Ye kya hai merre aas paas??? -Panna 2:Shairi - E

brokenbyluv

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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2010, 03:03:15 PM »

thnx rishi ji...

kaash ji yu hi socha kuch hasa du apne dosto ko hamesha dard bhari shayari hi apke saamne pesh karti hu..khair shukriya ki apko psnd aayi...

koyal ur welcome sweetu...

Masti tou uske pyar ki hai,
jo mujhper nashe ki trh sawar hai,
keh de koi mujhe ki vo sirrf merra hai,
phir tod du main use jo hum dono k beech diwar hai......


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KOYAL46

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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2010, 06:15:43 PM »

Thanks once again Geet-di.....mujhe sabhashi dene k liye... icon_flower

Main he tujhe bataa du di wo kewal tera hai
Wo jis nashe mai dooba hai wo bhee tera hai

Ab kis deewaar ki Geet tu baat karti hai
Yahi tou tere pyaar-mohabbt ki masti hai

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 04, 2010, 03:03:15 PM


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Ye kya hai merre aas paas???

«Reply #17 on: February 04, 2010, 06:34:12 PM »

bahut khoob per kuch change kar k dekhna it can b better..sorry yahan keh rahi hu per i hope it will help u to do better...

Ye aaj terre lafzo mein kaise merra naam aaya,
madhosh se the hum aaj jake hamein kuch hosh aaya,
tu wahi shakhs hai naa merre ajnabi,
jise hamesha merre dil ne hai apni duao mein basaya......


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