Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

by brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 05:07:13 PM
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Jane kaisa andhera hai merre aas paas,
door se dekho tou roshni lagti hai,

yu tou zindadili ka ehsas hai merre aas paas,
gaur se dekho tou har fiza sehmi lagti hai,

kehne ko tou sab apne hai merre aas paas,
azma k dekho tou har baat beimaani lagti hai,

waise tou ye sach ka aaina hai merre aas paas..
phir bhi soch k dekho tou ek kahani lagti hai......
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 05:14:21 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 05:07:13 PM
Jane kaisa andhera hai merre aas paas,
door se dekho tou roshni lagti hai,

yu tou zindadili ka ehsas hai merre aas paas,
gaur se dekho tou har fiza sehmi lagti hai,

kehne ko tou sab apne hai merre aas paas,
azma k dekho tou har baat beimaani lagti hai,

waise tou ye sach ka aaina hai merre aas paas..
phir bhi soch k dekho tou ek kahani lagti hai......

Bahut khoob likha tumne Geet  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2010, 05:24:40 PM »
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thnx malli ji..
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2010, 07:30:01 PM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Geet ji,very touching and lovely creation.excellent. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause love4 love9 wave
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2010, 07:33:10 PM »
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thnx alot madhu ji...
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2010, 09:02:15 PM »
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Wah bohat khoooob very tochy and true...very nice dear geet Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2010, 09:35:56 PM »
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Wah very nice Shihab ji bohat dard hai isme...
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2010, 09:52:28 PM »
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Its my pleasure ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2010, 05:24:48 AM »
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Very nice poem BBL ji. Minblowing creaton.
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«Reply #9 on: February 01, 2010, 12:22:22 PM »
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thnx alot pari ji,shihab ji n riyaz ji...notworthy
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2010, 12:34:04 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2010, 09:25:06 PM

Dil Aaj Kuch Is Qadar Toota Sa Nazar Aata Hai
Ki Har Rishta Mujhey Jhutha Sa Nazar Aata Hai

Sukh Gayi Hain Aankhen Ab Aansu Bahate Bahate
Dard Bhi Jaise Mujhse Rootha Sa Nazar Aata Hai

Anjaan Hoon Aaj Khudse Main Dekhta Nahi Aaina
Mujhey Usme Woh Chehra Jhutha Sa Nazar Aata Hai

Kahan Jaaun Ab Men Paane Ko Raahat e Dil Shihab
Hr Umeed.e.Charag Bujha Bujha Sa Nazar Aata Hai.!


                   ~Shihab~



Bahut bahut khoob shihab ji...

Iss kadar zamane se ruth jayenge malum na tha,
ek pal mein bikhar jayenge malum na tha,
dekhkar bhi ankhe vishwas nhi karti ab tou..
iss kadar sach se darr jayenge malum naa tha......
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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2010, 12:48:08 PM »
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Oye bada khoosurat likha hai Geet-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aasha aur nirasha k beech jhulti hai tu
Aasmaa ko kabhi dharti ko dekhti hai tu




Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 31, 2010, 05:07:13 PM
Jane kaisa andhera hai merre aas paas,
door se dekho tou roshni lagti hai,

yu tou zindadili ka ehsas hai merre aas paas,
gaur se dekho tou har fiza sehmi lagti hai,

kehne ko tou sab apne hai merre aas paas,
azma k dekho tou har baat beimaani lagti hai,

waise tou ye sach ka aaina hai merre aas paas..
phir bhi soch k dekho tou ek kahani lagti hai......
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2010, 01:20:23 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 01, 2010, 12:48:08 PM
Oye bada khoosurat likha hai Geet-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aasha aur nirasha k beech jhulti hai tu
Aasmaa ko kabhi dharti ko dekhti hai tu





thnx shihab ji n koyal...

Asha hai use paane ki
aur nirasha hai use gawane ki..
mil gye tou jannat hasil ho jayegi..
warna pados mein hai mehfil maikhane ki...Giggle (just kidding)
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2010, 11:11:11 AM »
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बहुत खूबसूरत लिखा है गीत जी आपने Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2010, 06:13:11 PM »
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Thanks a lot Geet-di.....you liked my lines.....
you have also written very good...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah wah Kya baat hai Geet-di
Masti mai jhoom rahi ho tum

Maiy aur maiykhano ki baat karti ho tum
Miljaayega,tujhe chhod kahaan jaayega wo

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 01, 2010, 01:20:23 PM
thnx shihab ji n koyal...

Asha hai use paane ki
aur nirasha hai use gawane ki..
mil gye tou jannat hasil ho jayegi..
warna pados mein hai mehfil maikhane ki...Giggle (just kidding)
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