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Ek tarahi ghazal-
(Mujhse milkar udaas bhi ho kya)
[2122 1212 22]
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Dard hi se faqat bani ho kya?
Zindagi! Itni hi buri ho kya?

Hai ye kaisa lagaaw tumse mujhe?
Tum Miri rooh me basi ho kya?

Haal-e-dil to chhipa chuka tha main,
Meri aankhon ko padh gayi ho kya?

Chup si ho, aayi ho yahaan jabse!
Mujhse milkar udaas bhi ho kya?

Apne jazbaat ghonta hai dil,
Dukh na howe agar, khushi ho kya?

Gaanw kabka ujad gaya saahab!
Shehar se laute hi abhi ho kya?

"Dard me muskura rahe ho tum?",
Poochti hai ye bebasi, "ho kya?"

Ho gayi hai, to maan le ghalti!
Teri har baat ab sahi ho kya?

Ashk kaagaz bhigo rahe hai kyun?
'Zaif' ki nazm padh rahi ho kya?

************

दर्द ही से फ़क़त बनी हो क्या?
ज़िंदगी! इतनी ही बुरी हो क्या?

है ये कैसा लगाव तुमसे मुझे?
तुम मिरी रूह में बसी हो क्या?

हाले-दिल तो छुपा चुका था मैं,
मेरी आँखों को पढ़ गयी हो क्या?  

चुप-सी हो, आई हो यहाँ जबसे,
"मुझसे मिलकर उदास भी हो क्या?"

अपने जज़्बात घोंटता है दिल,
दुख न होवे अगर, ख़ुशी हो क्या?

गाँव कबका उजड़ गया साहब!
शहर से लौटे ही अभी हो क्या?

"दर्द में मुस्कुरा रहे हो तुम?"
पूछती है ये बेबसी, "हो क्या?"

हो गई है, तो मान ले ग़लती!
तेरी हर बात अब सही हो क्या?

अश्क काग़ज़ भिगो रहे हैं, क्यूँ?
'ज़ैफ़' की नज़्म पढ़ रही हो क्या?
**************

© Zaif
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2014, 12:23:18 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2014, 12:28:00 AM »
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Dard hi se faqat bani ho kya?
Zindagi! Itni hi buri ho kya?
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Hai ye kaisa lagaaw tumse mujhe?
Tum Miri rooh me basi ho kya?
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Haal-e-dil to chhipa chuka tha main,
Meri aankhon ko padh gayi ho kya?
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Chup si ho, aayi ho yahaan jabse!
Mujhse milkar udaas bhi ho kya?
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Apne jazbaat ghonta hai dil,
Dukh na howe agar, khushi ho kya?
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Gaanw kabka ujad gaya saahab!
Shehar se laute hi abhi ho kya?
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Ashk kaagaz bhigo rahe hai kyun?
'Zaif' ki nazm padh rahi ho kya?
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2014, 01:25:21 AM »
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Zaif Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne bahut khoob bahut umdaa.. badi hi pur asar aur khoobsurat khayaaloN ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhaala hai aapne...

Badi achchi kalaam huyi hai.. Sabhi sher khoob lage... Is khoob kalaam par huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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bahut achhi ghazal !
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Bohat Bohat Khub!!!! Wah Wah!!



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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2014, 02:32:17 PM »
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Dard hi se faqat bani ho kya?
Zindagi! Itni hi buri ho kya?

Ashk kaagaz bhigo rahe hai kyun?
'Zaif' ki nazm padh rahi ho kya?

WAAH WAAH WAAH LAJWAAB GHAZAL ZAIF

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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2014, 05:00:51 PM »
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Quote from: Zaif on March 31, 2014, 12:15:38 AM
Ek tarahi ghazal-
(Mujhse milkar udaas bhi ho kya)
[2122 1212 22]
******************

Dard hi se faqat bani ho kya?
Zindagi! Itni hi buri ho kya?

Hai ye kaisa lagaaw tumse mujhe?
Tum Miri rooh me basi ho kya?

Haal-e-dil to chhipa chuka tha main,
Meri aankhon ko padh gayi ho kya?

Chup si ho, aayi ho yahaan jabse!
Mujhse milkar udaas bhi ho kya?

Apne jazbaat ghonta hai dil,
Dukh na howe agar, khushi ho kya?

Gaanw kabka ujad gaya saahab!
Shehar se laute hi abhi ho kya?

"Dard me muskura rahe ho tum?",
Poochti hai ye bebasi, "ho kya?"

Ho gayi hai, to maan le ghalti!
Teri har baat ab sahi ho kya?

Ashk kaagaz bhigo rahe hai kyun?
'Zaif' ki nazm padh rahi ho kya?

************

दर्द ही से फ़क़त बनी हो क्या?
ज़िंदगी! इतनी ही बुरी हो क्या?

है ये कैसा लगाव तुमसे मुझे?
तुम मिरी रूह में बसी हो क्या?

हाले-दिल तो छुपा चुका था मैं,
मेरी आँखों को पढ़ गयी हो क्या? 

चुप-सी हो, आई हो यहाँ जबसे,
"मुझसे मिलकर उदास भी हो क्या?"

अपने जज़्बात घोंटता है दिल,
दुख न होवे अगर, ख़ुशी हो क्या?

गाँव कबका उजड़ गया साहब!
शहर से लौटे ही अभी हो क्या?

"दर्द में मुस्कुरा रहे हो तुम?"
पूछती है ये बेबसी, "हो क्या?"

हो गई है, तो मान ले ग़लती!
तेरी हर बात अब सही हो क्या?

अश्क काग़ज़ भिगो रहे हैं, क्यूँ?
'ज़ैफ़' की नज़्म पढ़ रही हो क्या?
**************

© Zaif


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 31, 2014, 06:20:07 PM »
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खूब .....बहुत खूब....
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2014, 01:20:17 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Zaif bhai, ye sher bahut achhe lage:

Haal-e-dil to chhipa chuka tha main,
Meri aankhon ko padh gayi ho kya?

Ashk kaagaz bhigo rahe hai kyun?
'Zaif' ki nazm padh rahi ho kya?
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2014, 01:38:12 AM »
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wah wah
behad khoobsurat....
lajawaab, behad umda....
very nice...
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2014, 09:20:36 AM »
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Ap sabhi dosto ka tahe dil se shukriya. Usual Smile
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