yeh alp bhee kitna adhik he

by Prateek Mardia on March 29, 2008, 04:21:31 AM
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Maine apni hasth-rekhaon ko behad gaur se padha he
atyant laghu jeevan mera mere liye kitna bada he!

sanshay isme kahan zara bhee
satya sarv-vidit-shaktishaali....
sukh ki ghadiyan bhagdarwaali
dukh ne kachue ki he chaal apnali!
fir jis jeevan ka parichay keval dukh se,
ya dukh he jiski paribhasha,
sukh bunkar jiase mrigtrishna,
reh jaaye keval ek abhillasha.....

aise jeevan ki aayu pur
kya rona, pachtana, shok manana....
 aur haan--mut hasna meri in mook rekhaon par bhee..
yeh vastvikta nahi darshaye,
inme to seemit gyan samaye
yeh alp bhee kitna adhik he.......
keval dil yeh baat samajhta he...
dukh ka har kshan kitna..
dheere dheere kat-ta he......


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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2008, 01:47:46 AM »
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Yeh kavita mujh se chhupi rahee, aisa kyun Prateek mitr.
Aap jabhi kuchh likho to soochna deden.
Atti bhaavuk vichaar prastut kiye hain aap ne.

(S Naami)
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2008, 01:59:08 PM »
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good one prateek ji!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2008, 02:17:41 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 05, 2008, 01:47:46 AM
Yeh kavita mujh se chhupi rahee, aisa kyun Prateek mitr.
Aap jabhi kuchh likho to soochna deden.
Atti bhaavuk vichaar prastut kiye hain aap ne.

(S Naami)

kuch kavitayein aapse darti hein--khin aap unhe aashawadi na bana de aur dard ka maza chala jaye--isliye aapke samne aane mein jhijhak rahi hongi! unhe kya pata tha..aap dushmanon ko un ke gharon se dhoond le aate he!

Shukriya aapne is kavita ki bhee sarahna ki.

Prateek

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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2008, 02:19:31 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2008, 01:59:08 PM
good one prateek ji!!

 bhaut shukriya pooja ji aapka.
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2008, 02:38:52 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 05, 2008, 02:17:41 PM
kuch kavitayein aapse darti hein--khin aap unhe aashawadi na bana de aur dard ka maza chala jaye--isliye aapke samne aane mein jhijhak rahi hongi! unhe kya pata tha..aap dushmanon ko un ke gharon se dhoond le aate he!

Shukriya aapne is kavita ki bhee sarahna ki.

Prateek

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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2008, 02:58:06 AM »
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sanshay isme kahan zara bhee
satya sarv-vidit-shaktishaali....
sukh ki ghadiyan bhagdarwaali
dukh ne kachue ki he chaal apnali!
fir jis jeevan ka parichay keval dukh se,
ya dukh he jiski paribhasha,
sukh bunkar jiase mrigtrishna,
reh jaaye keval ek abhillasha.....

Prateek aap bahut accha likhe hai.
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2008, 06:53:20 AM »
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In ki visheshta ko parakhna koi saral kaam nahin. Yeh adbudh likhte hain.
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2008, 12:56:15 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 29, 2008, 04:21:31 AM
Maine apni hasth-rekhaon ko behad gaur se padha he
atyant laghu jeevan mera mere liye kitna bada he!

sanshay isme kahan zara bhee
satya sarv-vidit-shaktishaali....
sukh ki ghadiyan bhagdarwaali
dukh ne kachue ki he chaal apnali!
fir jis jeevan ka parichay keval dukh se,
ya dukh he jiski paribhasha,
sukh bunkar jiase mrigtrishna,
reh jaaye keval ek abhillasha.....

aise jeevan ki aayu pur
kya rona, pachtana, shok manana....
 aur haan--mut hasna meri in mook rekhaon par bhee..
yeh vastvikta nahi darshaye,
inme to seemit gyan samaye
yeh alp bhee kitna adhik he.......
keval dil yeh baat samajhta he...
dukh ka har kshan kitna..
dheere dheere kat-ta he......


Prateek
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Dukh ka har kshan kitne dheere dheere katata hai... wah!! Ati sunder!!

Karmo ka hai phal, jo tu bhogne ayya hai
Chota ho ab ho yah bada, kaya koi anter laya hai?

Laghu rekha ne to tujhko, khushi ka raag sunaya hai
Chal-kapat ki is dunia main mehmaan ban ke ayya hai

Moh-maya ka jaal hai sara, kis duvidha mai ayya hai
Dukh jo tu dukh na maane, phir kaya sukh, kaya dukh ayya hai!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2008, 01:57:58 PM »
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Aap ne bhi visheshta ka prayatna kar hrday ko kushal kar diya.
Atti sundar pantiyaan...
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2008, 02:12:52 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 06, 2008, 06:53:20 AM
In ki visheshta ko parakhna koi saral kaam nahin. Yeh adbudh likhte hain.

Syeednaami ji,

saadharan mein visheshtaye dhoond rahe he...kuch pahuche hue johri he!.aap jaise mitron ka haath sur pur rehna chaiye,aur kya chahiye.shukriya.

Quote from: Roja on May 06, 2008, 02:58:06 AM
Prateek aap bahut accha likhe hai.

roja ji,bahut abhaari.
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2008, 02:16:18 PM »
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Quote from: sarthika on May 06, 2008, 12:56:15 PM
Dukh ka har kshan kitne dheere dheere katata hai... wah!! Ati sunder!!

Karmo ka hai phal, jo tu bhogne ayya hai
Chota ho ab ho yah bada, kaya koi anter laya hai?

Laghu rekha ne to tujhko, khushi ka raag sunaya hai
Chal-kapat ki is dunia main mehmaan ban ke ayya hai

Moh-maya ka jaal hai sara, kis duvidha mai ayya hai
Dukh jo tu dukh na maane, phir kaya sukh, kaya dukh ayya hai!!


Saarthika ji,

bahut accha likha he aapne bhee, is kavitsa ki gehrai ko samajhne aur apne vichaaron se is panne par hastakshar karne ke liye shukriya.

Prateek
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2008, 02:51:08 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on May 06, 2008, 02:12:52 PM
Syeednaami ji,

saadharan mein visheshtaye dhoond rahe he...kuch pahuche hue johri he!.aap jaise mitron ka haath sur pur rehna chaiye,aur kya chahiye.shukriya.

roja ji,bahut abhaari.

Aap jaise mitron ka sahyog na hota to hum bhala kab apne sanskaaron par chal paate, yeh to prerna thi jo aapne hamaare haathon men upaadi ke swaroop thama di bhaya.

Aabhari

S Naami
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2008, 06:53:50 PM »
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bahut khoob!!!

bahut acha likha hai prateekji..aap ki likhi kavita padhne mein waqt zaroor lagta hai par padh kar anand aata hai..bahut ache..
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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2008, 07:11:25 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 28, 2008, 06:53:50 PM
bahut khoob!!!

bahut acha likha hai prateekji..aap ki likhi kavita padhne mein waqt zaroor lagta hai par padh kar anand aata hai..bahut ache..

khwaaish ji-khwaaish thee ki yeh kavita aap tuk pahuch-ti,pahuch gayi-sakoon he.

waqt ka aap bharte hein kyon dum
'waqt' to mere paas hein kum
khule dil se fir bhee hu lutaata
haasil tabhi raahat-e-ghum!

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