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«Reply #15 on: September 20, 2008, 10:17:00 AM »
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apne bhi achcha likha Honey ji

shukriya bhai syyid

shukriya Talat Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: September 20, 2008, 10:39:37 AM »
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Wow Sanjeev ji.... wakayi kaafi achhi tarah se sachhi baat likhi hai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: September 20, 2008, 12:18:49 PM »
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bohot achhe sanjeev ji!
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«Reply #18 on: September 20, 2008, 12:31:44 PM »
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shukriya natural aur sanya
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«Reply #19 on: December 17, 2008, 06:29:11 PM »
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yoindia hai ye, shayraana log yahan aate hain,
kuch pahchan banate hain, kuch pahchan chipate hain,

kuch bikherte hain dardon ke cheente,
kuch hansi ki fuhar laate hain,

bhes badal kar kuch log yahan bhi,
dil pe ghaat lagate hain,

kuch likhte sachchi baaten yahan,
kuch jhuth bol bharmate hain,

kuch log magan bas khud me hi,
kuch log sabhi ko bhaate hain,

kuch khud ka dard dabakar bhi,
auron ko dua, de jaate hain,

kuch log yahan ghar foonk ke bhi,
bujhte deep jalate hain

kuch dost yahan hain aise bhi,
jo dushmani khoob nibhate hain

kuch khwab adhure jeevan ke,
hum aake yahan bun jaate hain,

kuch nagme jhoothi khushiyon ke,
sachche aanson, sun jaate hain,

kuch log paraye ho kar bhi,
kyun apne se ban jaate hain,

kuch log banakar ke apna,
fir apna rang dikhate hain,

aankhon me dekar ke aansu,
"FUNNY" section me jaate hain,

ye jaam shayri ka miyan,
bas yun hi peete jaate hain

hum awara se log yahan,
ek thour thikana pate hain,









Sanjeev bhai-Waah...Waah..
Kahan -kahan chupa rakhey hein aapne apne taraane...yeh kavita pudh kur vaakai dil khush ho gaya.badi napi tuli panktiyaan aur kya laybudh sajaaaya hein.Aksar jub yo pur bhatkte-bhatkate aapki koi khoobsurat rachna padhne ko mil jaati hein,to dil baag-baag huye bina nahi rehta.Bahut hi khoob likha hein.


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«Reply #20 on: December 17, 2008, 06:30:17 PM »
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bahut accha saath diya hein aapne shally ji,honeyrose jiaur bhawna ji.bahut khoob.
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«Reply #21 on: December 17, 2008, 07:20:04 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai Bekarar ji kaya khoob likha hai apne, shally and bhawna apne bahoot acha sath nibhaya hai Bekarar ji ka...nice lines Honey
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«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2009, 06:42:01 AM »
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Sanjeev bhai-Waah...Waah..
Kahan -kahan chupa rakhey hein aapne apne taraane...yeh kavita pudh kur vaakai dil khush ho gaya.badi napi tuli panktiyaan aur kya laybudh sajaaaya hein.Aksar jub yo pur bhatkte-bhatkate aapki koi khoobsurat rachna padhne ko mil jaati hein,to dil baag-baag huye bina nahi rehta.Bahut hi khoob likha hein.



prateek ji aapki inhi kuch baaton se ab tak likhne ka housla barkarar hai....tah-e-dil se shukriya bhai
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«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2009, 06:43:21 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Bekarar ji kaya khoob likha hai apne, shally and bhawna apne bahoot acha sath nibhaya hai Bekarar ji ka...nice lines Honey
shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #24 on: November 27, 2010, 05:43:26 PM »
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waah Sanjeev ji behad achi ghazal likhi hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

likhte vaqt har ehsaas ko mahsoos karke likha aapne.
ye composition aapki ek YAADGAAR composition
lagi hume..har sher naya aur sachha likha gaya hai..

congrats dear...waiting for more compositions 4m u




bahoot shukriya KAASH ji aapne ise padha..pasand kiya..
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