Zamana aur hum...!!

by Talat on December 12, 2007, 11:06:29 AM
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Apne haalaat se nazar churane waale kuch log
Suna hai mere haal par roz hansa karte hain

Ghum-e-dil main zaroori nahin ashkon ka bahana
Muskurane waale, ashk ankhon main piya karte hain

Zindagi ka bojh uthaate hain woh sadiyon tak, aur
Jeene waale, kuch pal main sadiyan jiya karte hain

Keh gaye the woh, silsile na band ho mulaqaton ka
Ab woh aksar hume khwaabon main mila karte hain

Yeh kaun sa dastoor hai masihaayi ka
Khud hi dete hain zakhm, khud hi sila karte hain !!
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2007, 11:18:40 AM »
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Simple to understand... and so so Meaningful..
Excellent work Talat... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2007, 11:20:34 AM »
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Tallu

Bahut sahi !
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2007, 11:35:54 AM »
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Thanks alot Shikha...thank you Rajbir.

I have modified the last sher !
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2007, 05:22:30 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB TALAT..SEEDHE-SAADHE AKSHARO MEIN GEHRI BAAT LIKHI HAI..VERY NICE..
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2007, 11:01:54 AM »
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wah...tareef karu to kaise karu....meri to bolti band ho gayi...

maan gaye
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2007, 11:05:51 AM »
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Beautiful.. Talat ji bahut khoob
khas taur pe yeh line bahut achi lagi
Ghum-e-dil main zaroori nahin ashkon ka bahana
Muskurane waale, ashk ankhon main piya karte hain

Quote from: Talat on December 12, 2007, 11:06:29 AM
Apne haalaat se nazar churane waale kuch log
Suna hai mere haal par roz hansa karte hain

Ghum-e-dil main zaroori nahin ashkon ka bahana
Muskurane waale, ashk ankhon main piya karte hain

Zindagi ka bojh uthaate hain woh sadiyon tak, aur
Jeene waale, kuch pal main sadiyan jiya karte hain

Keh gaye the woh, silsile na band ho mulaqaton ka
Ab woh aksar hume khwaabon main mila karte hain

Yeh kaun sa dastoor hai masihaayi ka
Khud hi dete hain zakhm, khud hi sila karte hain !!
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2007, 05:20:47 PM »
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Kya baat hai! Bahut khub talatji..
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2007, 10:31:02 AM »
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Khwaish, Sam, Mask and Ishpreet..aapka bohot bohot shukriya ki aapko ye poem pasand aayi..thanks a ton...
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«Reply #9 on: December 17, 2007, 11:56:24 AM »
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realy awasome.. simply perfect lines.. wll done Talat Di
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2007, 10:05:15 AM »
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Thank You so much Divs Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: September 22, 2008, 06:48:45 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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