WOH SAAMNE AAYA TO, RAAZ-E-DIL AYAAN HOGAYA..

by nazar ghouri on March 20, 2010, 12:50:44 AM
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WOH SAAMNE AAYA  TO , RAAZ-E-DIL AYAA'N HOGAYA...
ZABTH NE SAATH CHHOORDA ,AANSOO RAWAA'N HOGAYA..

EK GHAM RUKHSATT KYA HUWA!DOOSRA MEHMAA'N HOGAYA..
MERA DIL BHI JAISE, GHAMAO'N KA MAKAA'N HOGAYA....

JISE AATA NA THA,ANDAAZ-E-GUFTAGU TAK ,LEKIN.......
DEKHO! WOHI SHAKS AAJ, MEER-E-KAARWAA'N HOGAYA....

TERE AMAL SE HOGI ,MEHSHAR MAIN PEHCHAAN TERI....
ITNA KAAFI NAHI,KALMA PADHA AUR MUSALMAAN HOGAYA..

USE "HAQ" SUNNE KI AADATT NAHI THI SHAYED....!!!!!
AB KYA KAROO'N "NAZAR"?MUJHSE HAQQ BAYAA'N HOGAYA


                                               NAZAR GHOURI
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2010, 04:47:30 AM »
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Wah wah Nazar ji,great creation.bahut hi khoob Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2010, 05:03:46 AM »
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WAAAAAH! WAAAAH!BAHUT KHOOO icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2010, 06:32:56 AM »
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Wah wah Nazar ji bahut achha kalaam pesh kiya. Very nice.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2010, 06:56:50 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Nazar ji.. Bahoot Umda !
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minhaj.saif
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2010, 01:32:20 PM »
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Wah wah Nazar ji,great creation.bahut hi khoob Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks madhuwesh ji ,,kaafi din baad kuch likha ,i was bsy in training.nw i finished n prepairing myslf for interviews..du'a ki guzarish
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2010, 01:41:47 PM »
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thanks riyaz saheb..i don't knw wht actual "ghazal" demands,i am jst trying to write something which strikes to my mind n heart.waqif ansari saheb se pehchaan si hogai hai lekin kaafi din hoe unse baat kiye ...mujhe pata hai meri ghazalao'n ko islah ki shadeed zarorat hai,.lekin job se itna waqt nahi milta ke kisi se islah karwaaen.

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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2010, 02:17:19 PM »
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TERE AMAL SE HOGI ,MEHSHAR MAIN PEHCHAAN TERI....
ITNA KAAFI NAHI,KALMA PADHA AUR MUSALMAAN HOGAYA..




                                               NAZAR GHOURI
                                              HYDERABAD (INDIA)
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waah nazar sahab ,,bahut din baad dil ko chhoone wali shayeri padhne ko mili khass kar yeh sher bahoot khoob kaha hai. aisi shayeri ki aage bhi aap se umeed hai.





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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2010, 06:11:54 PM »
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Very nyc ... vll said ....
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2010, 11:14:34 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Hi Khoob Kalaam Likha Hai Aapne
Bahut Hi Khoob Nazar Ji....
Kaashkar Yeh Line To Aapne Badi
Achchi Aur Sachchi Likhi Hain Ji...
Hume Badi Pasand Aayi....



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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2010, 03:47:25 AM »
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WOH SAAMNE AAYA  TO , RAAZ-E-DIL AYAA'N HOGAYA...
ZABTH NE SAATH CHHOORDA ,AANSOO RAWAA'N HOGAYA..

EK GHAM RUKHSATT KYA HUWA!DOOSRA MEHMAA'N HOGAYA..
MERA DIL BHI JAISE, GHAMAO'N KA MAKAA'N HOGAYA....

JISE AATA NA THA,ANDAAZ-E-GUFTAGU TAK ,LEKIN.......
DEKHO! WOHI SHAKS AAJ, MEER-E-KAARWAA'N HOGAYA....

TERE AMAL SE HOGI ,MEHSHAR MAIN PEHCHAAN TERI....
ITNA KAAFI NAHI,KALMA PADHA AUR MUSALMAAN HOGAYA..

USE "HAQ" SUNNE KI AADATT NAHI THI SHAYED....!!!!!
AB KYA KAROO'N "NAZAR"?MUJHSE HAQQ BAYAA'N HOGAYA


                                               NAZAR GHOURI
                                              HYDERABAD (INDIA)
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Very good one NG Ji
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