Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!

by abdbundeli on April 28, 2009, 01:29:47 PM
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Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!
Lamhey aatey hain, guzartey hain, guzar jaatey hain!
Woh nahen hain yahaan qareeb kaheen bhee; leykin,
Ham shab-o-roz, subah-o-shaam muskuraatey hain!

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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2009, 01:33:56 PM »
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Wah Simply good...Superb creation Uncle ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2009, 01:50:38 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 28, 2009, 01:33:56 PM
Wah Simply good...Superb creation Uncle ji  Clapping Smiley
Shukriyah Roja ji! I hope you're now all okay!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2009, 03:29:28 PM »
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Very nicely presented
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 07:21:35 PM »
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wah Abd ji kaya baat hai....
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«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2009, 03:33:30 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on April 28, 2009, 03:29:28 PM
Very nicely presented

Thanks, anjaan dharkan ji!
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2009, 03:34:20 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2009, 07:21:35 PM
wah Abd ji kaya baat hai....


Thanks, Pooja ji!
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 03:40:16 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 28, 2009, 01:29:47 PM
Yeh dour-e-zeest hai, gamkhwaar bhee sataatey hain!
Lamhey aatey hain, guzartey hain, guzar jaatey hain!
Woh nahen hain yahaan qareeb kaheen bhee; leykin,
Ham shab-o-roz, subah-o-shaam muskuraatey hain!

                                        - abd bundeli



Wah Wah Abd Ji Applause

Hamesha ki tarah, beautifully written!
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 04:43:14 AM »
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Wah wah Bahoot khoob ABD ji!
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 05:59:09 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on April 29, 2009, 03:40:16 AM

Wah Wah Abd Ji Applause

Hamesha ki tarah, beautifully written!
Deepati ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! I hope all is quite okay over there!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2009, 06:01:35 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 29, 2009, 04:43:14 AM
Wah wah Bahoot khoob ABD ji!
Sophi ji! Aapko qatah achchhaa lagaa, shukriyah!
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 06:04:57 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 29, 2009, 06:04:57 AM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 12:44:13 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on April 29, 2009, 05:59:09 AM
Deepati ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! I hope all is quite okay over there!!
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You are most welcome, Abd Ji.  It is always a pleasure to read your poetry.

All is well here!  Thank You for your kind gesture! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2009, 05:14:10 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 02, 2009, 02:03:36 PM

bahot hi acha likha hai aapne Abd ji,

as a shayar i dn deserve to give comments or say
ki aapne acha likha hai coz u r so senior but phir bhi mujhe acha laga to likha, tahe dil se daad qubool kijie

Thanks a lot, @kaash ji! Kayee 'junior' bhi saikarhoun 'seniors' sey achchhaa likhtey hain! Aap 'sammaan' deytey hain, wah aap kaa 'badappan' hai!
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