Yeh mere shehar ko......( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on June 08, 2009, 02:49:20 PM
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Ek ajeeb si peshkash ki hai shayed aap sabko itni pasand na aaye, ise aap kavita bhi keh sakte hain, bas likhta chala gaya.........waise aap sabko bohat miss kiya hain aaj hi lauta hu kokan se, apni gairhazri ke liye aap sab se mafi chahta hu.

Yeh mere shehar ko kya ho gaya
Woh masoom bachpan woh ladakpan kaha kho gaya
Bheed me bhi tanha akayla hu main
Kaha hain woh galiya jinpe khela hu main
Aaj ka bachpan jawani se pehle budha ho gaya

Woh dango ka shor woh mao ki cheekh
Har sadak ke kinare phaila aachal
Phaili nanhi bahe mangti bheek
Har chehra yaha par hain murjha gaya
Kisi ko thoda mila to koi bhookha so gaya

Har ghar me yaha ek berozgaar hain
Yeh shehar jaise mano beemar hain lachar hain
Achchi degree nahi kam aati hain aaj
Arey naukri hi nahi yaha to bikti hain laaj
Har shaks yaha par bikta gaya
Koi kismat ke hatho majboor tha to koi lalchi ho gaya

Woh izzat kaha hain bahu beti ki aaj
Kahi sati ki chita to kahi dahej ki aag
Ma bhi aurat hain yeh bhool jate hain logh
Ladki paida ho to matam manate hain logh
Sharm se hain aaj sar mera jhuk gaya
Jo sapna maine dekha tha sapna hi reh gaya

Na hi koi Mahatma na Tilak hain aaj
Gandi bastiyo me hain dooba mera samaj
Koi mujhko aakhir mera bachpan lauta do
Woh hasta khelta masoom sa shehar lauta do
Woh shehar jisme na koi bhooka ho na mange koi bheekh
Na suhagan ka suhaag ujde na sunaiee de mao ki cheekh
Jaha dharam ke nam par koi na jhagde na hi koi fasad ho
Jaha har raat diwali lage aur har din mano eid ki yaad ho
Phir koi na kahega yeh mere shehar ko kya ho gaya
Woh masoom bachpan woh ladakpan kaha kho gaya

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 07:54:57 PM »
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Welcome back Sajid Bhai......Aapne to aaj ke daur ki sachchai likh daali hai yahan....Bohot hi Khoob....Daad dete hue taklef bhi hoti hai ki jo likha hai wo bohot takleefdah sach bhi hai......Aapne is sach ko, iss dard ko alfaaz main dhaal diya...Bohot  Khoob !!  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2009, 09:16:24 PM »
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Applause Applause Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai Ghayel Saheb...Welcome back...
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2009, 10:29:37 PM »
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bohot khoob very touching words

thanks for sharing
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 12:10:22 AM »
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Very beautiful creation Sajid ji,kyun aapne socha pasand na aaye shayad,
Excellent,bahut acha likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause


 
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 05:11:26 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 08, 2009, 02:49:20 PM
Ek ajeeb si peshkash ki hai shayed aap sabko itni pasand na aaye, ise aap kavita bhi keh sakte hain, bas likhta chala gaya.........waise aap sabko bohat miss kiya hain aaj hi lauta hu kokan se, apni gairhazri ke liye aap sab se mafi chahta hu.

Yeh mere shehar ko kya ho gaya
Woh masoom bachpan woh ladakpan kaha kho gaya
Bheed me bhi tanha akayla hu main
Kaha hain woh galiya jinpe khela hu main
Aaj ka bachpan jawani se pehle budha ho gaya

Woh dango ka shor woh mao ki cheekh
Har sadak ke kinare phaila aachal
Phaili nanhi bahe mangti bheek
Har chehra yaha par hain murjha gaya
Kisi ko thoda mila to koi bhookha so gaya

Har ghar me yaha ek berozgaar hain
Yeh shehar jaise mano beemar hain lachar hain
Achchi degree nahi kam aati hain aaj
Arey naukri hi nahi yaha to bikti hain laaj
Har shaks yaha par bikta gaya
Koi kismat ke hatho majboor tha to koi lalchi ho gaya

Woh izzat kaha hain bahu beti ki aaj
Kahi sati ki chita to kahi dahej ki aag
Ma bhi aurat hain yeh bhool jate hain logh
Ladki paida ho to matam manate hain logh
Sharm se hain aaj sar mera jhuk gaya
Jo sapna maine dekha tha sapna hi reh gaya

Na hi koi Mahatma na Tilak hain aaj
Gandi bastiyo me hain dooba mera samaj
Koi mujhko aakhir mera bachpan lauta do
Woh hasta khelta masoom sa shehar lauta do
Woh shehar jisme na koi bhooka ho na mange koi bheekh
Na suhagan ka suhaag ujde na sunaiee de mao ki cheekh
Jaha dharam ke nam par koi na jhagde na hi koi fasad ho
Jaha har raat diwali lage aur har din mano eid ki yaad ho
Phir koi na kahega yeh mere shehar ko kya ho gaya
Woh masoom bachpan woh ladakpan kaha kho gaya

-Sajid Ghayel-


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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 06:02:31 AM »
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Waah Subhan Allah,.
Aate Hi Kamaal Kar Diya Bhai Aapne,.
Great JOb, Ek Haqeeqat Ko Aapne Bakhoobi Se Yahaan Bayaan Kar Diya,.

Subhan Allah,.
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 03:46:11 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid bhai..Zindagi Ki Kuch Sachaiyon ko Alfaazo Mein Dhaala Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 04:08:08 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Wah Wah Ghayal Ji
Kamal kar diya aapne
Bahut khooooob
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2009, 03:35:49 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on June 08, 2009, 03:33:06 PM
Waah bahot khoob Sajid ji,aate hi behatareen peshkash ki hai aapne,awesome poem,welcome back dear

Bohat shukriyaan Kaash for your time and comment
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