Ye kaisa manzar hai...

by brokenbyluv on October 13, 2010, 07:26:30 PM
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Kuch naa keh pane ka ye kaisa manzar hai,
ankho se beheta ansuo ka samundar hai,

intezaar ki saza kuch lambi hoti jaa rahi hai,
merre dil pe terre ehsaso ka chal raha khanjar hai,

na terra pata hai malum na tujhe bula sakti hu main,
kisse kahu apna dard jo pal raha merre andar hai,

badi mushkil se lafzo ko samet kar kuch likh rahi hu,
bin terre har jazbaat har lafz merra banjar hai,

chup hu main aur khamosh hi rahungi ab tou,
kyunki mhbt mein jala dil aur kuch nhi bus ek bejaan khandar hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2010, 09:27:48 PM »
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Bahaut dard bhara hai iss nazm main Di..

Bahaut khoob..!

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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2010, 04:06:03 AM »
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Dil Ke Dard Ko Badi Sadgi Se Aapne
Lafzon Mein Utaara Hai Ji...
Har Lafz Mano Dard Mein Dooba Sa Laga
Ispe Wah Wah Karna To Dil Ghawara Nahi Karta
Bas Itna Kahunga Khush Raho Aabad Raho Ji.
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2010, 06:08:22 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        BROKENBYLUV JI.....

LOG KYA JANE MERE CHEHRE PE "YE KAISA MANZAR HAI"
MERE AANKHON ME KISKE ASHKON KA SAMUNDAR HAI
KHAMOSH MARTI JAA RAHI HUN KISI KO KUCH NAHI KAHETI
USKI JUDAI KE GUM KO DABBA RAKHA MERE DIL KE ANDAR HAI...
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2010, 07:32:27 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 13, 2010, 07:26:30 PM


Kuch naa keh pane ka ye kaisa manzar hai,
ankho se beheta ansuo ka samundar hai,

intezaar ki saza kuch lambi hoti jaa rahi hai,
merre dil pe terre ehsaso ka chal raha khanjar hai,

na terra pata hai malum na tujhe bula sakti hu main,
kisse kahu apna dard jo pal raha merre andar hai,

badi mushkil se lafzo ko samet kar kuch likh rahi hu,
bin terre har jazbaat har lafz merra banjar hai,

chup hu main aur khamosh hi rahungi ab tou,
kyunki mhbt mein jala dil aur kuch nhi bus ek bejaan khandar hai.........


Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Inni Saadgi Naal Gehri Galaan Kar lende Ho...

Bahut Hi Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2010, 11:35:36 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut shukriya cara ji,humdum ji,rahiim ji, aur khwaish ji...
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2010, 01:10:25 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut hi umda... par shikaayat hai aapse ek.. aap ajkal bahut zyaada dard pe likh rahi hain... agar dost samajhte hain humein to koshish kijiye kuch time romantic ya life pe likhne ka... mujhe lag raha hai aap is tarha dard me doobti chali jaa rahi hai... aise dard ko duur nahi kiya jaa sakta ... meri baat agar buri lage to maaf kijiyega... darasal main apne kisi bhi dost ko udaas nahi dekhna chaahta... par agar ye sirf ek poem hai , real life se aapke koi lena dena nahi then it's all right.. keep writing... take care dear...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2010, 01:16:52 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 14, 2010, 01:10:25 PM
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut hi umda... par shikaayat hai aapse ek.. aap ajkal bahut zyaada dard pe likh rahi hain... agar dost samajhte hain humein to koshish kijiye kuch time romantic ya life pe likhne ka... mujhe lag raha hai aap is tarha dard me doobti chali jaa rahi hai... aise dard ko duur nahi kiya jaa sakta ... meri baat agar buri lage to maaf kijiyega... darasal main apne kisi bhi dost ko udaas nahi dekhna chaahta... par agar ye sirf ek poem hai , real life se aapke koi lena dena nahi then it's all right.. keep writing... take care dear...!!!

Kapil Ji, main Aapke Bhawnao Ki sache dil se izzat karta hoon, AUr mujhe khushi bhi hui hai ke Aap ek sache dost aur Humdard Ho Par Kapil ji, Dard agar dil se Utar kar Lafzon mein Dhal Jaaye to yakeenan Dard Ka ehsaas Kam Hota Hai..Varna insaan dard ko dil hi dil mein paalta reh jaata hai..Main bhi yehi Umeed Aur dua karunga ke Yeh jazbaat Niji  Zindagi se Juude na Ho..
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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2010, 01:20:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji.. yahi baat mujhe aapse bhi kehna tha... kyunki aapki rachnaaon me bhi kuch time se bahut dard nazar aa raha hai... haste rahiye muskuraaate ahiye...!!!

Quote from: khwaish on October 14, 2010, 01:16:52 PM
Kapil Ji, main Aapke Bhawnao Ki sache dil se izzat karta hoon, AUr mujhe khushi bhi hui hai ke Aap ek sache dost aur Humdard Ho Par Kapil ji, Dard agar dil se Utar kar Lafzon mein Dhal Jaaye to yakeenan Dard Ka ehsaas Kam Hota Hai..Varna insaan dard ko dil hi dil mein paalta reh jaata hai..Main bhi yehi Umeed Aur dua karunga ke Yeh jazbaat Niji  Zindagi se Juude na Ho..
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2010, 01:24:13 PM »
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Aur main aapki baat se bhi sehmat hoon Khwaish ji ki dard ko shabdon me utar len to dard halka hota hai...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2010, 01:41:00 PM »
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ye jawani meri kuda ki nomat hai alla

ye jawani teri khuda ki sogat hai alla

tere ik jhalak pane ki kwahish kya bat hai alla

sochata tha hame kabhi lubha na sakega husan ka jalwa

tere jalwae ne kiya madhosh kya bat hai alla

apni parchai ko bhi sambhal ke rakhne wala na sambhal saka dil ko apne hai alla

sab bato se anjan ek bat ke liye pareshan kya kiya tune hai alla

ab m kisi ko nahi kahuga ishq nahi karan.............

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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2010, 02:15:02 PM »
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no words........

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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2010, 02:37:03 PM »
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BBL jee aadaab!

Kia baat hai kafi dilfareb aur dilkash ashaaroN se nawaaza hai aapne..
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe..

Hume sabhi ashaar pasand aaye daad...
Likhate rahiye....

Khush rahiye...
Khdua Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2010, 10:57:11 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 14, 2010, 01:10:25 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji.. bahut hi umda... par shikaayat hai aapse ek.. aap ajkal bahut zyaada dard pe likh rahi hain... agar dost samajhte hain humein to koshish kijiye kuch time romantic ya life pe likhne ka... mujhe lag raha hai aap is tarha dard me doobti chali jaa rahi hai... aise dard ko duur nahi kiya jaa sakta ... meri baat agar buri lage to maaf kijiyega... darasal main apne kisi bhi dost ko udaas nahi dekhna chaahta... par agar ye sirf ek poem hai , real life se aapke koi lena dena nahi then it's all right.. keep writing... take care dear...!!!

Quote from: khwaish on October 14, 2010, 01:16:52 PM
Kapil Ji, main Aapke Bhawnao Ki sache dil se izzat karta hoon, AUr mujhe khushi bhi hui hai ke Aap ek sache dost aur Humdard Ho Par Kapil ji, Dard agar dil se Utar kar Lafzon mein Dhal Jaaye to yakeenan Dard Ka ehsaas Kam Hota Hai..Varna insaan dard ko dil hi dil mein paalta reh jaata hai..Main bhi yehi Umeed Aur dua karunga ke Yeh jazbaat Niji  Zindagi se Juude na Ho..

Bahut shurkiya kapil ji aur khwaish ji..

Kapil ji aksar zindgi mein waqt aur jazbaat ek se nhi rehte,kuch waqt pehele maine kayi poems khumar-e-ishq mein post ki hai aaj dard section mein kar rahi hu,main koshish karungi jald hi kuch romantic likhen ka...haan ji magar agar aap chahte hai ki main kuch pyar bhara likhu tou apko merre liye duaye zarur karni padegi...khwaish ji apne bilkul sahi kaha hai ji likh dene se dard kam ho jata hai...aur main bhi wahi karti hu..bahut bahut shurkiyaa aap dono ka....
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«Reply #14 on: October 19, 2010, 10:58:16 AM »
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Quote from: omprakash suthar on October 14, 2010, 01:41:00 PM
ye jawani meri kuda ki nomat hai alla

ye jawani teri khuda ki sogat hai alla

tere ik jhalak pane ki kwahish kya bat hai alla

sochata tha hame kabhi lubha na sakega husan ka jalwa

tere jalwae ne kiya madhosh kya bat hai alla

apni parchai ko bhi sambhal ke rakhne wala na sambhal saka dil ko apne hai alla

sab bato se anjan ek bat ke liye pareshan kya kiya tune hai alla

ab m kisi ko nahi kahuga ishq nahi karan.............

kyoki

muje bhi ho gaya h ab to ishq hai alla

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Nice om ji..shukriya share karne k liye..
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