ye kya koi tanz hai?

by bekarar on February 17, 2009, 07:38:31 AM
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duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tum-ko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,

sun-sunkar mai sochta hun, ye kya koi mujh par tana hai,
kya ye koi shikayat meri, kaisa ye ulhaana hai,
kya ye mera up-haas hai ya fir meri prashansa hai,
kyun mujhe ye hardam kahti ho,kya tumhaari mansha hai,

soch-soch ke hara mai, fir tumase kiye sawal yahi,
tum hans di, muska-kar boli, diya fir jawab yahi,
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tumko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2009, 07:54:30 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 17, 2009, 07:38:31 AM
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tum-ko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,

sun-sunkar mai sochta hun, ye kya koi mujh par tana hai,
kya ye koi shikayat meri, kaisa ye ulhaana hai,
kya ye mera up-haas hai ya fir meri prashansa hai,
kyun mujhe ye hardam kahti ho,kya tumhaari mansha hai,

soch-soch ke hara mai, fir tumase kiye sawal yahi,
tum hans di, muska-kar boli, diya fir jawab yahi,
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tumko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,


wow nice 1 sanjeev ji...
Last para badiya likha hai aapne  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2009, 07:56:18 AM »
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Very nice Bekarar ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2009, 08:00:36 AM »
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bahoot shukriya roja...
thanks salma ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2009, 08:16:06 AM »
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duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tum-ko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,

sun-sunkar mai sochta hun, ye kya koi mujh par tana hai,
kya ye koi shikayat meri, kaisa ye ulhaana hai,
kya ye mera up-haas hai ya fir meri prashansa hai,
kyun mujhe ye hardam kahti ho,kya tumhaari mansha hai,

soch-soch ke hara mai, fir tumase kiye sawal yahi,
tum hans di, muska-kar boli, diya fir jawab yahi,
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tumko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,


Bohot din baad padha aapko, Sanjeev Ji, ek baar phir se kuch alag..bohot khoob !!
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2009, 08:19:56 AM »
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pasand karne ke liye shukriya talat...
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 01:49:40 PM »
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Kya baat hain mere yaar sab khairiyat to hain  DOH Bada diljala kalam likha hain  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2009, 04:37:15 PM »
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duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tum-ko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,

sun-sunkar mai sochta hun, ye kya koi mujh par tana hai,
kya ye koi shikayat meri, kaisa ye ulhaana hai,
kya ye mera up-haas hai ya fir meri prashansa hai,
kyun mujhe ye hardam kahti ho,kya tumhaari mansha hai,

soch-soch ke hara mai, fir tumase kiye sawal yahi,
tum hans di, muska-kar boli, diya fir jawab yahi,
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tumko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,


bahoot khoob Bekarar ji... bahot he dil se aor bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai.. bahoot khoob!!
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Kya baat hain mere yaar sab khairiyat to hain  DOH Bada diljala kalam likha hain  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sab thik hai bhai tu kuch jyada hi samajh jata hai.....shukriya pasand karne ke liye.
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bahoot khoob Bekarar ji... bahot he dil se aor bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai.. bahoot khoob!!
shukriya pooja ji aapne waqt diya
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Bahut khoob Bekarar ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Quote from: bekarar on February 17, 2009, 07:38:31 AM
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tum-ko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,

sun-sunkar mai sochta hun, ye kya koi mujh par tana hai,
kya ye koi shikayat meri, kaisa ye ulhaana hai,
kya ye mera up-haas hai ya fir meri prashansa hai,
kyun mujhe ye hardam kahti ho,kya tumhaari mansha hai,

soch-soch ke hara mai, fir tumase kiye sawal yahi,
tum hans di, muska-kar boli, diya fir jawab yahi,
duniya ki tumko samajh nai, duniya-daari me kachche ho,
kaise tumko samjha-un, tum sach me bilkul bachche ho,
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