Yeh eik daryah hai!

by abdbundeli on November 02, 2008, 08:03:13 AM
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Janaab! Yeh eik daryah hai!
Yeh, pahaarh par chadhhtee naheen,
Pahaarh sey utartee hai!
Aisey hi, insaan ki jawaanee:
Dikhaayee to aisee parhtee hai,
Jaisey chadhhtee ho;
Par haqeeqat kuchh aur hi hai:
Jawaanee chadhhtee to hai thorhee,
Par, ziyaadah utartee hai!!
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2008, 09:19:56 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 02, 2008, 08:03:13 AM
Janaab! Yeh eik daryah hai!
Yeh, pahaarh par chadhhtee naheen,
Pahaarh sey utartee hai!
Aisey hi, insaan ki jawaanee:
Dikhaayee to aisee parhtee hai,
Jaisey chadhhtee ho;
Par haqeeqat kuchh aur hi hai:
Jawaanee chadhhtee to hai thorhee,
Par, ziyaadah utartee hai!!
             - abd bundeli

Utarna chadna phir utarna
Yeh kaisi batein tum abd karte ho
Jane anajne me sahi lekin
Haseen batein dimag me bharte ho
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2008, 11:24:23 AM »
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Jeewan mein sarwatra hain,
Mitra, utaar-chadhhaaw!
Nirdhaarit kartey sabhee,
Man sey, man key bhaaw!!
       - Ram Prakash Garg'Ramwatita'
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honeyrose
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2008, 01:46:51 PM »
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Applause
Bohat khoob Abd ji..
Nice reply SG..
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2008, 02:14:37 PM »
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Thanks a lot, honeyrose ji,
              - abd bundeli
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2008, 04:40:44 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Abd ji, Jawani ko kis roop main shabdo se ubhara hai apne..

Sochne ki baat hai, soch per her baat nidharit
jawani kisi ki doobi, kisi ka budapa bhi kare protsahit
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2008, 05:06:39 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 04, 2008, 04:40:44 PM
wah kaya baat hai Abd ji, Jawani ko kis roop main shabdo se ubhara hai apne..

Sochne ki baat hai, soch per her baat nidharit
jawani kisi ki doobi, kisi ka budapa bhi kare protsahit

badi masumiyat se kam shehar ke shareef karte hain
andaze bayaan badal kar apni hi tareef karte hain
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2008, 05:26:15 PM »
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Achcha likha hai ABD Ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2008, 05:36:22 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Man sey, man key bhaw prakat karney mein dar kyaa?
Jo bheetar hotaa hai, wo jaataa baahar kyaa?
Kahey 'abd bundeli', man ki raakho man mein;
Abhi bahut kuchh honaa baaqee hai jeewan mein!!
               - Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
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Isey, mool 'dohey' key saath milaa kar padhhiyegaa, to, 'Kundaliyaa' kaa roop nazar aayegaa!      
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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2008, 05:38:05 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Abd ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 04, 2008, 05:40:31 PM »
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Pooja ji/Rajesh Harish ji!
Thanks a lot! i'm happy  you got some thing worth reading in it!
                           -Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'          
    
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«Reply #11 on: November 04, 2008, 07:06:30 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 04, 2008, 05:36:22 PM
sajid_ghayel ji!
Man sey, man key bhaw prakat karney mein dar kyaa?
Jo bheetar hotaa hai, wo jaataa baahar kyaa?
Kahey 'abd bundeli', man ki raakho man mein;
Abhi bahut kuchh honaa baaqee hai jeewan mein!!
               - Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
N.B.
Isey, mool 'dohey' key saath milaa kar padhhiyegaa, to, 'Kundaliyaa' kaa roop nazar aayegaa!      

kya baat hain abd ji aapkiu bohattttttttttttttttttt badi stature wali pooja ji ko jawab dena nahi aata kya jo aap unki taraf se beech me bol rahe hain kabhi kabhi aap mushaiyre ki tehzeeb ko hi nahi samjte ho aur beech me kud padte ho
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2008, 04:07:47 AM »
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Mein kabhi kisee mushaairey mein gayaa hi naheen hoon, to mujhey wo tahzeeb kahaan sey aayegee, sunney bhi naheen jaataa hoon!
                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: November 05, 2008, 06:56:23 AM »
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koi baat nahi agla mushaira main sponsor karuga aur chief guest aapko hi banaooga.
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«Reply #14 on: November 05, 2008, 08:20:29 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 05, 2008, 06:56:23 AM
koi baat nahi agla mushaira main sponsor karuga aur chief guest aapko hi banaooga.

sajid_ghayel ji!
Kamaal key insaan ho! Aor kyaa kahoon? Shukriyah!
               - Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
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