi baat vo daur b sahi hai ye daur bhi sahi hai.....   Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2012, 03:33:37 PM »
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Bahut  khoob  kaha  hai  Khwaish ji . Waqai  woh  suhaane  din  to  
ab  khwaab  hi  hain  jinhein  dekh  kar  hum  kuch  der  ke  liye
khush  ho lete  hain.
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2012, 03:59:10 PM »
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kya baat hai khwaish ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2012, 04:06:44 PM »
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khwaish ji bachpan ke ehsaason ko bahut hee achhe se nazm kiyaa hai aapne apne is kalaam men dheron daad haazir hain
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2012, 05:30:10 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Likha hai aapne khwaish ji
sab yaade jaise phir se taaji ho gayee..likhte rahiye

aap is mahfil ki shaan hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2012, 06:11:12 PM »
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Thank you so much KHWAISH JI for such a lovely poetry..... Usual Smile

bilkul sahi kaha aapne wo bachpan ki yaade kabhi nahi bhulayi jaa sakti...

bahut bahut khoob laakhon daad is ghazal pe...

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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2012, 06:36:15 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Janab jo aapne Jagjeet sahaab ki nazm ka zikra kiya hai waqai
dilfareb gazal hai, Sudarshan Fakheer sahaab ke nayaab khayaaloN
ko jo Jagjeet sahaab aur chitra jee ne awaaz dii hai jism ka
roa roaaN khada kar jati hai... Usual Smile

Aur usi gazal ki zameeN par aapne bhi umda khayaal bayaaN kiye hai...
bahut khoob janab sabhi ahsaas o khayaal behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad aur mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

HaaN aik tip zaroor dena chaheNge, gar sahiN lage toh
apnaiyega... Usual Smile
jab kisi geet ko aap baar baar sunkar us se mutasir ho kar
likh rahe haiN to aik koshish kariye ke usi geet ke rhythm
meiN likhne ki koshish kijiye... jise aap bhi apni kalaam ko gunguna sake.. Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye... aate rahiye...
shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile 


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bhut bhut umda likha hai aapne...
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2012, 08:32:16 PM »
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Dost,

Kya kehne iss nazm kay..Wah Wah Wah Wah..
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Honestly, no words to praise it..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on April 30, 2012, 02:39:48 PM
Aapki es post ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kam h....
Jis tarah aapne bachpan ko hamari aankho ke samne la ke khara kar diya h uspe lakho daad hazir h...
Or ha ak RAU bhi

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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2012, 05:25:07 PM »
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na jaane kitne lamho ko aapne taaza kr diya khwaish ji......kya kahein... icon_salut
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