<>*Zamane k naam kar gaye*<>

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<>*Zamane k naam kar gaye*<>

Aankhon se chhalakar  palkon pe ruk gaye
Ashk mere bhi mere dard se sahem gaye

Sahem kar ruke mere rukhsaron pe kuch pal
Fir andekha kar wo bhi mujhe tanha kar gaye

Girte rahe har bar jab bhi sambhalna chaha humne
Log aate jaate hum eek nai thokar dekar chale gaye

Har apne paraye ko samjhke apna saathi hum
Unke gamon me khudko uljhate chale gaye

Tareefein sunte rahe apni hum har kisi ki zabaan se
Apni  ruuh ki ek hi awaaz se sare bharam dhul gaye

Jalaye rakhe humne chiraag auron ki ummeedon k
Ye karne me apne hi ghar k sare chiraag bujha gaye

Jitna beeta hai bht hi achcha beeta hai zindagi ka safar
Jo bacha wo bhi ab hum zamane k naam kar gaye…
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2010, 12:24:26 PM »
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good one anu-di.... Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 16, 2010, 09:33:58 AM
<>*Zamane k naam kar gaye*<>

Aankhon se chhalakar  palkon pe ruk gaye
Ashk mere bhi mere dard se sahem gaye

Sahem kar ruke mere rukhsaron pe kuch pal
Fir andekha kar wo bhi mujhe tanha kar gaye

Girte rahe har bar jab bhi sambhalna chaha humne
Log aate jaate hum eek nai thokar dekar chale gaye

Har apne paraye ko samjhke apna saathi hum
Unke gamon me khudko uljhate chale gaye

Tareefein sunte rahe apni hum har kisi ki zabaan se
Apni  ruuh ki ek hi awaaz se sare bharam dhul gaye

Jalaye rakhe humne chiraag auron ki ummeedon k
Ye karne me apne hi ghar k sare chiraag bujha gaye

Jitna beeta hai bht hi achcha beeta hai zindagi ka safar
Jo bacha wo bhi ab hum zamane k naam kar gaye…


Kasak Ji ... aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhuu gaye... bahut umda rahi  aapki peshkash... dil se daad hazir hai... aise likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2010, 04:57:34 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        KASAK....DIL KI JI.....


KHUD MARTE RAHE AURON KE LIYE JEETE RAHE
YEH ZINDAGI APNI "ZAMANE KE NAAM KAR GAYE"....
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2010, 07:19:48 AM »
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wah Kasak ji... wah... bahut achcha likha hai aapne... har ek sher ek se badh ke ek hai.. bas padhta hi raha aur har sher dil me ghar kar gaya.. bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

hamaare aansuon ka rishta yun humse ban gaya,
aankhon se behta raha aur dil ko bheego gaya,

bheege huye dil ke mere dhadkane bhi chup si hain,
tumhaara hi ghum tha wo jo ghaayal hume kar gaya,

aankh bhi geele se hain, honth bhi bheege se hain,
aankhon ka hi paani tha jo honthon ko bheego gaya,

aansuon ko samjha tha moti, pyaar ko samjha tha dil,
jise humne samjha tha apna, wahi humein thukra gaya,

kehte tum main hoon tumhaari, mujhse tumko pyaar hai,
tumhara hi ghum hai jo mere har din ko raat kar gaya,

tumse hi roshan kiya tha apne ghar ka har chiraag,
tum nahi to kuch nahi, har chiraag bhi ab bujh gaya,

waqt ka ye khel hai sab, khela bhi usne khub hai,
gairon ko apne kareeb laake, apno ko paraaya kar gaya,

kuch bachi si saanse thi, kuch ruke se dhadkan bhi,
tumhaare jaane se dekho tumhaara "Hriday" hi mar gaya....
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2010, 07:30:40 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 16, 2010, 09:33:58 AM
<>*Zamane k naam kar gaye*<>

Aankhon se chhalakar  palkon pe ruk gaye
Ashk mere bhi mere dard se sahem gaye

Sahem kar ruke mere rukhsaron pe kuch pal
Fir andekha kar wo bhi mujhe tanha kar gaye

Girte rahe har bar jab bhi sambhalna chaha humne
Log aate jaate hum eek nai thokar dekar chale gaye

Har apne paraye ko samjhke apna saathi hum
Unke gamon me khudko uljhate chale gaye

Tareefein sunte rahe apni hum har kisi ki zabaan se
Apni  ruuh ki ek hi awaaz se sare bharam dhul gaye

Jalaye rakhe humne chiraag auron ki ummeedon k
Ye karne me apne hi ghar k sare chiraag bujha gaye

Jitna beeta hai bht hi achcha beeta hai zindagi ka safar
Jo bacha wo bhi ab hum zamane k naam kar gaye…


Bahut khoosurat peshkash hai aap ki Anamika Ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2010, 07:32:48 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 17, 2010, 07:19:48 AM
wah Kasak ji... wah... bahut achcha likha hai aapne... har ek sher ek se badh ke ek hai.. bas padhta hi raha aur har sher dil me ghar kar gaya.. bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

hamaare aansuon ka rishta yun humse ban gaya,
aankhon se behta raha aur dil ko bheego gaya,

bheege huye dil ke mere dhadkane bhi chup si hain,
tumhaara hi ghum tha wo jo ghaayal hume kar gaya,

aankh bhi geele se hain, honth bhi bheege se hain,
aankhon ka hi paani tha jo honthon ko bheego gaya,

aansuon ko samjha tha moti, pyaar ko samjha tha dil,
jise humne samjha tha apna, wahi humein thukra gaya,

kehte tum main hoon tumhaari, mujhse tumko pyaar hai,
tumhara hi ghum hai jo mere har din ko raat kar gaya,

tumse hi roshan kiya tha apne ghar ka har chiraag,
tum nahi to kuch nahi, har chiraag bhi ab bujh gaya,

waqt ka ye khel hai sab, khela bhi usne khub hai,
gairon ko apne kareeb laake, apno ko paraaya kar gaya,

kuch bachi si saanse thi, kuch ruke se dhadkan bhi,
tumhaare jaane se dekho tumhaara "Hriday" hi mar gaya....

Ab tera kya kahna Kapil
Har adaa hai bas Qaatil
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2010, 07:36:22 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 17, 2010, 07:19:48 AM
wah Kasak ji... wah... bahut achcha likha hai aapne... har ek sher ek se badh ke ek hai.. bas padhta hi raha aur har sher dil me ghar kar gaya.. bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

hamaare aansuon ka rishta yun humse ban gaya,
aankhon se behta raha aur dil ko bheego gaya,

bheege huye dil ke mere dhadkane bhi chup si hain,
tumhaara hi ghum tha wo jo ghaayal hume kar gaya,

aankh bhi geele se hain, honth bhi bheege se hain,
aankhon ka hi paani tha jo honthon ko bheego gaya,

aansuon ko samjha tha moti, pyaar ko samjha tha dil,
jise humne samjha tha apna, wahi humein thukra gaya,

kehte tum main hoon tumhaari, mujhse tumko pyaar hai,
tumhara hi ghum hai jo mere har din ko raat kar gaya,

tumse hi roshan kiya tha apne ghar ka har chiraag,
tum nahi to kuch nahi, har chiraag bhi ab bujh gaya,

waqt ka ye khel hai sab, khela bhi usne khub hai,
gairon ko apne kareeb laake, apno ko paraaya kar gaya,

kuch bachi si saanse thi, kuch ruke se dhadkan bhi,
tumhaare jaane se dekho tumhaara "Hriday" hi mar gaya....

kapil........ispe kuch nahin kahungi..... sad7
no words....for this one....
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last stanza ....hmmmm..... tearyeyed

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2010, 07:38:41 AM »
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hehehehehe... thank you so much Rajesh ji... aapke taarif ka ye style bahut pasnad aaya.... bahut apna sa laga... thank u so much...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 17, 2010, 07:32:48 AM
Ab tera kya kahna Kapil
Har adaa hai bas Qaatil
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2010, 07:39:41 AM »
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taaliyon k liye thanks... !!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 17, 2010, 07:36:22 AM
kapil........ispe kuch nahin kahungi..... sad7
no words....for this one....
 sad11
last stanza ....hmmmm..... tearyeyed

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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suna he tere sath rehene wale tujhe aaina kehete he
shayad isiliye todkar tukde hazar kiya gaya tere dil ko~
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Quote from: klaskar on September 17, 2010, 07:38:41 AM
hehehehehe... thank you so much Rajesh ji... aapke taarif ka ye style bahut pasnad aaya.... bahut apna sa laga... thank u so much...!!!


Are Kapil ye apnapan to hai jo hame yahan kheench laataa hai

Tho.da aansuu apni or se

Aansuon se kaha mehfil mein na aakar mera mazaak u.daaya karo
Tanhaiyon mein aakar mere dil ko tho.da rahat pahuchaaya karo
Aansuu ta.dap kar bole ki mehfil mein tera mazaak nahin u.data hoon
Main to bas chala aataa hoon jab mehfil mein tumhe tanha paata hoon
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2010, 11:31:00 PM »
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Wah abhi ...... kya baat hai ...

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 17, 2010, 07:50:09 AM
suna he tere sath rehene wale tujhe aaina kehete he
shayad isiliye todkar tukde hazar kiya gaya tere dil ko~
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2010, 11:32:25 PM »
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Kasak ......very touching yaar.....

bhut hi khoob ........

Kapil ....... Gud reply .. infect very very gud.....

Both r doing really fantastic work ...

Keep it up !!!!!!!

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Quote from: neelgold on September 19, 2010, 11:31:00 PM
Wah abhi ...... kya baat hai ...


thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx neel ji aap ki wapsi ka mujhe behad intajaar tha

ab mai b jaldi hi wapas join karta hu regulary


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